for Faker11/13/2016 c20 Guest
This chapter was just pathetic
This chapter was just pathetic
9/29/2016 c2 
11Some Guy In An Ambulance
Just saying, it would be funny for him to do all that running...and not have anyone be in the jail cell. I mean, it's not like the OC knows what timeline he's in. I mean, imagine me waking up in the Hidden Leaf, and running into the Hokage house, I see only the four heads up on the monument, and assume the 3rd is in power, woops it's the fouth, or the fifth, lol...
11Some Guy In An AmbulanceJust saying, it would be funny for him to do all that running...and not have anyone be in the jail cell. I mean, it's not like the OC knows what timeline he's in. I mean, imagine me waking up in the Hidden Leaf, and running into the Hokage house, I see only the four heads up on the monument, and assume the 3rd is in power, woops it's the fouth, or the fifth, lol...
6/24/2016 c14 Bossman
Why is the MC so friggin' stupid? If he wanted to bash Nami's skull just do it. Nobody bat an eye for that. He's irrational that's what.
Why is the MC so friggin' stupid? If he wanted to bash Nami's skull just do it. Nobody bat an eye for that. He's irrational that's what.
6/22/2016 c21 1haruaji11
Thanks for the recommendations will read some of these worry,take the time you need to comeback and i will still waiting,this is story is just so funny.
1haruaji11Thanks for the recommendations will read some of these worry,take the time you need to comeback and i will still waiting,this is story is just so funny.
6/1/2016 c20 1haruaji11
Just pass all night reading your fanfic,no regrets.i really want you to get to continue,is a really great is one of story that are better of the rest,is not a cliche,has a good written is doesnt become repetitive and have a really good protagonist who isnt just a Gary Stu.
i know it has been 5 months since your last update but can you please continue this amazing
1haruaji11Just pass all night reading your fanfic,no regrets.i really want you to get to continue,is a really great is one of story that are better of the rest,is not a cliche,has a good written is doesnt become repetitive and have a really good protagonist who isnt just a Gary Stu.
i know it has been 5 months since your last update but can you please continue this amazing
4/15/2016 c20 7littleditto
This looks really good. I'm looking forward to what you have next.
My only complaint would be the spelling issues and the fact some sentences seem to be missing words throughout the story. I don't remember if you said you have a beta or not, but if you don't I'm available to help out. I'm not an official beta, but I can go back and fix the mistakes in the previous/future chapters if you need.
Looking forward to the next update
7littledittoThis looks really good. I'm looking forward to what you have next.
My only complaint would be the spelling issues and the fact some sentences seem to be missing words throughout the story. I don't remember if you said you have a beta or not, but if you don't I'm available to help out. I'm not an official beta, but I can go back and fix the mistakes in the previous/future chapters if you need.
Looking forward to the next update
3/10/2016 c20 Stolid-Scholar
Sorry, made it halfway through this chapter and had to stop. Everyone ganging up on Patrick like that is completely absurd considering how everyone on the crew constantly screws up in one way or another, especially luffy, and no one does more than yell a bit. A group shaming just for insulting a person and then not just calmly accepting death was a bit too much, sorry.
Sorry, made it halfway through this chapter and had to stop. Everyone ganging up on Patrick like that is completely absurd considering how everyone on the crew constantly screws up in one way or another, especially luffy, and no one does more than yell a bit. A group shaming just for insulting a person and then not just calmly accepting death was a bit too much, sorry.
3/1/2016 c20 5Skysword
Okay, so this is pretty awesome so far. I like your oc and your latest chapter had me holding back laughter but I've got some questions about him. Okay so he hates the show Naruto but has cosplayed as a character from it? Something happen to make him hate the show? Also will his sewing/costume skills ever come up again? It's a legit talent of his that you mentioned early on that could surprise surprise the crew. Also how long would it take before the crew notice the small things off about him. Like would he understand the worth of the currency? Idk I'd just think character interaction outside canon plot is amazing. Like the whole Sanji fight scene this chapter. That was amazing. You did an awesome job.
5SkyswordOkay, so this is pretty awesome so far. I like your oc and your latest chapter had me holding back laughter but I've got some questions about him. Okay so he hates the show Naruto but has cosplayed as a character from it? Something happen to make him hate the show? Also will his sewing/costume skills ever come up again? It's a legit talent of his that you mentioned early on that could surprise surprise the crew. Also how long would it take before the crew notice the small things off about him. Like would he understand the worth of the currency? Idk I'd just think character interaction outside canon plot is amazing. Like the whole Sanji fight scene this chapter. That was amazing. You did an awesome job.
2/5/2016 c20 hirokidijou
I love this story! And this Patrick character, you made it as if he was really in One Piece. Excited to know how the story's going to develop further.
Him, pissing Sanji's off pfft- had a pretty good laugh there. Thanks.
I love this story! And this Patrick character, you made it as if he was really in One Piece. Excited to know how the story's going to develop further.
Him, pissing Sanji's off pfft- had a pretty good laugh there. Thanks.
1/30/2016 c20 Flying F
I started working on a well written review of this story but the I said fuck it, because you don't deserve it. Do something else then write fanfic because you as a person suck at it. Maybe if you had updated regularly then I could over look all those other flaws but you don't and you don't care so stop writing because you are bad at it. And I highly doubt your other story will be good. Take up yoga or mounting biking but you should leave writing to people that has some follow through!
Sincerely Flying F
I started working on a well written review of this story but the I said fuck it, because you don't deserve it. Do something else then write fanfic because you as a person suck at it. Maybe if you had updated regularly then I could over look all those other flaws but you don't and you don't care so stop writing because you are bad at it. And I highly doubt your other story will be good. Take up yoga or mounting biking but you should leave writing to people that has some follow through!
Sincerely Flying F
1/29/2016 c20 Guest
Awesome! I'm glad you're back.
Awesome! I'm glad you're back.