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1/18/2015 c4 camewtwo
Good chapter continue
9/16/2014 c1 3Sodium Acetate
Grammar is bad, but not so bad that I couldn't understand it. The story is written in the past tense, but some of the verbs aren't conjugated correctly. If you take the time to proofread, I'm sure that this story would be awesome (Doesn't mean that it isn't great. It is.)!
9/14/2014 c4 79Jane Glass
It's pretty good, the idea and all. :) It's got a lot of mistakes (mostly in the A/N's), but not so bad that I couldn't read it. Still, it could be improved. If you like the way it's written is also what matters, but if you want fans then I'd try to do better. I know I'm not being helpful, saying to do better but not being specific about what you need to get fixed or improved, but I don't know what to say... Well, maybe be sure to look over your work after a day of finishing it, Google how to become a better writer, I don't know...getting a Beta-Reader might help. Anyway, one thing to do is keep writing! :D
7/6/2014 c3 18iamthesea
thrilling. hope to see more.
6/13/2014 c2 iamthesea
hope you continue
5/22/2014 c1 iamthesea
I hope you contuinue to write this story. I seems interesting.

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