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6/29/2016 c1 46The Urban Spaceman
This is my review-back after your review of 'Running To You', as I'm not familiar with the fandoms of your other stories.

Great idea, crossing Marvel with DC and having LexCorp design the Iron Patriot armour. Even more hilarious would have been Tony Stark's reaction to seeing it. I just hope your Lex is the REAL Lex Luthor, and not the annoying, over-the-top, Joker-esque Alexander Luthor as played by Jesse Eisenberg. I can certainly take your Lex more seriously than BvS.

RIP Agent Sitwell; so Good he was actually Evil. At least with mashups like this you don't need to pay too much attention to in-universe continuity. I hope your Sitwell goes on to lead a long and productive life of not being squished like a bug on a windshield.
5/23/2014 c1 27Angelus-v1
You have a great beginning here. You did a good job setting up what Eric is feeling and going through at the gravesite and the inclusion of the minor flashback was a good choice. Since you're including him in another story, you may want to give him a grand entrance, make it memorable and keep up the good work you did here.
5/23/2014 c1 Scam Man
A brilliant one shot done in honor of the brave men and women of the U.S armed forces. Also, I'm surprised you chose to incorporate S.H.I.E.L.D when the DC universe has A.R.G.U.S. Will they be competing intelligence agencies or will we have something like Captain America 2 where the latter will replace the former after a similar incident? Other than that nice job and keep it up.

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