for The Time After9/3/2017 c3 Guest
This is awesome
This is awesome
4/23/2015 c15 Team Emerald Leader
Ok one question. are you accepting OC's? If you are heres mine. (FYI it's ok if you aren't or don't accept it I like this story)
name:AJ Maple (May and max's last name) (it's my real name except maple & not from the anime)
age:15
gender:Male
Pokemon team:Mega swampert, blaziken, Sceptile, linoone, (if you allow it {sometimes Himself in his umbreon form}), (sometimes)Shiny(or not your choice) Latios and latias (both shiny if you want), Gallade, and gardevoir.
Moves:Swampert:Hydro Cannon, surf, ice beam, earthquake. Blaziken:Blast burn, blaze kick, sky uppercut, brave bird. Sceptile: frenzy plant, earthquake, leaf blade, and dual chop. Linoone:Retaliate, strength, ice beam, and thunderbolt. Aj/umbreon:Dream eater, psychic, dark pulse, and shadow ball.
both latis:Dragon pulse, thunderbolt, psychic, and ice beam. Gallade and gardevoir: Psychic, protect, Moonblast, and shadow ball.
I'll tell the rest if you pm me back. Anyway great story so far Good luck on the next chapter.
Ok one question. are you accepting OC's? If you are heres mine. (FYI it's ok if you aren't or don't accept it I like this story)
name:AJ Maple (May and max's last name) (it's my real name except maple & not from the anime)
age:15
gender:Male
Pokemon team:Mega swampert, blaziken, Sceptile, linoone, (if you allow it {sometimes Himself in his umbreon form}), (sometimes)Shiny(or not your choice) Latios and latias (both shiny if you want), Gallade, and gardevoir.
Moves:Swampert:Hydro Cannon, surf, ice beam, earthquake. Blaziken:Blast burn, blaze kick, sky uppercut, brave bird. Sceptile: frenzy plant, earthquake, leaf blade, and dual chop. Linoone:Retaliate, strength, ice beam, and thunderbolt. Aj/umbreon:Dream eater, psychic, dark pulse, and shadow ball.
both latis:Dragon pulse, thunderbolt, psychic, and ice beam. Gallade and gardevoir: Psychic, protect, Moonblast, and shadow ball.
I'll tell the rest if you pm me back. Anyway great story so far Good luck on the next chapter.
1/23/2015 c1 
1Craniutorium
Very emotionally moving! Descriptive, smart, sad. Very well written! Keep it up!
1CraniutoriumVery emotionally moving! Descriptive, smart, sad. Very well written! Keep it up!
12/6/2014 c11 1embracingthecringe
Cool. I think you're right that Honey is like Tay, so be careful not to make them the exact same at times.
1embracingthecringeCool. I think you're right that Honey is like Tay, so be careful not to make them the exact same at times.
11/25/2014 c10 1RylCraig
*Looks at review list* Hmm... okaay... a shiny Mudkip and a guest. Make that a shiny Mudkip, a guest, and a shiny Umbreon.
(You know very well why I am reviewing)
Question: Are you accepting OCs?
1RylCraig*Looks at review list* Hmm... okaay... a shiny Mudkip and a guest. Make that a shiny Mudkip, a guest, and a shiny Umbreon.
(You know very well why I am reviewing)
Question: Are you accepting OCs?
11/15/2014 c9 embracingthecringe
Nicely done. Tay really did a number on that guy. And yay, Avis is here!
QOTD: Dazzling gleam?
Nicely done. Tay really did a number on that guy. And yay, Avis is here!
QOTD: Dazzling gleam?
9/24/2014 c7 embracingthecringe
Nicely done chapter. For the QOTD- I believe that I am very much like a Gourgeist. Don't know why, bt I feel like it's extremely derpy and serious at the same time.
Nicely done chapter. For the QOTD- I believe that I am very much like a Gourgeist. Don't know why, bt I feel like it's extremely derpy and serious at the same time.
9/3/2014 c6 embracingthecringe
Sad at the end. I agree that the song is the saddest Pokemon song ever. QOTD-No clue. We'll find out I guess.
Sad at the end. I agree that the song is the saddest Pokemon song ever. QOTD-No clue. We'll find out I guess.
8/28/2014 c5 Guest
Yayay it's awesome is there more
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Yayay it's awesome is there more
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8/18/2014 c5 Guest
Good story
Good story
8/17/2014 c5 embracingthecringe
This is kind of depressing. I like it though (in that depressing story type of way). Everyone's reactions are very similar however. But that's okay! I can overlook it for now.
What Pikachu must be going through though... Oh man.
This is kind of depressing. I like it though (in that depressing story type of way). Everyone's reactions are very similar however. But that's okay! I can overlook it for now.
What Pikachu must be going through though... Oh man.