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9/3/2017 c3 Guest
This is awesome
1/11/2016 c6 ivanganev1992
Ch 6

It's too much. Sorry not my taste.
And no real translation.
5/15/2015 c16 2Team Emerald Leader
Not bad I can't wait for the rewrite!

- Team Emerald Leader
4/23/2015 c15 Team Emerald Leader
Ok one question. are you accepting OC's? If you are heres mine. (FYI it's ok if you aren't or don't accept it I like this story)
name:AJ Maple (May and max's last name) (it's my real name except maple & not from the anime)
Pokemon team:Mega swampert, blaziken, Sceptile, linoone, (if you allow it {sometimes Himself in his umbreon form}), (sometimes)Shiny(or not your choice) Latios and latias (both shiny if you want), Gallade, and gardevoir.
Moves:Swampert:Hydro Cannon, surf, ice beam, earthquake. Blaziken:Blast burn, blaze kick, sky uppercut, brave bird. Sceptile: frenzy plant, earthquake, leaf blade, and dual chop. Linoone:Retaliate, strength, ice beam, and thunderbolt. Aj/umbreon:Dream eater, psychic, dark pulse, and shadow ball.
both latis:Dragon pulse, thunderbolt, psychic, and ice beam. Gallade and gardevoir: Psychic, protect, Moonblast, and shadow ball.
I'll tell the rest if you pm me back. Anyway great story so far Good luck on the next chapter.
1/23/2015 c1 1Craniutorium
Very emotionally moving! Descriptive, smart, sad. Very well written! Keep it up!
12/6/2014 c11 1embracingthecringe
Cool. I think you're right that Honey is like Tay, so be careful not to make them the exact same at times.
11/25/2014 c10 1RylCraig
*Looks at review list* Hmm... okaay... a shiny Mudkip and a guest. Make that a shiny Mudkip, a guest, and a shiny Umbreon.

(You know very well why I am reviewing)

Question: Are you accepting OCs?
11/20/2014 c10 1embracingthecringe
Way to get a badge! Congrats to all.
11/15/2014 c9 embracingthecringe
Nicely done. Tay really did a number on that guy. And yay, Avis is here!

QOTD: Dazzling gleam?
9/24/2014 c7 embracingthecringe
Nicely done chapter. For the QOTD- I believe that I am very much like a Gourgeist. Don't know why, bt I feel like it's extremely derpy and serious at the same time.
9/3/2014 c6 embracingthecringe
Sad at the end. I agree that the song is the saddest Pokemon song ever. QOTD-No clue. We'll find out I guess.
8/28/2014 c5 Guest
Yayay it's awesome is there more

8/18/2014 c5 Guest
Good story
8/17/2014 c5 embracingthecringe
This is kind of depressing. I like it though (in that depressing story type of way). Everyone's reactions are very similar however. But that's okay! I can overlook it for now.

What Pikachu must be going through though... Oh man.

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