for Made of Stone1/31/2022 c24 ravenlovestwilight
Absolutely loved both this and the first one just wish there was more :)
Absolutely loved both this and the first one just wish there was more :)
1/28/2022 c24 
10witchyred
Wow. I wasn't sure there would ever actually be an end chapter to this, so I am so glad to see it officially completed! I enjoyed this fic quite a bit, my only complaint was that sometimes I felt Bella was almost acting like a spoiled brat, but I suppose trauma does have it's ways of impacting us in so many different facets & that was just how Bella ended up after everything was said & done. I enjoyed how involved & detailed this story got, all the twists, turns. It was quite a journey. Thanks for sharing your work.
10witchyredWow. I wasn't sure there would ever actually be an end chapter to this, so I am so glad to see it officially completed! I enjoyed this fic quite a bit, my only complaint was that sometimes I felt Bella was almost acting like a spoiled brat, but I suppose trauma does have it's ways of impacting us in so many different facets & that was just how Bella ended up after everything was said & done. I enjoyed how involved & detailed this story got, all the twists, turns. It was quite a journey. Thanks for sharing your work.
1/21/2022 c24 1My Eyez Are Watching Everyone
I have so much love for you and this story! I'm so glad that bella made it through the change!
1My Eyez Are Watching EveryoneI have so much love for you and this story! I'm so glad that bella made it through the change!
1/21/2022 c24 7leckadams
I'm so excited, but also so sad to see the saga end...Thank you for all your words!
7leckadamsI'm so excited, but also so sad to see the saga end...Thank you for all your words!
1/21/2022 c24 2Siobhan Whitlock
It's been a long and beautiful journey to this point, mynxi, and I feel so honored that I got to share in it. Truly a spectacular saga, and I will always hold it dear to me.
2Siobhan WhitlockIt's been a long and beautiful journey to this point, mynxi, and I feel so honored that I got to share in it. Truly a spectacular saga, and I will always hold it dear to me.
1/21/2022 c24 traceybuie
Loved the ending... I can't believe how you wrote Jasper being so close to offing himself and actually Bella too. I think that realization scared him so much. Bella never seemed to get it.
It's sad that Charlie is staying aloof with Bella and Jasper. He doesn't have to worry about Bella's health or accidents anymore, and he is not enjoying that.
Poor Marcus... hope he is happy somewhere,,,,,,,
But yay to Bella and Jasper living on an island all alone... With Jasper, that would have to be sexy. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing this story. :)
Loved the ending... I can't believe how you wrote Jasper being so close to offing himself and actually Bella too. I think that realization scared him so much. Bella never seemed to get it.
It's sad that Charlie is staying aloof with Bella and Jasper. He doesn't have to worry about Bella's health or accidents anymore, and he is not enjoying that.
Poor Marcus... hope he is happy somewhere,,,,,,,
But yay to Bella and Jasper living on an island all alone... With Jasper, that would have to be sexy. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing this story. :)
10/19/2021 c23 5Bell 1
Shoot you! DEFINITELY! ;) Especially when I finally find time to read your two updates, which hasn't happened since July now... it doesn't seem like it has been that long since the last update, to be honest, because July through September were a blur for me... however, not only has there not been an update since July, I finally find time to read the two chapter updates (with excitement, I might add), but you turn and leave things hanging like this? MEAN!
Of course Bella makes it; this I do not doubt. However...
Now, I expect you to write two, maybe three more chapters at the very least. Do not do me wrong again by ending it after her change, ESPECIALLY after all of the turmoil and strife these two have been through both together and separately. Please give us at least two chapters of life together and happy... maybe five. ;)
That subconscious protection of Bella's messed this up, not Jasper. I am sort of hoping, especially with Jasper's high worry, her spilled blood he cannot clean up for her now will be of no concern after she wakes. They really don't need anymore problems. They've had more than their fair share... each, let alone together.
I shall spare the verbal shooting because we need the five new chapters SOON, so get to writing and posting the new chapters. :D
5Bell 1Shoot you! DEFINITELY! ;) Especially when I finally find time to read your two updates, which hasn't happened since July now... it doesn't seem like it has been that long since the last update, to be honest, because July through September were a blur for me... however, not only has there not been an update since July, I finally find time to read the two chapter updates (with excitement, I might add), but you turn and leave things hanging like this? MEAN!
Of course Bella makes it; this I do not doubt. However...
Now, I expect you to write two, maybe three more chapters at the very least. Do not do me wrong again by ending it after her change, ESPECIALLY after all of the turmoil and strife these two have been through both together and separately. Please give us at least two chapters of life together and happy... maybe five. ;)
That subconscious protection of Bella's messed this up, not Jasper. I am sort of hoping, especially with Jasper's high worry, her spilled blood he cannot clean up for her now will be of no concern after she wakes. They really don't need anymore problems. They've had more than their fair share... each, let alone together.
I shall spare the verbal shooting because we need the five new chapters SOON, so get to writing and posting the new chapters. :D
10/15/2021 c23 3jeoliverio
If Bella has been going through the change for a hours, wouldn't the venom be enough?
3jeoliverioIf Bella has been going through the change for a hours, wouldn't the venom be enough?