for Warband of the Forsaken Sons4/26 c1 Guest
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo ️
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo ️
10/2/2024 c66 
2chrisdiokno117
Holy shit, I legit did not know this was complete. Holy fuck. Also, I'd love to see the Vampire the Masquerade AU
2chrisdiokno117Holy shit, I legit did not know this was complete. Holy fuck. Also, I'd love to see the Vampire the Masquerade AU
5/2/2024 c66 RananRainmaker
Im not familiar with how the canon stories tend to go, but I'm seriously disappointed with this ending to be honest. After seeing almost every named character get killer off the last 15 or so chapters have been less and less enjoyable. I wouldnt read about a bad guy if I'm only getting a different perspective on the common "good guys always win" stuff. Like, the story was interesting, but it seems like this whole story could be summed up as, Bad Guy get strong but still lose, but its ok cause its part of the plan, on repeat up until the end where surprise surprise the good guys pull some bs out and win. Visceraly dissapointed. So much build up and awesome charachters getting sacrificed and all for nothing. I dont even have the words to properly articulate how unsatisfying the ending of this story is.
Im not familiar with how the canon stories tend to go, but I'm seriously disappointed with this ending to be honest. After seeing almost every named character get killer off the last 15 or so chapters have been less and less enjoyable. I wouldnt read about a bad guy if I'm only getting a different perspective on the common "good guys always win" stuff. Like, the story was interesting, but it seems like this whole story could be summed up as, Bad Guy get strong but still lose, but its ok cause its part of the plan, on repeat up until the end where surprise surprise the good guys pull some bs out and win. Visceraly dissapointed. So much build up and awesome charachters getting sacrificed and all for nothing. I dont even have the words to properly articulate how unsatisfying the ending of this story is.
9/14/2023 c59 Guest
"Ever have the craven fled from retribution's fire. So be it."
I love how you capture the bombastic over the top hypocrisy of the Imps. When they force their enemies to attack on unfavorable ground it’s “smart tactics”, when it hapens to them, it’s “craven traitors”.
"Ever have the craven fled from retribution's fire. So be it."
I love how you capture the bombastic over the top hypocrisy of the Imps. When they force their enemies to attack on unfavorable ground it’s “smart tactics”, when it hapens to them, it’s “craven traitors”.
9/13/2023 c56 Guest
Yes! Finally someone on the Chaos side read the Evil Overlord List. Good to see it.
Yes! Finally someone on the Chaos side read the Evil Overlord List. Good to see it.
1/4/2023 c67 ninjaoforthanc
This is great!
Personally, I'll cast my lot in for Luther & Ciaphus Cain.
This is great!
Personally, I'll cast my lot in for Luther & Ciaphus Cain.
5/12/2022 c67 Tobi14
So black crusade 2.0 this time part of the black legion officially.
Hmm for the story ideas I'm torn between Creed as the warmaster of chaos and the nightlords verus eldar, as I would love to the night lords embrace their damnation now a united legion and you write eldar with respect to them.
Follow whatever you wish I guess.
So black crusade 2.0 this time part of the black legion officially.
Hmm for the story ideas I'm torn between Creed as the warmaster of chaos and the nightlords verus eldar, as I would love to the night lords embrace their damnation now a united legion and you write eldar with respect to them.
Follow whatever you wish I guess.
5/12/2022 c66 Tobi14
So the loop closes, Arken cursed to fight a meanless war forever, Asim causing his own damnation and the cage now a new creature.
The black crusade failed to release the fleet but managed to bleed the grey knights and that in many ways is worth far more than anything else.
So the loop closes, Arken cursed to fight a meanless war forever, Asim causing his own damnation and the cage now a new creature.
The black crusade failed to release the fleet but managed to bleed the grey knights and that in many ways is worth far more than anything else.
5/12/2022 c65 Tobi14
To be honest the grey knights have always made sense to me with the revelation of their origins. Thanks to sitting out the heresy their original codes of secrecy are far out of date it resembles the old great crusade policy regarding the warp. That their so out of date and the black legion has known about them since the first crusade makes it all the bleaker.
Well was not expecting Alphon to be a perpetual but it does make a lot of sense thinking it over. I feel they represent a potential path the emperor could have taken if he did not try to unify mankind. Him being one of his equals willing to die for mankind means more than him being one of his sons I feel.
To be honest the grey knights have always made sense to me with the revelation of their origins. Thanks to sitting out the heresy their original codes of secrecy are far out of date it resembles the old great crusade policy regarding the warp. That their so out of date and the black legion has known about them since the first crusade makes it all the bleaker.
Well was not expecting Alphon to be a perpetual but it does make a lot of sense thinking it over. I feel they represent a potential path the emperor could have taken if he did not try to unify mankind. Him being one of his equals willing to die for mankind means more than him being one of his sons I feel.
5/12/2022 c64 Tobi14
Looks like the xeno ghost managed to save Asim and hopefully buy him the time to escape.
Over 40 grey knight dead so far quite the achievement in the dark gods eyes.
Looks like the xeno ghost managed to save Asim and hopefully buy him the time to escape.
Over 40 grey knight dead so far quite the achievement in the dark gods eyes.
5/12/2022 c63 Tobi14
Fair warbands are ultimately just bullets to shot at reality in the long war.
The shifting battle field in the cage is quite a interesting location.
The mutants and knights not lasting long is a bit sad but expected, simply not a good battle field for them.
Fair warbands are ultimately just bullets to shot at reality in the long war.
The shifting battle field in the cage is quite a interesting location.
The mutants and knights not lasting long is a bit sad but expected, simply not a good battle field for them.
5/12/2022 c62 Tobi14
Great void battle Zahariel, nice mixutre of ambushes, void mines and boarding actions.
Nice to see the chaos fleet being to flee.
Also the eldar prison being a type of AI does make a lot sense to keep the defenses up, their's not way Arken is the first chaos lord to have this quest.
Great void battle Zahariel, nice mixutre of ambushes, void mines and boarding actions.
Nice to see the chaos fleet being to flee.
Also the eldar prison being a type of AI does make a lot sense to keep the defenses up, their's not way Arken is the first chaos lord to have this quest.
5/12/2022 c61 Tobi14
The stage is set for the final battle.
I do agree with the eldar warp travel is insane and I can see why the farseer would be disquieted by the grey knights existence, thankfully they can't be mass produced.
Arken's confrontation with Janus reveals a lot and in some ways explains his rapid descent into ruin creating a hell of a hundred words to raise cannon fodder for the long war and as well as why Arken has tried to not think of his past. For better or worse the monster he was then is long dead and what is now in it's place is far worse.
The stage is set for the final battle.
I do agree with the eldar warp travel is insane and I can see why the farseer would be disquieted by the grey knights existence, thankfully they can't be mass produced.
Arken's confrontation with Janus reveals a lot and in some ways explains his rapid descent into ruin creating a hell of a hundred words to raise cannon fodder for the long war and as well as why Arken has tried to not think of his past. For better or worse the monster he was then is long dead and what is now in it's place is far worse.
5/12/2022 c60 Tobi14
Well this ended as well you would expect it would, least some of the warband escaped to fight again however I suppose they performed task of delaying the imperium.
Well this ended as well you would expect it would, least some of the warband escaped to fight again however I suppose they performed task of delaying the imperium.
5/12/2022 c59 Tobi14
Eldar not suffering immense losses in battle? Heresy!
Quite liked the Autarchs goal of making craftworld be in a better place after war, I find the idea of eldar always just accepting their dying race status and just trying to hold a tad annoying, their should be if not idealists eldar like Irithiel trying to find ways to improve their situation even if they think their race is not doing well.
Things are not looking good for the slanneshi host.
Eldar not suffering immense losses in battle? Heresy!
Quite liked the Autarchs goal of making craftworld be in a better place after war, I find the idea of eldar always just accepting their dying race status and just trying to hold a tad annoying, their should be if not idealists eldar like Irithiel trying to find ways to improve their situation even if they think their race is not doing well.
Things are not looking good for the slanneshi host.