for When Time Stops1/10/2023 c42 reseh
I’m not sure how i stumbled across this story, but i’m glad i did. i really enjoyed it. Thanks for posting!
I’m not sure how i stumbled across this story, but i’m glad i did. i really enjoyed it. Thanks for posting!
9/16/2022 c28 Greg
What is this Minstery you keep mentioning? No such thing exists.
What is this Minstery you keep mentioning? No such thing exists.
9/15/2022 c8 Greg
You've confused me. He told Leonor he was 15 as of 3 days ago. That would mean this is between 4th and 5th year. Yet in this chapter you reference Umbridge as a teacher. She taught in 5th year. He hasn't had her yet! He hasn't even met her yet, as he didn't until his trial at the Ministry for defending himself from the Dementors.
You've confused me. He told Leonor he was 15 as of 3 days ago. That would mean this is between 4th and 5th year. Yet in this chapter you reference Umbridge as a teacher. She taught in 5th year. He hasn't had her yet! He hasn't even met her yet, as he didn't until his trial at the Ministry for defending himself from the Dementors.
4/12/2021 c42 Kris
Highly Enjoyable!
Highly Enjoyable!
11/13/2020 c42 mumphie
A very interesting and intriguing story. Just wondering if this horrible future was only/mostly Great Britain? Since the Goblins worked with Harry, he didn't lose anything from his vault(s)? What about Remus, Dobby, the Twins? What happened to those who portkeyed out? Was Hermione one who tried to tell Dumbles about the grand escape? Did she stay and what happened to those he knew? Why didn't Harry just finish off everyone at Voldie's party? That way, Draco could have gotten more of his 'stuff' from the house and perhaps claimed the Lordship, even if he wasn't going to stay.
A very interesting and intriguing story. Just wondering if this horrible future was only/mostly Great Britain? Since the Goblins worked with Harry, he didn't lose anything from his vault(s)? What about Remus, Dobby, the Twins? What happened to those who portkeyed out? Was Hermione one who tried to tell Dumbles about the grand escape? Did she stay and what happened to those he knew? Why didn't Harry just finish off everyone at Voldie's party? That way, Draco could have gotten more of his 'stuff' from the house and perhaps claimed the Lordship, even if he wasn't going to stay.
10/4/2020 c42 
3WhiteElfElder
The only way that could have been more is if the girl had green eyes and deep red hair.
3WhiteElfElderThe only way that could have been more is if the girl had green eyes and deep red hair.
10/4/2020 c28 WhiteElfElder
Too bad Albus did not loose it enough to draw a wand, and be disarmed by Harry...losing the loyalty of The Wand.
Too bad Albus did not loose it enough to draw a wand, and be disarmed by Harry...losing the loyalty of The Wand.
10/4/2020 c27 WhiteElfElder
Why do I get the feeling that it was the Princess that was the cause of death for Leonor's family?
Why do I get the feeling that it was the Princess that was the cause of death for Leonor's family?
10/4/2020 c1 WhiteElfElder
What happened to the broom and cloak, did Harry lose them, where they still in his grip, or did they get left on the forest floor?
What happened to the broom and cloak, did Harry lose them, where they still in his grip, or did they get left on the forest floor?
8/22/2020 c42 3LuvIshida1985
Oh my goodness did I live this story! It was so good. I loved the whole concept from start to finish. ️
3LuvIshida1985Oh my goodness did I live this story! It was so good. I loved the whole concept from start to finish. ️
7/10/2020 c42 rebaine mira
this was one hell of a bouitifeal story you had me crying when drago was going to die or when Harry's father was going to sacrifice from self to his child lover I loved it it was one damn of wonderful reading for me I hop you will continue that way and maybe publish your own stories you seem to have the potential to
this was one hell of a bouitifeal story you had me crying when drago was going to die or when Harry's father was going to sacrifice from self to his child lover I loved it it was one damn of wonderful reading for me I hop you will continue that way and maybe publish your own stories you seem to have the potential to
3/30/2020 c42 Hannah42992
This was a well written and thought out story. Full of twists and turns. Your character and plot development is some of the better that I've seen. I've read hundreds of stories and that fact that I called off work to finish it in one setting says a lot. Great job!
This was a well written and thought out story. Full of twists and turns. Your character and plot development is some of the better that I've seen. I've read hundreds of stories and that fact that I called off work to finish it in one setting says a lot. Great job!