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1/23/2019 c47 13Dragonofelder
Nice to see some vengeance
11/13/2018 c46 Anon
Super excited for this next one
10/18/2018 c28 6SomeGuyOverHere
This was a pretty cool chapter, it was really neat to see all the different clans of Chaos work together to breach the city's walls.

I particularly liked that fight at the end, when the Space Marine tries to assassinate the regent. It really showed just how powerful a Space Marine is when compared to a regular human.
9/28/2018 c46 theweird1234
I just binge read this story and I approve. I love villians and I love the badass that is Arken. I do wish you went off of canon and made Arken and the forsaken sons be the ones to take on the world but I doubt that would happen with this being the final arc. Thank you for making this
9/25/2018 c22 Guest
I do not know if you still do zombies for this story but it was awesome
9/27/2018 c26 SomeGuyOverHere
That was an awesome "FOR THE EMPEROR" moment.
Looking forward to seeing the final battle, I'm sure that it'll be epic considering the sheer variety of combatants.
9/27/2018 c25 SomeGuyOverHere
I really lie this Codex chapter, it serves as a good way to catch us up on all the stuff that has been happening for the arc.

I think my favorite is the Sha'eilat. It's just such a cool concept to have Chaos Eldar.
8/30/2018 c24 SomeGuyOverHere
Excellent chapter! I rather liked the flashback format.
8/29/2018 c23 SomeGuyOverHere
Once again, awesome. You write Chaos really well.

I love the rhetoric that's used when the story is being from the POV of Pharod or one of the plague marines. It's all very fitting and honestly feels like something that I would read in an actual 40K novel.

Also, we've got some sort of half daemon's being grown? With anyone else I would be really skeptical, but you somehow managed to make reborn Slannesh Eldar cool, so I will trust that this will be awesome as well.
8/28/2018 c22 SomeGuyOverHere
Damn that was a great chapter!

I loved how each section was new stage of the plague. Pharod remains one of my favorite new characters, I just love the idea of a tech-priest corrupted by Nurgle.
8/28/2018 c21 SomeGuyOverHere
Uh oh, the prophecy is fulfilling itself.

Again, I'm glad to see the loyalists winning some battles here at there. It adds to the story and gives the war for the sub-sector as a whole a kind of desperate last stand feeling.

A resurrected Eldar who worships Slannesh. Well, I've seen weirder things happen in the 40k universe. I kind of wish that the resurrected Eldar was a female though, if only to balance out all the testosterone from the Forsaken Sons. But look forward to seeing how this new guy will be use.
8/28/2018 c20 SomeGuyOverHere
That was amazing! You did the big battle scene well and I like how you incorporated all the characters.

I have to say that the Sons of Calth put up a better fight that I expected, but that's expected. Plus it would be a bit boring if the Forsaken Sons just stomped their way through the loyalist Astartes.

The sections with the Blood Champion are my favorite so far.
8/10/2018 c19 SomeGuyOverHere
That was a cool chapter. I like this world building (pun intended) stuff a lot. It makes the story as a whole feel so much more complete.
8/7/2018 c18 SomeGuyOverHere
This was a good chapter, it's cool to see Asim deal with the consequences of his actions. And oh boy, if Illarion had a big head before, it's going to be giant now that he is possessed.
8/7/2018 c16 SomeGuyOverHere
Well that was something.
It's good to see Mikail is still around. It's good to see Mahlone and Ygdal are around as well, I was wondering when they'd show up again.
I have to say that so far this story is above and beyond what I expected. I love how everything in each chapter is relevant in some way. I can't wait to see how these Unbound do in battle against the children of the Ultra-Smurfs.

Also, Chaos worshipping Eldar. Not what I expected, and a little lore breaking, but I think it was handled pretty well so I don't really mind. I always thought that it was impossible that there were absolutely no Eldar that worshipped Chaos.
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