for Faker4/29/2015 c15 
3OnepieceZoroOc
love this story so far is he going to be doing bringers light next chapter? and i think you should give him a second full bring maybe it having to do with his treasure pendant? and maybe having it turn into some kind of syth or sword to give him another type of close ranged weapon that could do more damage? i'm not that knowledgeable on the fullbringer since i stopped watching bleach just after they took orihime... i think thats how you spell it anyway
3OnepieceZoroOclove this story so far is he going to be doing bringers light next chapter? and i think you should give him a second full bring maybe it having to do with his treasure pendant? and maybe having it turn into some kind of syth or sword to give him another type of close ranged weapon that could do more damage? i'm not that knowledgeable on the fullbringer since i stopped watching bleach just after they took orihime... i think thats how you spell it anyway
4/26/2015 c15 Cyannel
I've been hesitant to add this story to my favourites, but I think I've decided with this chapter. I really dig this. Patrick's not too powerful, and he's, well, doubting himself. Most OC's run headfirst into a fight because they're all powerful and confident and get out of a fight with, like, a paper cut (can you tell the amount of shit I've been reading till I found this?), but this guy's scared. It's great! I mean, I admire his bravery. And damn, I feel sorry for the amount of injuries these guys are getting.
AND THE PLOTS CHANGING HOLY SHIT WHAT EVEN IS THIS.
I wonder if he's realized the fact that his friends are probably dead. Not the best note to end a review on... erm, keep up the awesome work!
I've been hesitant to add this story to my favourites, but I think I've decided with this chapter. I really dig this. Patrick's not too powerful, and he's, well, doubting himself. Most OC's run headfirst into a fight because they're all powerful and confident and get out of a fight with, like, a paper cut (can you tell the amount of shit I've been reading till I found this?), but this guy's scared. It's great! I mean, I admire his bravery. And damn, I feel sorry for the amount of injuries these guys are getting.
AND THE PLOTS CHANGING HOLY SHIT WHAT EVEN IS THIS.
I wonder if he's realized the fact that his friends are probably dead. Not the best note to end a review on... erm, keep up the awesome work!
4/26/2015 c15 124701rose
-V-U Poor Patrick. Although I got to say, his heart is definitely made out of gold, and you are very good at making this story realistic. Not to mention the suspense . . .
124701rose-V-U Poor Patrick. Although I got to say, his heart is definitely made out of gold, and you are very good at making this story realistic. Not to mention the suspense . . .
4/26/2015 c15 Descendant of Artorias
I'm honestly curious about something the name of the story is Faker and your OC's last name is Falso did you do this intentionally since falso means fake or false in Spanish.
I'm honestly curious about something the name of the story is Faker and your OC's last name is Falso did you do this intentionally since falso means fake or false in Spanish.
4/26/2015 c15 1Ranger Station Charlie
Good chapter your action scenes are getting better. Patrick sure doesn't hold back on his profanity. Like Patrick's excuse for the combat pass. Never know what your find in the ocean seriously some of the stuff seen in the show makes the combat pass look plain in comparison.
1Ranger Station CharlieGood chapter your action scenes are getting better. Patrick sure doesn't hold back on his profanity. Like Patrick's excuse for the combat pass. Never know what your find in the ocean seriously some of the stuff seen in the show makes the combat pass look plain in comparison.
4/19/2015 c5 11tylermech66
so, uh, apparently the sucky real world is preferable to a dangerous fantasy world where you have powers...
Whoever this guy is sucks :P
11tylermech66so, uh, apparently the sucky real world is preferable to a dangerous fantasy world where you have powers...
Whoever this guy is sucks :P
2/11/2015 c14 LojikLordC
Thank you for the shoutout. About this chapter I love the action in this one you can really visualize what's going on it produces active imagery this is The best oc one piece fanfiction ive ever read cant wait for the part when they fight cp9 again please continue this
Thank you for the shoutout. About this chapter I love the action in this one you can really visualize what's going on it produces active imagery this is The best oc one piece fanfiction ive ever read cant wait for the part when they fight cp9 again please continue this
2/4/2015 c11 LojikLordC
This story is so great and the character development is outstanding I cant wait for the next chapter please continue this
This story is so great and the character development is outstanding I cant wait for the next chapter please continue this