2/16/2020 c42 3Heksy
What an amazing story, though I wonder about one thing:
whatever happened to Chaymn?
What an amazing story, though I wonder about one thing:
whatever happened to Chaymn?
2/15/2020 c42 2Lightseed
Thus was such a stunning story! I loved the Immortal concept! It reminded me a bit of Faerie Courts and Lore! Well done! I myself am very fond of writing about Immortals, long lived beings, and Others! This called to me! Again, very well done!
~ Lightseed
Thus was such a stunning story! I loved the Immortal concept! It reminded me a bit of Faerie Courts and Lore! Well done! I myself am very fond of writing about Immortals, long lived beings, and Others! This called to me! Again, very well done!
~ Lightseed
1/17/2020 c1 Pixie8859
Chapter 1 is so full of spelling errors I'm having a hard time figuring out what the proper word should be. Spellcheck is actually available in over 50 languages now. Why wasn't it used?
Chapter 1 is so full of spelling errors I'm having a hard time figuring out what the proper word should be. Spellcheck is actually available in over 50 languages now. Why wasn't it used?
9/3/2019 c10 8HarryPotterFangirl85
Well, I think I’ve reached my limit on this story. I like to read stories that are different and not always the same kind of thing, but I’ve reached the halfway point on this story and my uneasy feeling I had with this story has not gone away.
Well, I think I’ve reached my limit on this story. I like to read stories that are different and not always the same kind of thing, but I’ve reached the halfway point on this story and my uneasy feeling I had with this story has not gone away.
2/3/2019 c23 Matt
Did you ever pay the slightest bit of attention in your English classes? Because your spelling, grammar, and punctuation are all HIDEOUSLY bad! However, I actually enjoy reading your stories. If only you had a beta to help you with your English language issues.
Did you ever pay the slightest bit of attention in your English classes? Because your spelling, grammar, and punctuation are all HIDEOUSLY bad! However, I actually enjoy reading your stories. If only you had a beta to help you with your English language issues.
12/13/2018 c42 WyteWolf91
I actually really liked this one. The end was a little anti-climatic for me but that's just me lol. I really enjoyed and couldn't stop reading it till it was done.
I actually really liked this one. The end was a little anti-climatic for me but that's just me lol. I really enjoyed and couldn't stop reading it till it was done.
10/21/2018 c42 Guest
Absolutely perfect ending to an awesome, well developed story. Loved it loved it!
You took the cliché right out of the 'creature inheritance/multiple mates' cliché. One of the best one of this genre I've found minus the odd bit of missed proofreading - and it's fanfic so if you can't overlook a couple typos and grammar things you should really not be reading it anyway right?
Bravo!
Absolutely perfect ending to an awesome, well developed story. Loved it loved it!
You took the cliché right out of the 'creature inheritance/multiple mates' cliché. One of the best one of this genre I've found minus the odd bit of missed proofreading - and it's fanfic so if you can't overlook a couple typos and grammar things you should really not be reading it anyway right?
Bravo!
7/25/2018 c23 DRINKnotTHINK13
I love the story; Harry‘s attitude is cool!
Uhm, it’s probably a bit late to ask this, but wasn‘t Harry expelled in the prologue?
I love the story; Harry‘s attitude is cool!
Uhm, it’s probably a bit late to ask this, but wasn‘t Harry expelled in the prologue?
4/25/2018 c42 krnegi91
Awesome story! And wonderful ending :) definitely a recommended read
Spoilerish.. BEWARE!
But they might be a time discrepancy with the epilogue...
Earlier it was clear that 1yr in mortal realm 60yrs in shadow realm. (A MONTH BEING 10YRS IN THE SHADOW REALM)
But the epilogue incorrectly mentions it as 10yrs 1yr .
So, HP is basically over 15,000yrs old at this point...lol
Awesome story! And wonderful ending :) definitely a recommended read
Spoilerish.. BEWARE!
But they might be a time discrepancy with the epilogue...
Earlier it was clear that 1yr in mortal realm 60yrs in shadow realm. (A MONTH BEING 10YRS IN THE SHADOW REALM)
But the epilogue incorrectly mentions it as 10yrs 1yr .
So, HP is basically over 15,000yrs old at this point...lol
1/15/2018 c1 6bakezorishoes
I'm kind of sad, I wanted to see his development in the shadow realm and watch his relationship with zyren form. good story my friend
I'm kind of sad, I wanted to see his development in the shadow realm and watch his relationship with zyren form. good story my friend