7/12/2019 c4 Divine Blizzard
Nick "Ghost" Reyes
Captain
Male
American-Indonesian
Black hair
176 cm
84 kg
29 yrs
Serious, well-behaved, disciplined
US Air Force/ Task force 141
A-10 Warthog
Scar-H
Born in Jakarta, then moved to LA. Nick joined the Air Force at age 22 and rose up the ranks during the years, he is known as ghost due to disappearing after his strafing runs.

1/17/2018 c1 2That One Staff Sergeant
Just came back to read and it's no wonder that I missed this years ago, but now that I gained interest in the matters of missile defense, I'm gonna have to nitpick: SM-3s aren't meant for shooting down cruise missiles. As ABMs, they're made to fly up to exoatmospheric altitudes and destroy ballistic missile RVs by kinetic hit-to-kill means.

For shooting down cruise missiles, SM-6 and SM-2s are certain to be used. The ESSM would also be capable.

3/11/2017 c10 1Gamerman22
Rin, no! I hope she live. Vera Neckiton... it'll be interesting.

3/11/2017 c10 4Noel Harkov
Dang... the plot thickened. The plot for Chapter 10 'Joker Game' is a heck rush indeed, for this chapter. Sure it did, like the chapter title said. Hopper freed prisoners, 108th make appearance and shot down new Warlocks, Rin got shot, Spec Ops spies introduced everywhere (Sniper Elite and Joker Game references among them), fucking Reaper here (no, I like him very much, playful guy hinted), chop chop Doktors appearances at nowhere, Blackie machine sci-fi history introduced. And, jezz fuck, fucking trigger happy idiots :V
Still, good story overall. Nice continuation and a promising future plots. Please do continue this story that starting to go very far! Well, this is a fanfiction, so feel free to throw anything you like to make it better and.. crazier? Well, things getting cramp here though. Try lessen up the pacing to something that readers could follow better than stuffing everything in with the basic explanation only. A deeper explanation and a slower flow will make the story much better and easier to digest. That's my only advice I could give you for now~
Looking forward for next chapter~

3/3/2017 c3 guest
this fanfiction is almost different than that fuji92 Strike Witches: The Paradox Timeline.

5/15/2016 c9 Criticman
Stories for weaboos and reading this feels like to much childish... #lol

2.8 out of 10. Needs more WATER! - IGN

I had to bleach my eyes every time I finish the chapters - Metacritic

3/12/2016 c9 Noel Harkov
Finally, 9th chapter. This chapter seems fresh comparing to other chapters, probably because you done much in your original stories, thus gaining more experience. Anyway, I have to say you have to edit most of the previous chapter's minor mistakes that easy to be looked after.
So, your favourite anime list almost like mine. I guess most of the characters you took it from GATE, specifically the easy-guess Itami.
About the OC, I might as well give it some shot. If 'ya wanna some like two or three, I might as well think-tank some, as long as you give me an OC form.
Anyway, the chapter is quite good and better than the earlier chapters like chapter 1. This hold very much slice-of-life back at your world and a continuation of Bayu and The Interrogators. Looking forward for chapter 9.
Kye, out.

3/12/2016 c9 6Wardog1
Yes!Finally another great chapter, good work my friend!