4/5/2018 c168 RosyMiranto18
Okay, Killer 4 Life will ends in two or three chapters (in more ways than one) Also, i think the chapter is not too long but it's very packed. So without further ado... *whispering* which is caused by the lack of idea for any punchline for today.

1. Yep, i know Marie. You need to be explained about that again because you're still doesn't believe how idiotic they are for even considering to make that idea, much less actually offering it to Dylan.
2. Hm... Final Showdown, eh? You better to put Bully's Street Fight when that moment comes or there will be a hell of a riot, GB DragonKappa for the threat but i'm serious about the Bully soundtrack).
You can check the theme here (Note: it's a build-up mixed version and i prefer this one rather than being cut to pieces):
httpsyoutu . be/SH5pBLs3FbQ
3a. Err... Yuu, there's a possibility that they are prematurely attacking to bring chaos and shake up your morale before the main 'army' came and decimate everything...
b. Yuu, i think bringing Nanako into what is very likely to be a war zone is a bad idea...
4a Hm... why did Genba looked quite reluctant to be involved in YLA? Is it about worry about futility? Is it something like Yuusuke in IDBH? Or... something worse *gulp*?
b. That's true, no matter if they are facing a common foe together, the Tenmyouji-Wae Alliance, the race still continues. After all, in addition to keep the suspicion away, it will be a trouble when they succeed and then they still had to decide who should be the student council president.
c. Er... who was Rokurou again? Oh yes Nagata Rokurou.
5a. Yep, and now the Final Showdown is a public knowledge.
b. And... that's it? That'a the only covered part about today's debate? Ok ._.
6a. Well, while your intention is indeed making them caught off guard, it worked on both sides... because you didn't tell the YLA first thus making the preparation before making what essentially is a war declaration.
b. Although, in some sides. Settling a war from one battle or settling a battle from one duel between the generals is a better option to prevent dragging the conflict for too long and/or creating many casualties on both sides. The only thing that made me curious is what happened to the Tenmyoujis and Waes after the Showdown which is very canonically and likely to be won by the YLA, because if the YLA lose... they all die... *sobs*
c. Hm... it's better to make Isshaku got arrested anyway. 1. It proves Dylan is better than Isshaku while Isshaku considers Dylan as not so different to him, 2. He will probably get a fate worse than death later, 3. He deserved to live unlike Kotone who is less than a human which making him better to be dead.

Well, i guess that's the end of my review for now. So see you in the PM and don't forget to play "Street Fight". Keep Update!

3/22/2018 c166 RosyMiranto18
Ahaha, that's okay, i don't think fic paces is a problem for me, the gap between updates, on the other hand is... nah, that depends on what fic is, and this ain't one of them. Anyway, let's start the review now.

1. Hm... i still wondering what type and the exact location of the jail the Adachis are going to after this...
2. Damn, i didn't expect that everyone is practically nervous before the meeting; but given the current situation, it's pretty much understandeable.
3a. *reading* Undisclosed Location? Arghh... i hope you at least give the place a name or a basic description of it. I know it's for the secrecy sake, but at least don't be secretive to your dear readers, oh the Seekers of Truth.
b. I know this meeting is supposed to be secret and meals is very important, but i can't believe they are actually ordering a catering here *eyebrows*
c. *sweatdrop* and if the place where Kotone 'bonds' is a disclosed location, you should indeed give the name of the meeting place, GB Dragon...
4a. Hey, Irina. Glad to see you return to the story after... 66 chapters or so? But anyway, how's Okematsu doing? I hope it's not as crapsack as the IDBH version, is that correct?
b. Haha, it's quite heartwarming that Dylan and the Academy now finally bury the hachet, after what happened with Mitsuo, Takeru's heel-face turn, and now the threat of Tenmyouji-Wae alliance, that must be a good thing and i hope this can endured forever.
c. Remi Godard, eh? Hm... i have a feeling that everyone named in this meeting will have more prominent roles compared to the others, being a son of a diplomat at that. However, let's just wait until future chapters for Remi and the others, okay?
5a. You know, i still confused on how Zane have a Persona, but i think it obviously will be explained later. However, judging by some of the symptoms, i suspect that he get it by the same way of Yuu, his Persona being 'given' by a deity, which i doubt to be Izanami, of course.
b. W-ait a second, DEMIURGE?! WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS? Is this mean that the one who 'give' the Persona to Zane is YALDABAOTH?! O_o Now... i worried about my own perspective to Zane with this revelation. I hope at least he's only a knight templar, who believe he's the only one allowed to 'cleanse' Kotone.
c. To be honest, Demiurge, i think Kotone is already corrupted from the moment Mitsuo is killed, bonding with Demogorgon is only the final nail of the coffin.
6. Fyuh, it's great to see that everyone agrees to have this alliance. After all, loyalty is better than might in many aspects.
7a. Celldweller and Disturbed? I first heard these artist on NFS Most Wanted and their songs there are the best. Sorry for being OOT though.
b. I think those minions are correct, "Those minions are dead! Kubo Kotone is not a human!" In fact, 'bonding' with Demogorgon has practically made him lost his humanity.
c. You don't know that the older Kubos are killed by the Tenmyouji-Wae alliance and not Dylan isn't it? *sigh* What an imbecile you are, Kubo Kotone.
d. And who says i still considers Kotone to have a heel-face turn? That thought has gone from my mind from the moment he affiliated himself with the Killer Club.

Before i finished, i have a question to ask. Is the whole Tenmyouji-Wae alliance will be completely finished in the end of the second act or it will be 'mixed up' with some earlier chapters of the third act? Well, i guess that's the end of my review for now. Keep Update.

3/2/2018 c164 RosyMiranto18
Hey, long time no see. I guess you need some time to decided how the next chapter goes hence more than a week without updates. To be honest, I actually have no idea to say, so let’s just continue with the review.

1. Hmm… I just hope the Tenmyoujis are not sniffing this meeting, and of course raiding it.
2a. Yeep, the Tenmyoujis has found out about you; it means you’re foomed, Kubo Kotone… or is it?
b. On another note, I admit I prefer if the narration says “It was this moment that Kubo Kotone knew, he fucked up.
3. Hmm… I think Kotone have a point in this ‘Walking Stereotypes’ thing. However, can you tell me which stereotype each Killer Club members represents? I want to take a note of this. ;)
4a. Hmm… Okematsu is Irina’s school, isn’t it? Then is it means that she will reappear soon?
b. Now it’s not only Yakuza, now Triad and even a MERCENARY her too?! Things escalate so quickly just in this chapter alone.
c. On another note, actually Dylan’s wrong when he mentioned Blackwater, as they are renamed into Xe Services in 2009 and Academi in 2011. Remember what time is the story again? January 2012.
d. In another note, where is Laura? I haven’t seen her in a while. She’s gone from the story since the moment Antonov’s gone.
5. Hm… my idea for strategic tactics is to make the Tenmyouji-Wae Army are going up against X-LAWS, then the Seekers of Truth should just leave them to fight each other while they are making as many allies as possible, even resorting to ‘Divide et Impera’ to keep buying time. Then the rest is just “Ge An Guan Ho”, Watch the Fires Burning Across the River… wait until all of their enemies are exhausted by fighting amongst themselves. Then go in at full strength and pick up the pieces. It could also be combined with “Yi Yi Dai Lao”, Wait at Leisure while the Enemy Labors. This would be a good idea, as long as the Tenmyouji-Wae and/or X-LAWS are not attacking the Resistance Army, named after the band of warriors who joined together to fight against the Hydra in Warriors Orochi 3.
6a. Oh… crap *massive groan* The X-LAWS knows Shadow Business… and now Kotone knows it too? ARGHH!
b. Well, I guess now Kotone officially fell into Shadows Level of darkness.
c. And Demogorgon? Why did I drawing connection between this and IDBH’s Slithers, even though it’s a reference to Dungeons and Dragons (which is eventually used in Stranger Things)
7a. Before I end, I would like to ask a couple of things. Why do you think about GTA IV’s theme, Soviet Connection? Is it good enough to fit Dylan, at least the metal covers of it? I think the most suited are:
The End’s: www . youtube watch?vvOXBKZbFglg
Leo Blanc’s: www . youtube watch?vKljw_mcxmBQ
b. I planned to make a concept of Persona Fighting Game between this and IDBH, and I have an idea of most of the roster (I was considering to add more members of the Killer Club though) However, I need to ask a question. Between the Senran Kagura cast who appears in this story, who have the largest role in-story and/or in their home game except Asuka? I need five to be put here and Asuka already taken the first slot. So, which four should I choose. I promise I will tell the final result in the next chap.

Well, that’s the end of my review for now. Keep Update!
P.S.: There is actually a separate roster for Takeuchi's Side, but who they are is a complete spoiler, so please don't ask me about it. :)

2/8/2018 c162 RosyMiranto18
Hey, i had to do this review before 'Morgana forced me to you-know-what' so that you can reply this by the time i woke up. Anyway, enough about this nonsense. Let's review! :D

1. Hmmm... Bad Apple Bar... did you named it after Snow White's Rotten Apple?
2. I know it's already been established a long long time ago, but it's officially official. The kubou family is made of psychopaths.
3. Ahh... finally, the Seekers of Truth have found their own hacker for the job, which is obviously Charles. Well, i hope you get a good luck and you have your own awesome moments in thee future chapters in a same manner as the IDBH!Dylan. I don't care which type of awesome moment you got... physical or mental, just don't be suffered from anything bad from now ob.
4. Although, it still bothers me on how could kotone made that website? Is he a hacker or actually Olaf is the one who made it?
5. Nonononononono- NO! Don't you dare to even considering that, Dylan! The new you is still the much better one. This side of you is smarter and more cunning (which means more dangerous than physical prowess if it can be used well)
6. Gaddamit, that 'gang raped' pun, dylan. *facepalm*
7. speaking of which, i was expecting a gangsta rap appears as a bgm in the brawl of the chapter, but oh well...
8. Of course it wouldn't be that easy to take Kotone out of the picture. To be honest, what is your reason to named him like that? i bet it doesn't have anything to do with Minako's stageplay name, Shiomi Kotone.
9. Let me see... Charles... the Inaba PD, and the Senran Kagura Cast. To be honest, i was expecting a more... unexpected help and/or mysterious protector in this. You know who the example is, isn't it?

Well, that's the end of my review for today. Keep Update!

1/27/2018 c161 RosyMiranto18
*playing Xin・Zhan ~RED CLIFF~*

To be honest, I’m speechless in making the intro, so I should just skip past that and go to the review already.

1. 200 Lbs.? That’s about 90 Kilograms. Principal Takamagahara is quite heavy, right.
2. Ugh… now I’m glad his death happenen off-screen, and I feel bad to you too, Doctor Fukda.
3. Why did I somehow feel bad at Nakatsu? I guess loyalty has no value of in this Yakuza. Moreover, why did I suddenly wanted Nakatsu to have a Jerkass Realization and a Heel-Face urn (which might become a Redemption Equals Death instead)?
4. And now Yuu has killed an assassin. Ugh… now it’s a full blown war, where everyone’s killing everybody. As the people said, War is Hell, no matter what perspective do you have.
5. *sighs* To be honest, how many the bounties are?!

I guess that’s the end of this chapter for now. On a little note, I’m glad you’re back to Last Name-First Name Basis. Well, that’s about it. Keep Update!
P.S.: Welcome Back to reviewing this, JCharles. :)

1/23/2018 c160 RosyMiranto18
A short chapter today? Okay ._.

-You know, I was expecting fighting with weapons (something that I am a fan of), but we know it’s impossible *shurgs*
-Well, Dylan has a point; explaining your scheme to an enemy before you complete it is the most imbecilic thing villains always do, right after Bond Villain Stupidity.
-I… I… I didn’t expect that Takamagahara is death; to be honest, I still not believe it, not until I saw his morgue.
-Moreover, I have a hunch of the name of the ‘Principal’ chosen by the Tenmyouji-gumi, which is Ashihara Nakatsu (葦原中津), named after the world between Takamagahara and Yomi, Ashihara no Nakatsukuni

Well, that’s the end of my review for now. I need to clear that thought about Takamagahara-san, especially since I’m the one who gave him that name. May his soul rests in peace. Keep Update.

1/21/2018 c112 afterados
Good: Adding Kubo’s brother as a side character is cool!

Improvements: How did Kubo’s brother know Dylan killed Kubo? I thought this was supposed to be a big secret, since otherwise dylan would face charges. Adachi admitting to Dylan that he’s the murderer. To me, that just makes ZERO sense, especially since right afterwards he lets dylan go! What would stop Dylan from telling the others now?! Plus there was no reason for him to tell Dylan that. That just bugged me. Also I thought haro already gave kanji and naoto permission to date…?