for Strike Witches: Multi-Universe12/11/2014 c6 MODERN ARMED FORCE
yaelah njiir! Kelamaan update coeg! Wkwkwk! Oh ya! Emangnya agan mau nambahin Destroyer Mirai dari anime Zipang?
yaelah njiir! Kelamaan update coeg! Wkwkwk! Oh ya! Emangnya agan mau nambahin Destroyer Mirai dari anime Zipang?
12/10/2014 c6 
5Steryx the Squirrel Lord
Macam kenal saja babak dalam chapter ni... Anyway, I like how you describe the torture scene but too bad it wasn't really good to read. Censorship comes first! And looks like they've started to launch an operation to save them huh? Anyway, I can still see a lot grammar mistakes but I understand. Take it slow and you might just get a grip on it. I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
HARIMAU Actual, out.
5Steryx the Squirrel LordMacam kenal saja babak dalam chapter ni... Anyway, I like how you describe the torture scene but too bad it wasn't really good to read. Censorship comes first! And looks like they've started to launch an operation to save them huh? Anyway, I can still see a lot grammar mistakes but I understand. Take it slow and you might just get a grip on it. I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
HARIMAU Actual, out.
12/9/2014 c6 Maroon567
Tuh kayaknya para tentara minta di ulti kali (dikira DOTA 2) nyuilik yoshika...
Anyway you maybe can't grant bayu permission, but at least you can let USS wilbur crew raise hell...they maybe not chuck norris student but they are a mad dog student.
Low on ammo, fuel, lack of man power and they go in anyway, and they don't even know If the neuroi gonna show up...
And tenang katanya mulai tahun depan kurikulum 2013 bakal dihapus
Tuh kayaknya para tentara minta di ulti kali (dikira DOTA 2) nyuilik yoshika...
Anyway you maybe can't grant bayu permission, but at least you can let USS wilbur crew raise hell...they maybe not chuck norris student but they are a mad dog student.
Low on ammo, fuel, lack of man power and they go in anyway, and they don't even know If the neuroi gonna show up...
And tenang katanya mulai tahun depan kurikulum 2013 bakal dihapus
12/9/2014 c6 2That One Staff Sergeant
Looking good! Hopefully they'll be able to make do with whatever firepower they have left. Also, you should watch the anime version of Zipang! And btw lagi digempur juga nih sama Kurikulum 2013 XD
2That One Staff SergeantLooking good! Hopefully they'll be able to make do with whatever firepower they have left. Also, you should watch the anime version of Zipang! And btw lagi digempur juga nih sama Kurikulum 2013 XD
8/28/2014 c5 VSX-2018
Well, something's gonna happen in the future. I do hope you can keep up with this.
Well, something's gonna happen in the future. I do hope you can keep up with this.
8/25/2014 c5 COMMAND
pretty good story line. i can see that there are improvements in your grammar but needs more room for a better words. also, intel just confirmed that the next chapter would blow my mind. keep up the good work, i want to see an outstanding fic in the next chapter.
COMMAND, OUT
pretty good story line. i can see that there are improvements in your grammar but needs more room for a better words. also, intel just confirmed that the next chapter would blow my mind. keep up the good work, i want to see an outstanding fic in the next chapter.
COMMAND, OUT
8/21/2014 c5 6semperfi9988
your story is coming along pretty good. Also do you plan on using a striker unit that is modeled on the ASF-X Shinden 2 from Assault Horizon because that would be pretty nice
6semperfi9988your story is coming along pretty good. Also do you plan on using a striker unit that is modeled on the ASF-X Shinden 2 from Assault Horizon because that would be pretty nice
8/15/2014 c5 5Steryx the Squirrel Lord
Dude, looks like things turned bad huh? Better hope nothing bad happen to Bayu and the others. Plus, what intrigues me are the Karlslanders. What is their agenda? Plus, the 108th is making its move now. I like this...
5Steryx the Squirrel LordDude, looks like things turned bad huh? Better hope nothing bad happen to Bayu and the others. Plus, what intrigues me are the Karlslanders. What is their agenda? Plus, the 108th is making its move now. I like this...
8/15/2014 c5 CT-666
oh yeah, can't wait for the 108th's operation! i wonder how their reactions when they meet the neuroi and meet the witches from the other world? can't agree more until the next chapter!
oh yeah, can't wait for the 108th's operation! i wonder how their reactions when they meet the neuroi and meet the witches from the other world? can't agree more until the next chapter!
8/13/2014 c5 Maroon567
Hey boss kemana aja, maybe the miyafujixOC will have to put to hold...since the 501st and james team have bigger problem to worry about now.
I have a request, can you send the entire personel (or the entire FOB) to SW world since the 501st need all the help they can get
Although left some forces in europe since there's a certain black red giant crab...well you what they says there's no better kill like overkill
Hey boss kemana aja, maybe the miyafujixOC will have to put to hold...since the 501st and james team have bigger problem to worry about now.
I have a request, can you send the entire personel (or the entire FOB) to SW world since the 501st need all the help they can get
Although left some forces in europe since there's a certain black red giant crab...well you what they says there's no better kill like overkill
7/30/2014 c4 bad cop bad cop
please update this fic! it f***ing cool!
please update this fic! it f***ing cool!
6/30/2014 c4 Steryx the Squirrel Lord
Assalamualaikum. Good story line and this have attract me after I got out of PLKN at the first sight and I can see that you borrowed some ideas from my fanfic and also from the others as well. Cool down, I'm not angry coz' I think it makes your fic looks more interesting. Also, your grammar could need a little fix but overall it's quite interesting to read. I'm looking forward to see the next chapter (If I'm not lazying around and thinking of other shitty stuffs...) Oh and by the way, I'm praying you that you have a good Ramadan and Happy Eidul Fitri.
Assalamualaikum. Good story line and this have attract me after I got out of PLKN at the first sight and I can see that you borrowed some ideas from my fanfic and also from the others as well. Cool down, I'm not angry coz' I think it makes your fic looks more interesting. Also, your grammar could need a little fix but overall it's quite interesting to read. I'm looking forward to see the next chapter (If I'm not lazying around and thinking of other shitty stuffs...) Oh and by the way, I'm praying you that you have a good Ramadan and Happy Eidul Fitri.
6/30/2014 c4 VSX-2018
I'd like to make suggestions when the 501st and the 5th UNCF Fleet take their time off.
- Lynette, Erica, Lucchini and Shirley will enjoy reading Eyeshield 21, along with Yoshika. Yoshika can translate it for them to understand since they don't understand Japanese/Fusoan.
- If Bayu has other manga titles besides Eyeshield 21, he can lend them to Yoshika. So what other manga titles you know? If Bayu also have light novels, he can also lend them to her.
- During their day off, let's have them watch something on DVD/Blu-ray on 5th UNCF Fleet's TV and the Blu-ray or DVD player. Movies, anime, anime film, documentary, Western animation, sci-fi, chick flick, comedy, drama, TV series, etc.
- Let the 501st listen to the music from the 5th UNCF Fleet's world. Suggestion of songs from the Eighties (1980s or 80s) till today. Songs of the Fifties (1950s or 50s) till the Seventies (1970s or 70s) may also be included. I'm a fan of the 80s.
- The 501st, along with the UNCF, playing various sport activities. Badminton, dodgeball, soccer, baseball, basketball, volleybal, etc.
I think that's all for now. Enjoy your Ramadhan.
I'd like to make suggestions when the 501st and the 5th UNCF Fleet take their time off.
- Lynette, Erica, Lucchini and Shirley will enjoy reading Eyeshield 21, along with Yoshika. Yoshika can translate it for them to understand since they don't understand Japanese/Fusoan.
- If Bayu has other manga titles besides Eyeshield 21, he can lend them to Yoshika. So what other manga titles you know? If Bayu also have light novels, he can also lend them to her.
- During their day off, let's have them watch something on DVD/Blu-ray on 5th UNCF Fleet's TV and the Blu-ray or DVD player. Movies, anime, anime film, documentary, Western animation, sci-fi, chick flick, comedy, drama, TV series, etc.
- Let the 501st listen to the music from the 5th UNCF Fleet's world. Suggestion of songs from the Eighties (1980s or 80s) till today. Songs of the Fifties (1950s or 50s) till the Seventies (1970s or 70s) may also be included. I'm a fan of the 80s.
- The 501st, along with the UNCF, playing various sport activities. Badminton, dodgeball, soccer, baseball, basketball, volleybal, etc.
I think that's all for now. Enjoy your Ramadhan.