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11/8/2014 c42 acciofangirl
OH. MY. GOD. THIS WAS THE BEST FANFICTION I'D EVER READ ILY AND THIS WAS AMAZING, BUT WHY DID U END IT SO EARLY?! I WANT A SEQUEL! PLEASE! ANYWAYS I LOVED IT AND UR AMAZING
11/8/2014 c42 17Gleas
A bit morose at the end and strangely hopeful and content but loved it nonetheless.
11/8/2014 c37 Gleas
For someone who has trouble with being soft and supporting, Zyren did a remarkably good job...
11/8/2014 c31 Gleas
Gotta love Luna
11/8/2014 c18 Gleas
As much as I hate the git called Ron... poor him lol
11/4/2014 c42 tommyboynv
Great story. I liked the unique take on vampires in the Wizarding world you presented. Of course learning more about how things operate, like if they are undead or "dead" how does one become pregnant...just curiousities like that. I was also curious how Neville managed to move on a nd grow. You spent time developing his character's growing independence and strength, then he is off and dead?

Anyhow, I thought it was a great story. Keep up the great work!
10/30/2014 c42 Wishfull-star
this story was awesome:) thank you for writing it:)
10/23/2014 c42 R
Excellent, thank you very much! (R!)
10/25/2014 c42 2ToxicSushi
Great story! I really enjoyed your twist on something that is done quite often. I would have liked to see a little more romance and build up of the relationships, a little more sexual tension if you will, between our boys. But otherwise I really enjoyed the threesome. I did, however, feel like there is a bit of a loose end with Harry's mortal "friends." I would have liked to see Ron and Hermione's fate and also their reaction to finding out about Harry. though I know this wasn't a vital part of the story, I still felt like I was missing that. Maybe as part of the end, just as a quick visit. Also, I you have a few typos that distracted and broke up the flow fo the story, such as misuse of the wrong word or repeated/ missing words in a sentence. I felt like I had to assume or guess at what you were really meaning to type. Anywho, enough of my blathering on. Thanks for your work on this story, very enjoyable! I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
10/20/2014 c42 Guest
please please write a sequel!
10/21/2014 c15 elenglynn
I'm actually not that much into slash, but I don't really mind either. Depends on how it's written and I like your story. The only thing I wonder is... why is it that in those "vampire"-like stories Harry always ends up with long hair/ponytail? Well, I just imagine it otherwise. Don't really like long hair for boys.

That said, this is actually the first of those "vampireblabla" stories I finished, well done. :)
10/18/2014 c42 autumngold
Thank you for the wonderful ending to your incredible story! I love that Harry was able to save someone just as Leonor saved him. Loved your story!
10/18/2014 c42 Guest
I love this story and will look forward to anything else that you may do in the future !

The Crimson Mage.
10/19/2014 c1 2Moonlight Cosmic Angel
so is this a Harry/someone or a Harry/someone/someone? i mean is harry in a relationship with 1 or 2 people?
10/18/2014 c6 10Fabianadat
Hello!

This story was fantastic. Have a good time no read a fic so well written. Everything was well tied and connected. How loose pieces falling into place naturally. I enjoyed the presentation of the kingdom where Leonor came, not counting the small tips sobres the other kingdoms in existence. And Harry ... their characterization before and after his change of Mortal / Immortal was perfect. The personification of his own characters was stupendous. In short, I loved your story.

Kisses!

PS: sorry if there are errors, but I am Brazilian and I am writing this comet for a translator Portuguese / English.
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