for Faker1/29/2016 c20 Guest
If you want your story to be good you need him to have the final form of ichigos fullbring by drum island at the earliest and alabasta at the latest
If you want your story to be good you need him to have the final form of ichigos fullbring by drum island at the earliest and alabasta at the latest
1/29/2016 c16 Guest
You better give your oc ichigos final full ring otherwise this story will be ruined
You better give your oc ichigos final full ring otherwise this story will be ruined
1/29/2016 c8 Guest
You need to have him get ichigos final form full bring quickly so he stands a better chance though change how the armor/clothing looks so he can wear it all the time keep the white boots and the white gauntlets as well as the white chest piece but give him regular pants under the white armor stuff as well as a short or lo g sleeve shirt with a sleevless trench coat looking thing with a hood rather then the black bodysuit
You need to have him get ichigos final form full bring quickly so he stands a better chance though change how the armor/clothing looks so he can wear it all the time keep the white boots and the white gauntlets as well as the white chest piece but give him regular pants under the white armor stuff as well as a short or lo g sleeve shirt with a sleevless trench coat looking thing with a hood rather then the black bodysuit
1/29/2016 c6 Guest
Get a beta your story is t bad but the slight grammar mistakes lessen its quality mostly its just mispelled and misused words
Get a beta your story is t bad but the slight grammar mistakes lessen its quality mostly its just mispelled and misused words
1/30/2016 c2 Scrolling
How did he know what time line he was in to rush towards the marine base to find zoro
How did he know what time line he was in to rush towards the marine base to find zoro
1/29/2016 c20 kenegi
The one thing I love about you story is that you don't automatically become good friends with the crew.
The one thing I love about you story is that you don't automatically become good friends with the crew.
1/29/2016 c19 Monzter1
Patrick is gonna get his ass kicked! I don't want it to happen, but sadly it's the truth... Unless something or someone manages to save him.
Patrick is gonna get his ass kicked! I don't want it to happen, but sadly it's the truth... Unless something or someone manages to save him.
1/21/2016 c17 namvrando
Can you power him up already? Its taking way to long. It doesnt even have to be a full power up, you can show his progress in small increments.
Can you power him up already? Its taking way to long. It doesnt even have to be a full power up, you can show his progress in small increments.
10/16/2015 c16 Great job
I kinda didn't want to take the time to sign in (lazy I know), but that was excellent!, it has been a longtime since a story has gotten me actually nervous about what comes next. Amazing job!
I kinda didn't want to take the time to sign in (lazy I know), but that was excellent!, it has been a longtime since a story has gotten me actually nervous about what comes next. Amazing job!
10/16/2015 c19 rheascarlet
i love your story.. i love the realness in this.. i love your character personality.. for claiming the hateness for stupidity.. he sure fit well in the group full of stupid people.. i don't know is it bcz his intellegentness, or his sarcasme, or his realistic mind, or his little sadistic personality.. or his mr. my mouth is given me trouble as always personality.. i just love it.. 3
i love your story.. i love the realness in this.. i love your character personality.. for claiming the hateness for stupidity.. he sure fit well in the group full of stupid people.. i don't know is it bcz his intellegentness, or his sarcasme, or his realistic mind, or his little sadistic personality.. or his mr. my mouth is given me trouble as always personality.. i just love it.. 3
10/15/2015 c19 
11Astroman1000
YAYAYAY but no beta by me
Great story I'm loving the effects to the plot and story
Can't wait for the next chapter
Thx
11Astroman1000YAYAYAY but no beta by me
Great story I'm loving the effects to the plot and story
Can't wait for the next chapter
Thx