for Persona 4: Leave No Words Unspoken1/21/2018 c80 
2afterados
Good: Addressing Dylan’sshadow and hopefully getting him help! Im hoping for an awesome dylan’s shadow fight soon, and if it comes I know itll be awesome!
Improvements: none really, keep it up!
2afteradosGood: Addressing Dylan’sshadow and hopefully getting him help! Im hoping for an awesome dylan’s shadow fight soon, and if it comes I know itll be awesome!
Improvements: none really, keep it up!
1/21/2018 c79 afterados
Good: Dylan going off and getting revenge with his ild buddies totally seems like something he’d do. Nice work getting Dojima to explain why he’s letting Yu get involved now! Alsoye team up against Takeru’s gang (before Dylan goes crazy) was quite entertaining!
Improvements: Speeding up the pacing I think would be good: seems like the past several chapters have been going through everyone saying “Dylan’s not doing well, and we’re worried he’s going to do something dumb”, which is awesome, but it gets a bit old. I think lessening the time you take to get that idea across would be good. (Also don’t feel like every character has to be shown saying that; its really commendable that you don’t want to neglect any character, but since you have so many its not necessary to show each one saying a similar thing). Also, im not sure why Dojima is letting Yu get involved… im glad you brought it up, but Dojima doesn’t say why, just that he IS letting Yu get involved. And man, I’m sorry dude, but this is getting really ridiculous. It’s very bothersome to me that Dylan keeps doing more and more atrocious acts and keeps getting away with it… AND his friends forgive him and still follow him. I don’t think it’s realistic, but more importantly it doesn’t work narratively. If Dylan’s on a downward spiral, then his downward spiral needs consequences, not just a disappointed conversation with his friends and then everything’s ok again. Its truly bothersome and frustrating to watch because it happened last time too, and you’ve been hinting at how Dojima couldn’t help Dylan this time… but he DOES. And again, i do know ppl react negatively when he does this but there need to be more lasting consequences than that.
Good: Dylan going off and getting revenge with his ild buddies totally seems like something he’d do. Nice work getting Dojima to explain why he’s letting Yu get involved now! Alsoye team up against Takeru’s gang (before Dylan goes crazy) was quite entertaining!
Improvements: Speeding up the pacing I think would be good: seems like the past several chapters have been going through everyone saying “Dylan’s not doing well, and we’re worried he’s going to do something dumb”, which is awesome, but it gets a bit old. I think lessening the time you take to get that idea across would be good. (Also don’t feel like every character has to be shown saying that; its really commendable that you don’t want to neglect any character, but since you have so many its not necessary to show each one saying a similar thing). Also, im not sure why Dojima is letting Yu get involved… im glad you brought it up, but Dojima doesn’t say why, just that he IS letting Yu get involved. And man, I’m sorry dude, but this is getting really ridiculous. It’s very bothersome to me that Dylan keeps doing more and more atrocious acts and keeps getting away with it… AND his friends forgive him and still follow him. I don’t think it’s realistic, but more importantly it doesn’t work narratively. If Dylan’s on a downward spiral, then his downward spiral needs consequences, not just a disappointed conversation with his friends and then everything’s ok again. Its truly bothersome and frustrating to watch because it happened last time too, and you’ve been hinting at how Dojima couldn’t help Dylan this time… but he DOES. And again, i do know ppl react negatively when he does this but there need to be more lasting consequences than that.
1/21/2018 c78 afterados
Good: Dylan “fangirling” is an awesome detail, I love that! Whole bday scene was cute. Also normally id say that it seems odd for Stephen and Dylan to just start fighting each other instead of talking… BUT for these 2, I actually think its very IN character to do that, so good work!
Improvements: Less telling, more showing. Example: instead of saying “chie was surprised, yet happy”, describe (“show”) what she does to express herself that way. While I think its in character for stephen/dylan to fight it out, I don’t really see how ONLY fighting resolved their issues, since they seem to be in the same position as when they started, just with more bruises. Maybe talking a bit about it would be good.
Good: Dylan “fangirling” is an awesome detail, I love that! Whole bday scene was cute. Also normally id say that it seems odd for Stephen and Dylan to just start fighting each other instead of talking… BUT for these 2, I actually think its very IN character to do that, so good work!
Improvements: Less telling, more showing. Example: instead of saying “chie was surprised, yet happy”, describe (“show”) what she does to express herself that way. While I think its in character for stephen/dylan to fight it out, I don’t really see how ONLY fighting resolved their issues, since they seem to be in the same position as when they started, just with more bruises. Maybe talking a bit about it would be good.
1/21/2018 c77 afterados
Good: Yosuke picking up Chie’s eating habits (steeaaak). Also Dylan’s continued downward spiral is amping things up, I think everyone’s going to keep being worried since he’s definitely NOT in control. Awesome line at the end about Dylan blocking his shadow while it “roar[ed] inside his head”!
Improvements: A bit too abrupt a shift in mood between last chapter, when Dylan andYukiko seemed MORE than fine, and the start of the chapter, when there not. What info were they looking for on Mitsuo from Osamu? Didnt seem like they got much info.
Good: Yosuke picking up Chie’s eating habits (steeaaak). Also Dylan’s continued downward spiral is amping things up, I think everyone’s going to keep being worried since he’s definitely NOT in control. Awesome line at the end about Dylan blocking his shadow while it “roar[ed] inside his head”!
Improvements: A bit too abrupt a shift in mood between last chapter, when Dylan andYukiko seemed MORE than fine, and the start of the chapter, when there not. What info were they looking for on Mitsuo from Osamu? Didnt seem like they got much info.
1/21/2018 c76 afterados
Here we go!
Good: Glad ppl are legitimately worried about Dylan’s actions, his downward spiral’s gotta be stopped! And I like the implications of a wild card (Dylan) going fully rogue, that’s cool!
Improvements: The emotional transitions seem a bit too abrupt, like stephen very quickly moving from calming people down to crying a single tear. Might be a few too many scenes in here as well, I was starting to close track of events at the end.
Here we go!
Good: Glad ppl are legitimately worried about Dylan’s actions, his downward spiral’s gotta be stopped! And I like the implications of a wild card (Dylan) going fully rogue, that’s cool!
Improvements: The emotional transitions seem a bit too abrupt, like stephen very quickly moving from calming people down to crying a single tear. Might be a few too many scenes in here as well, I was starting to close track of events at the end.
1/20/2018 c159 RosyMiranto18
Ahaha… that proverb is true… too true even… and don’t forget about Newton’s Third Law too. Anyway, let’s start with the review.
1. Hah… January 17th again… now I’m dreading that date. Coincidentially, IDBH’s First Elegy Chapter is also released on that date.
2. Err… what is OCPD? Okina? If so, then it should be only OPD. Anyway, I can’t believe there no additional backup to help with this Tenmyouji matter outside of the Inaban and Okinan Police Departments. At least the Prefectural Office should help.
3. Speaking of Okina. If Inaba is based on Fuefuki, then Okina should be based on a city more populous than and has a border to it. I research some cities, and I think Okina is based on Koufu, the Capital of Yamanashi Prefecture, famous for its history with Takeda Shingen. The distance between Fuefuki and Koufu is merely 8 KMs. As for Shichiri Beach, it’s probably somewhere in Kanagawa or Shizuoka.
4. Err… Dylan, what exactly is the Film Club? I never heard of it. Oh, and Isshaku. *sweatdrop* Both Chess and Fencing are sports clubs. -_-
5. Hmm… who is that 2-3 student who made that question? He brings up a lot of good points. Now, if only there’s that question on IDBH too… I would love to see Takeuchi’s answering it :BroughyFlushed:
6. *Mong* Err… who are you, Amane? I never heard of you. I better check my rec- wait, are you mistype Ayane’s name here? *glare*
7. Oh, and you know what I’m expecting for the next chapter? Ehm, “EVERYONE! GET YOUR RESPECTIVE WEAPONS AND WORK TOGETHER TO BEAT THOSE RUBBISH MENTALITIES INTO SUBMISSION! I’m sure none of these Killer Club carry any guns!” Oh, and GB Dragon, please don’t spoil this one for me :)
Okay, that’s enough for now, Keep Update!
Ahaha… that proverb is true… too true even… and don’t forget about Newton’s Third Law too. Anyway, let’s start with the review.
1. Hah… January 17th again… now I’m dreading that date. Coincidentially, IDBH’s First Elegy Chapter is also released on that date.
2. Err… what is OCPD? Okina? If so, then it should be only OPD. Anyway, I can’t believe there no additional backup to help with this Tenmyouji matter outside of the Inaban and Okinan Police Departments. At least the Prefectural Office should help.
3. Speaking of Okina. If Inaba is based on Fuefuki, then Okina should be based on a city more populous than and has a border to it. I research some cities, and I think Okina is based on Koufu, the Capital of Yamanashi Prefecture, famous for its history with Takeda Shingen. The distance between Fuefuki and Koufu is merely 8 KMs. As for Shichiri Beach, it’s probably somewhere in Kanagawa or Shizuoka.
4. Err… Dylan, what exactly is the Film Club? I never heard of it. Oh, and Isshaku. *sweatdrop* Both Chess and Fencing are sports clubs. -_-
5. Hmm… who is that 2-3 student who made that question? He brings up a lot of good points. Now, if only there’s that question on IDBH too… I would love to see Takeuchi’s answering it :BroughyFlushed:
6. *Mong* Err… who are you, Amane? I never heard of you. I better check my rec- wait, are you mistype Ayane’s name here? *glare*
7. Oh, and you know what I’m expecting for the next chapter? Ehm, “EVERYONE! GET YOUR RESPECTIVE WEAPONS AND WORK TOGETHER TO BEAT THOSE RUBBISH MENTALITIES INTO SUBMISSION! I’m sure none of these Killer Club carry any guns!” Oh, and GB Dragon, please don’t spoil this one for me :)
Okay, that’s enough for now, Keep Update!
1/15/2018 c158 RosyMiranto18
Ehm, please ignore the review down below, that's... incorrrect. This is the right one, anyway...
Hmm... it's very strange for you to update at these hours, but... oh well :)
And torture scenes? *remembering Phoenix FORM Unbroken Thread's fourth chapter, The Sign* ugh... *shudders* Forget about that, let's move on with the review now. :)
1. Okay i know you are dating, Takeru, but considering that everyone's in Mortal Peril. It wouldn't be a good idea to do date Laura on an open place like souzai daigaku. Oh well, at least with antonov being death she's probably not in a physical danger, but that doesn't guarantee anything.
2. That, Laura... is what they called 'vengeance is empty', codified by Niko Bellic of Liberty City.
3. Hmm... IDBH's Descent Act involved a burning bunker base in the end, and this arc also involving a burning gym in the beginning. *laugh bitterly* Hahaha, hah... what a parallel
4. Hmm... i wonder how Asuka (whose surname is't Reiki *whistles innocently) and her fellow Senran Kagura Characters can find intel on the Tenmyouji-gumi since they probably has no personal connection and/or intel, without counting them being a part of schools of ninjas of course. ;)
5. *sarcastic* here we go... it's "By the Book 2.0", better to not forget the waterboardings, a wrench, electrical shocks, tooth pilings with a piler, and of course, syringes for adrenaline shorts.
6. Umm... there is a question here: What is Laura's arcana? My guess is the hanged man if she's this story's Irina here.
Well, that's the end of this review for now. Keep Update!
Ehm, please ignore the review down below, that's... incorrrect. This is the right one, anyway...
Hmm... it's very strange for you to update at these hours, but... oh well :)
And torture scenes? *remembering Phoenix FORM Unbroken Thread's fourth chapter, The Sign* ugh... *shudders* Forget about that, let's move on with the review now. :)
1. Okay i know you are dating, Takeru, but considering that everyone's in Mortal Peril. It wouldn't be a good idea to do date Laura on an open place like souzai daigaku. Oh well, at least with antonov being death she's probably not in a physical danger, but that doesn't guarantee anything.
2. That, Laura... is what they called 'vengeance is empty', codified by Niko Bellic of Liberty City.
3. Hmm... IDBH's Descent Act involved a burning bunker base in the end, and this arc also involving a burning gym in the beginning. *laugh bitterly* Hahaha, hah... what a parallel
4. Hmm... i wonder how Asuka (whose surname is't Reiki *whistles innocently) and her fellow Senran Kagura Characters can find intel on the Tenmyouji-gumi since they probably has no personal connection and/or intel, without counting them being a part of schools of ninjas of course. ;)
5. *sarcastic* here we go... it's "By the Book 2.0", better to not forget the waterboardings, a wrench, electrical shocks, tooth pilings with a piler, and of course, syringes for adrenaline shorts.
6. Umm... there is a question here: What is Laura's arcana? My guess is the hanged man if she's this story's Irina here.
Well, that's the end of this review for now. Keep Update!
1/15/2018 c158 RosyMiranto18
Hmm... it's very strange for you to update at these hours, but... oh wellAnyway, torture scenes? *remembering Phoenix FORM Unbroken Thread's fourth chapter, The Sign* ugh... *shudders* Forget about that, let's move on with the review now.1. Okay i know you are dating, Takeru, but considering that everyone's in Mortal Peril. It wouldn't be a good idea to do date Laura on an open place like souzai daigaku. Oh well, at least with antonov being death she's probably not in a physical danger, but that doesn't guarantee anything.
2. That, Laura... is what they called 'vengeance is empty', codified by Niko Bellic of Liberty City.
3. Hmm... IDBH's Descent Act involved a burning bunker base in the end, and this arc also involving a burning gym in the beginning. *laugh bitterly* Hahaha, hah... what a parallel
4. Hmm... i wonder how Asuka (whose surname is't Reiki *whistles innocently) and her fellow Senran Kagura Characters can find intel on the Tenmyouji-gumi since they probably has no personal connection and/or intel, without counting them being a part of schools of ninjas of we go... it's "By the Book 2.0", better to not forget the waterboardings, a wrench, electrical shocks, tooth pilings with a piler, and of course, syringes for adrenaline shorts.
6. Umm... there is a question hereWhat is laura's arcana? My guess is the hanged man if she's this story's Irina here.
Well, that's the end of this review for now. Keep Update!
Hmm... it's very strange for you to update at these hours, but... oh wellAnyway, torture scenes? *remembering Phoenix FORM Unbroken Thread's fourth chapter, The Sign* ugh... *shudders* Forget about that, let's move on with the review now.1. Okay i know you are dating, Takeru, but considering that everyone's in Mortal Peril. It wouldn't be a good idea to do date Laura on an open place like souzai daigaku. Oh well, at least with antonov being death she's probably not in a physical danger, but that doesn't guarantee anything.
2. That, Laura... is what they called 'vengeance is empty', codified by Niko Bellic of Liberty City.
3. Hmm... IDBH's Descent Act involved a burning bunker base in the end, and this arc also involving a burning gym in the beginning. *laugh bitterly* Hahaha, hah... what a parallel
4. Hmm... i wonder how Asuka (whose surname is't Reiki *whistles innocently) and her fellow Senran Kagura Characters can find intel on the Tenmyouji-gumi since they probably has no personal connection and/or intel, without counting them being a part of schools of ninjas of we go... it's "By the Book 2.0", better to not forget the waterboardings, a wrench, electrical shocks, tooth pilings with a piler, and of course, syringes for adrenaline shorts.
6. Umm... there is a question hereWhat is laura's arcana? My guess is the hanged man if she's this story's Irina here.
Well, that's the end of this review for now. Keep Update!
1/6/2018 c157 RosyMiranto18
Hmm… is it a reference for ‘Grove 4 Life’? I gave up, but I know it has something to do with gangster and/or rapper. Wait *glancing at your cover* It’s Bullet Club for Life, isn’t it *glaring before sighing* Hah… what an imbecile I am… *shakes head* Anyway… Killer Club for Life… Hahahaha, that would be a good title for this arc. Anyway, let’s start the review already.
1. It is interesting to see that Tenmyouji-gumi will attempt to make an attack to Gregory. I wonder who will be win between them…
2. I didn’t expect that Shidou and Gregory will be allies, but I’m expecting one will be turning against the other sooner and other. To be honest, I expected that they are rival, or even like Trump and Kim Jong-un (Sorry for bringing the politics here :( )
3. *Facepalm* You know, if I was Isshaku, I wouldn’t tell the seekers of truth about the ‘rigged with dicksplosives’ part and just letting all of them died, unless Yuu being able to tell there’s an explosive anyway.
4. Hmm… the killer club are an interesting bunch, especially with Luther, being a Half-Maori, Quarter-African, and Quarter-American after all. Oh, and there are 1252kms between the Kingdom of Tonga and Tokelau. :)
5. Now, it’s a three-way battle between the Tenmyouji-gumi (along with Isshaku’s Killer Club), the Antonov Bratva, and the Seekers of Truth. I wonder if Antonov aborted his plan to crash the debate and instead making a truce and/or temporary alliance with Dylan or even a peace agreement.
6. I thought you’re with Kanami, Travis. Oh well, she’s not here after all…
7. And as I said previously, I give you the answer of the theme song of IDBH’s Descent Act. The theme is Alan’s “River of No Return”, the credits theme of “Red Cliff”.
You can check the song here: www . youtube watch?vraMRIj1zHvw
You can see the lyrics here: onehallyu topic/91283-alan-%E9%98%BF%E5%85%B0-%E8%B5%A4%E5%A3%81%EF%BD%9E%E5%A4%A7%E6%B1%9F%E4%B8%9C%E5%8E%BB%EF%BD%9E-red-cliffthe-yangtze-river-flows-into-the-east/
Well, that’s the end of my review for now. Keep Update!
P.S.: I’m ready to send the recap of IDBH and LNWu for you. Just tell me your email address when you’re replying this review and I’ll send it as soon as possible.
Hmm… is it a reference for ‘Grove 4 Life’? I gave up, but I know it has something to do with gangster and/or rapper. Wait *glancing at your cover* It’s Bullet Club for Life, isn’t it *glaring before sighing* Hah… what an imbecile I am… *shakes head* Anyway… Killer Club for Life… Hahahaha, that would be a good title for this arc. Anyway, let’s start the review already.
1. It is interesting to see that Tenmyouji-gumi will attempt to make an attack to Gregory. I wonder who will be win between them…
2. I didn’t expect that Shidou and Gregory will be allies, but I’m expecting one will be turning against the other sooner and other. To be honest, I expected that they are rival, or even like Trump and Kim Jong-un (Sorry for bringing the politics here :( )
3. *Facepalm* You know, if I was Isshaku, I wouldn’t tell the seekers of truth about the ‘rigged with dicksplosives’ part and just letting all of them died, unless Yuu being able to tell there’s an explosive anyway.
4. Hmm… the killer club are an interesting bunch, especially with Luther, being a Half-Maori, Quarter-African, and Quarter-American after all. Oh, and there are 1252kms between the Kingdom of Tonga and Tokelau. :)
5. Now, it’s a three-way battle between the Tenmyouji-gumi (along with Isshaku’s Killer Club), the Antonov Bratva, and the Seekers of Truth. I wonder if Antonov aborted his plan to crash the debate and instead making a truce and/or temporary alliance with Dylan or even a peace agreement.
6. I thought you’re with Kanami, Travis. Oh well, she’s not here after all…
7. And as I said previously, I give you the answer of the theme song of IDBH’s Descent Act. The theme is Alan’s “River of No Return”, the credits theme of “Red Cliff”.
You can check the song here: www . youtube watch?vraMRIj1zHvw
You can see the lyrics here: onehallyu topic/91283-alan-%E9%98%BF%E5%85%B0-%E8%B5%A4%E5%A3%81%EF%BD%9E%E5%A4%A7%E6%B1%9F%E4%B8%9C%E5%8E%BB%EF%BD%9E-red-cliffthe-yangtze-river-flows-into-the-east/
Well, that’s the end of my review for now. Keep Update!
P.S.: I’m ready to send the recap of IDBH and LNWu for you. Just tell me your email address when you’re replying this review and I’ll send it as soon as possible.
12/25/2017 c156 RosyMiranto18
It’s not the Word, GB Dragon; it’s ZA WARUDO! Ehm, anyway, let’s start the review for today.
1. Hmm… I wonder if the rest of the Seekers of Truth got a taste of Hot ‘Lightning’ on the hot springs?
2. Yuu, you shouldn’t have jinxed it by daring her to use your teammates’ skills *facepalm*
3. No, I prefer to call you Omo, because ‘Om’ means ‘Uncle’ in Javanese (not Japanese ;)
4. Libera Me from Hell? Hahahahahaha… what a coindicence…
5. Yuu, would you rather die from Marie’s Living Chocolate or Nanako’s Slime Chocolate? (︶;)
6. Last Question: Will Marie got Kaguya someday in the future? Maybe to replace Izanagi no Ookami’s awakening which is happened here instead of Izanami’s boss fight?
Well, that’s the end of my review for now. Keep Update!
P.S.: Nope, still prefer Kurusu Akira; Amamiya Ren might be better as Female Protagonist’s for me though.
It’s not the Word, GB Dragon; it’s ZA WARUDO! Ehm, anyway, let’s start the review for today.
1. Hmm… I wonder if the rest of the Seekers of Truth got a taste of Hot ‘Lightning’ on the hot springs?
2. Yuu, you shouldn’t have jinxed it by daring her to use your teammates’ skills *facepalm*
3. No, I prefer to call you Omo, because ‘Om’ means ‘Uncle’ in Javanese (not Japanese ;)
4. Libera Me from Hell? Hahahahahaha… what a coindicence…
5. Yuu, would you rather die from Marie’s Living Chocolate or Nanako’s Slime Chocolate? (︶;)
6. Last Question: Will Marie got Kaguya someday in the future? Maybe to replace Izanagi no Ookami’s awakening which is happened here instead of Izanami’s boss fight?
Well, that’s the end of my review for now. Keep Update!
P.S.: Nope, still prefer Kurusu Akira; Amamiya Ren might be better as Female Protagonist’s for me though.
12/15/2017 c155 RosyMiranto18
WOW, it's only two days, haha. Unexpected indeed... anyway, let's move on to the review right now.
Hmm... so the title is Queen of Snow. I understand why did you choose it; however, i have attached it too much on Nyx since her affiliation with the Snow Queen in Persona 1
Teddie, aren't you the Reincarnation of Theodore Roosevelt? If so, then you're not exactly on the same case with Roz since she got resurected instead of reincarnated.
Well, i have nothing else to say about outside of a good luck to Y(o)uu in his fight with Kusumi no Ookami. Keep Update!
WOW, it's only two days, haha. Unexpected indeed... anyway, let's move on to the review right now.
Hmm... so the title is Queen of Snow. I understand why did you choose it; however, i have attached it too much on Nyx since her affiliation with the Snow Queen in Persona 1
Teddie, aren't you the Reincarnation of Theodore Roosevelt? If so, then you're not exactly on the same case with Roz since she got resurected instead of reincarnated.
Well, i have nothing else to say about outside of a good luck to Y(o)uu in his fight with Kusumi no Ookami. Keep Update!
12/13/2017 c154 RosyMiranto18
Hmm… I don’t what song reference is, unless they are Avenged Sevenfold’s Nightmare and Evanescence’s Bring Me to Live… Anyway, let’s start the review.
1. Ultidyne, Shadow Mitsuo? That’s not a good term. –Giga is a metric prefix, so the sequence should be Teradyne, Petadyne, Exadyne, etc. ;)
2. Yuu, how are Debilitate effective against the 8-bit Heroes? Unless they are X-in-one, it’s impractical. There are so many of them, yet debilitate is only a single-target spell.
3. Ahh… now I understand why Takeru’s Golden Persona is named Joukai. Joukai (上界) is Japanese for ‘Upper World/Heaven’, referencing his former arrogance. I thought it’s a typo of Youkai all this time.
4. Shadow Mitsuo, you lose because you only rely on one thing, fear. Even this fear is only related to Shadow Mitsuo. Dylan is not fearful at all, except if the hallucination that you make is something like ‘Yukiko got killed in the future’. Oh no, I should have stop making ideas for the antagonists.
Well, that’s the end of my review for today. Keep Update!
Hmm… I don’t what song reference is, unless they are Avenged Sevenfold’s Nightmare and Evanescence’s Bring Me to Live… Anyway, let’s start the review.
1. Ultidyne, Shadow Mitsuo? That’s not a good term. –Giga is a metric prefix, so the sequence should be Teradyne, Petadyne, Exadyne, etc. ;)
2. Yuu, how are Debilitate effective against the 8-bit Heroes? Unless they are X-in-one, it’s impractical. There are so many of them, yet debilitate is only a single-target spell.
3. Ahh… now I understand why Takeru’s Golden Persona is named Joukai. Joukai (上界) is Japanese for ‘Upper World/Heaven’, referencing his former arrogance. I thought it’s a typo of Youkai all this time.
4. Shadow Mitsuo, you lose because you only rely on one thing, fear. Even this fear is only related to Shadow Mitsuo. Dylan is not fearful at all, except if the hallucination that you make is something like ‘Yukiko got killed in the future’. Oh no, I should have stop making ideas for the antagonists.
Well, that’s the end of my review for today. Keep Update!
12/3/2017 c153 RosyMiranto18
Dui bu qi! Please forgive for the late review; I need to sorted out my drama play last morning before I can finally make a review out of this now. Anyway, let’s move on to the actual review, hehe.
Ahh… yes, splitting up the chapters is a great idea, especially when you looked at ‘Camellia of Constancy’ Chapters.
I didn’t expect the only Jones-es (i.e. Takeru and Travis) of all people are the ones stranded on the cabin; I expected Yukiko and Dylan though. If you’re asking what Jones is; it’s an Indonesian slang, and I can tell you if you asked.
What the hell is Kamui Kablooie? I swear if it’s one of your puns again…
And Shadow Mitsuo has returned. The first is in gold, then it comes with only a speedo, and now it’s a walking Tron Reference… #P996-Lazer’sPrize-LevelofSarcasm
Well, that’s the end of my review for today; I hope you can get a weekly update as you want. Keep Update!
Dui bu qi! Please forgive for the late review; I need to sorted out my drama play last morning before I can finally make a review out of this now. Anyway, let’s move on to the actual review, hehe.
Ahh… yes, splitting up the chapters is a great idea, especially when you looked at ‘Camellia of Constancy’ Chapters.
I didn’t expect the only Jones-es (i.e. Takeru and Travis) of all people are the ones stranded on the cabin; I expected Yukiko and Dylan though. If you’re asking what Jones is; it’s an Indonesian slang, and I can tell you if you asked.
What the hell is Kamui Kablooie? I swear if it’s one of your puns again…
And Shadow Mitsuo has returned. The first is in gold, then it comes with only a speedo, and now it’s a walking Tron Reference… #P996-Lazer’sPrize-LevelofSarcasm
Well, that’s the end of my review for today; I hope you can get a weekly update as you want. Keep Update!
11/24/2017 c152 RosyMiranto18
Auww… to be honest I expecting the Seekers of Truth to telling each of their ghost story, but oh well (︵,)
Anyway, because of its short length, I will focus on the ski lodge instead.
Hmm… Shiroyama... White Mountain. A bit too ‘meh’ without any hidden or interesting meaning, but it’s a nice one. Something like Nakasorahayashi Ski Resort (中空林スキー場) feels better. Literally, it’s ‘Middle Sky Forest’, but it can be read as ‘Hollow Forest’ (Chuukuu-rin).
Actually, Inaba is prettly close to Mount Fuji if you placed it on the same spot as the city it based on, Fuefuki in Yamanashi Prefecture (only 82 kilometers away). However, I think the better possibility for the location of the ski trip is somewhere in Yatsugatake Mountains. Moreover, it has an interesting legend, one that is related to Yukiko’s initial Persona, Konohanasakuya-hime.
“According to legend, Yatsugatake was once higher than Mount Fuji, but Konohanasakuya-hime, the goddess of Mount Fuji, tore it down out of jealousy, leaving the collection of peaks we have today. Paul Hunt muses that this might not be far from the truth considering that Yatsugatake is older than Fuji and as Fuji rose in prominence Yatsugatake wore away.”
Well, that’s the end of my review for today. Keep Update!
Auww… to be honest I expecting the Seekers of Truth to telling each of their ghost story, but oh well (︵,)
Anyway, because of its short length, I will focus on the ski lodge instead.
Hmm… Shiroyama... White Mountain. A bit too ‘meh’ without any hidden or interesting meaning, but it’s a nice one. Something like Nakasorahayashi Ski Resort (中空林スキー場) feels better. Literally, it’s ‘Middle Sky Forest’, but it can be read as ‘Hollow Forest’ (Chuukuu-rin).
Actually, Inaba is prettly close to Mount Fuji if you placed it on the same spot as the city it based on, Fuefuki in Yamanashi Prefecture (only 82 kilometers away). However, I think the better possibility for the location of the ski trip is somewhere in Yatsugatake Mountains. Moreover, it has an interesting legend, one that is related to Yukiko’s initial Persona, Konohanasakuya-hime.
“According to legend, Yatsugatake was once higher than Mount Fuji, but Konohanasakuya-hime, the goddess of Mount Fuji, tore it down out of jealousy, leaving the collection of peaks we have today. Paul Hunt muses that this might not be far from the truth considering that Yatsugatake is older than Fuji and as Fuji rose in prominence Yatsugatake wore away.”
Well, that’s the end of my review for today. Keep Update!
11/16/2017 c151 RosyMiranto18
Welcome back! :D
Don’t worry about the longer updates, I’m fine with it. No offense, but there are other fics that I’m more looking forward to wait. Anyway, let’s start the review.
Well… shit, Yuu is in a BSOD Mode, I hope he will be fine until he saved Marie. Though I wonder when he will awaken Izanagi no Ookami, here (ala P4G the Animation) or when he fights Izanami no Ookami (like the Game and everything else)
Marie has a power to controlling weather, which means that this Freak Weather is related to her psyche’s condition, isn’t it?
Keep Calm Dylan, that podium arrangement will be useless if you can’t control your temper and emotion, so please be careful for that.
Anyway Dylan, why did you not try Divide et Impera? Even if you don’t have any concrete evidence, at least it’s good enough to plant the seed of doubt into Antonov’s mind regardless of his alliance’s result with Isshaku.
One last thing, maybe the ‘Sekarang Kankernya Bersabar’ (I intentionally change ‘him’ into Indonesia) is a Troll and/or hates your guts, so please don’t be bothered from it and Keep Update!
Welcome back! :D
Don’t worry about the longer updates, I’m fine with it. No offense, but there are other fics that I’m more looking forward to wait. Anyway, let’s start the review.
Well… shit, Yuu is in a BSOD Mode, I hope he will be fine until he saved Marie. Though I wonder when he will awaken Izanagi no Ookami, here (ala P4G the Animation) or when he fights Izanami no Ookami (like the Game and everything else)
Marie has a power to controlling weather, which means that this Freak Weather is related to her psyche’s condition, isn’t it?
Keep Calm Dylan, that podium arrangement will be useless if you can’t control your temper and emotion, so please be careful for that.
Anyway Dylan, why did you not try Divide et Impera? Even if you don’t have any concrete evidence, at least it’s good enough to plant the seed of doubt into Antonov’s mind regardless of his alliance’s result with Isshaku.
One last thing, maybe the ‘Sekarang Kankernya Bersabar’ (I intentionally change ‘him’ into Indonesia) is a Troll and/or hates your guts, so please don’t be bothered from it and Keep Update!