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1daithi4377
Hmm interesting...since Harry never used his wand and it was accidental magic how did they know he used magic? Hopefully the vamp grabbed his broom I would hate to see Harry lose the last piece of Sirius he had.
1daithi4377Hmm interesting...since Harry never used his wand and it was accidental magic how did they know he used magic? Hopefully the vamp grabbed his broom I would hate to see Harry lose the last piece of Sirius he had.
7/7/2014 c14 Rinky1991
Quite an interesting chapter, I like when trips in other worlds or something for training and others are cut short but maybe you could involve more about what happened in the ten years, but maybe you planned on doing just that through flashbacks or mentions in coming chapters, I'm happy that the end of this chapter seems to be foreshadowing that even if he's immortal he won't be too superpowered and will meet something or someone which/who can endanger him, I'm excited to see what that will be.
Quite an interesting chapter, I like when trips in other worlds or something for training and others are cut short but maybe you could involve more about what happened in the ten years, but maybe you planned on doing just that through flashbacks or mentions in coming chapters, I'm happy that the end of this chapter seems to be foreshadowing that even if he's immortal he won't be too superpowered and will meet something or someone which/who can endanger him, I'm excited to see what that will be.
7/3/2014 c13 autumngold
Excellent update! I am so glad that Harry is finally getting some answers to his questions. However, it doesn't seem like it is a good idea to have Severus be one of his sponsors? After all, the man blames him for Lily's death. Hopefully he won't be as hateful to Harry now. Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait to find out what you have planned for Harry, and Zyren, next!
Excellent update! I am so glad that Harry is finally getting some answers to his questions. However, it doesn't seem like it is a good idea to have Severus be one of his sponsors? After all, the man blames him for Lily's death. Hopefully he won't be as hateful to Harry now. Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait to find out what you have planned for Harry, and Zyren, next!
6/30/2014 c12 adenoide
It's a good news for Harry, but not for Leonor's sister. Harry will have someone you will take care of him.
It's a good news for Harry, but not for Leonor's sister. Harry will have someone you will take care of him.
6/30/2014 c12 autumngold
Thank you for giving Harry a new family! I think it is wonderful that Leonor wants Harry to become his son. I am also interested what will happen between Harry and Zyren, is their romance in their future? Or is Harry right to think that Zyren hates him? Wonderful story! Can't wait for more!
Thank you for giving Harry a new family! I think it is wonderful that Leonor wants Harry to become his son. I am also interested what will happen between Harry and Zyren, is their romance in their future? Or is Harry right to think that Zyren hates him? Wonderful story! Can't wait for more!
6/26/2014 c11 adenoide
My god the immortals have a life not very happy because they think they are superiors, maybe just because they are immortals. So Severus is immortal and he is always awful with Harry and he was friend with his mother.
My god the immortals have a life not very happy because they think they are superiors, maybe just because they are immortals. So Severus is immortal and he is always awful with Harry and he was friend with his mother.
6/25/2014 c11 Z
So I am wondering, how ever much I love this story..which I do and I wish there were more...is Harry ever going to make it back to the 'human' realm...it seems like he never will :/ But Please do not stop writing...I do love this story!
So I am wondering, how ever much I love this story..which I do and I wish there were more...is Harry ever going to make it back to the 'human' realm...it seems like he never will :/ But Please do not stop writing...I do love this story!