for And, The Giant Awoke7/2/2022 c13 Too much
It is sad. I was really enjoying this story. You can mention family all you want, but to make Tyrion the bank for the entire Lannister family is too much. It is not believable. Tywin and Cerci have tried to kill him multiple times and worse considering his first wife. Too much. It also makes no sense, Tommen is king, and the other will be married to a Martell. The two kids do not need money.
It is sad. I was really enjoying this story. You can mention family all you want, but to make Tyrion the bank for the entire Lannister family is too much. It is not believable. Tywin and Cerci have tried to kill him multiple times and worse considering his first wife. Too much. It also makes no sense, Tommen is king, and the other will be married to a Martell. The two kids do not need money.
6/29/2022 c29 MBB
Every time I think this story is finished, you add a new set of chapters :-)
The way you have Tyrion turn the ram from a functional to a cultural ornament is not only funny but also clever. As the knights of the Vale are also his allies, giving such a siege weapon to the Vale tribes might upset them. But now the tribes will be too worried about the dishonour of loosing or damaging it to actually use it in war.
Every time I think this story is finished, you add a new set of chapters :-)
The way you have Tyrion turn the ram from a functional to a cultural ornament is not only funny but also clever. As the knights of the Vale are also his allies, giving such a siege weapon to the Vale tribes might upset them. But now the tribes will be too worried about the dishonour of loosing or damaging it to actually use it in war.
6/17/2022 c29 Guest
more?
more?
6/4/2022 c16 
14Sweet Trufflepuff
I'm sorry. Did I miss a chapter where Dany goes to Meereen? Or
Are you following Canon for that whole line? Except Tyrion of course.
14Sweet TrufflepuffI'm sorry. Did I miss a chapter where Dany goes to Meereen? Or
Are you following Canon for that whole line? Except Tyrion of course.
5/30/2022 c14 32Poetheather1
There have been a lot of lovely little moments in this story. The amount of thought your characters put into things is very realistic and true to who they are. Nicely done
32Poetheather1There have been a lot of lovely little moments in this story. The amount of thought your characters put into things is very realistic and true to who they are. Nicely done
5/15/2022 c4 Guest
The story isn't bad, but it does have one big flaw. Why stay?
Cersei may be inflexible with her revenge plots. With enough time, however, she would kill him. There is no denying who has greater resources.
The real Tyrion Lannister would've vanished eastward, I should think. Either this or lied about going to Braavos and then traveled incognito to one free city or another.
Staying put after so many attempts is just asking to be murdered.
The story isn't bad, but it does have one big flaw. Why stay?
Cersei may be inflexible with her revenge plots. With enough time, however, she would kill him. There is no denying who has greater resources.
The real Tyrion Lannister would've vanished eastward, I should think. Either this or lied about going to Braavos and then traveled incognito to one free city or another.
Staying put after so many attempts is just asking to be murdered.
5/17/2022 c2 bobthebuilding
Song rhymes don't have to be one word.
"Any so our hero attacked in the kitchen,
Surrounded, his back to the wall,
When suddenly our small giant did pitch in,
A crossbow bolt to the back, a rogue did fall,
Facing the villains our giant did pitch in,
One by one they slew their foes all,
At that legendary battle of the kitchen."
Song rhymes don't have to be one word.
"Any so our hero attacked in the kitchen,
Surrounded, his back to the wall,
When suddenly our small giant did pitch in,
A crossbow bolt to the back, a rogue did fall,
Facing the villains our giant did pitch in,
One by one they slew their foes all,
At that legendary battle of the kitchen."
4/18/2022 c10 Rustyhava
Fan fiction saved my sanity during the pandemic, many smiles from your work. Thank you ️
Fan fiction saved my sanity during the pandemic, many smiles from your work. Thank you ️
3/3/2022 c29 Guest
A well did story that has an actual ending that is fine, it is a rare thing to find and most welcomed
A well did story that has an actual ending that is fine, it is a rare thing to find and most welcomed
3/2/2022 c29 Ted Hsu
About three months since the last piece. But it's a deep point to ponder. Tywin taught Tommen the lessons Joffrey failed to heed, and Tyrion mentored his nephew well too.
That Margaery showed she could think and had a thought process her grandmother Oleanna would be proud of showed she would never fall into the traps that were in Cersei's line. Her husband knew this, and also knew Dany's shortcomings. By wanting to fight for the Seven Kingdoms and the welfare of Westeros, he pointed out he wasn't interested in power but people, and showing his becoming King was not a feared thing.
Now, that the uneasy peace was brokered, what to do about keeping it will now be the million-dragon-question that must be asked.
About three months since the last piece. But it's a deep point to ponder. Tywin taught Tommen the lessons Joffrey failed to heed, and Tyrion mentored his nephew well too.
That Margaery showed she could think and had a thought process her grandmother Oleanna would be proud of showed she would never fall into the traps that were in Cersei's line. Her husband knew this, and also knew Dany's shortcomings. By wanting to fight for the Seven Kingdoms and the welfare of Westeros, he pointed out he wasn't interested in power but people, and showing his becoming King was not a feared thing.
Now, that the uneasy peace was brokered, what to do about keeping it will now be the million-dragon-question that must be asked.
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2/10/2022 c22 3Spica75
There was no "medieval stasis". The claim of it being a stagnant age is completely makebelief and madeup afterwards.
Mostly by a poet who was so frickin selfabsorbed that he proclaimed that obviously, any time before his illustrious works existed were clearly the dark ages.
Nowadays, almost noone remembers his name beyond scholars, because he wasn't even a good poet.
No, the "stasis" came during the renaissance. Medieval times invented and implemented, or at least started to implement, all the things that led up to modern times, interrupted by the severely backwards and regressive renaissance. Don't believe me? Try looking up why it's called "renaissance". It came from the belief in "ancient knowledge" which thanks to a lot of recovered old writings came back to life, but it also caused a religious resurgence which brought with it a horrible view on "science". During the renaissance, it was truly considered the height of science to ask a question like "how many angels can dance on the pin of a needle". While the church's primary business was persecution and prejudice. And witchhunts started.
While during medieval times, science, ACTUAL science, was greatly advanced and while the religious factions, the MANY MANY religious factions, bickered worse than old married couples, they bickered relatively peacefully.
During the high medieval times, more land in Europe was used for farming than ever since. Which is why the population also peaked so high then that it took several hundred years after the plague to reach the same levels again.
3Spica75There was no "medieval stasis". The claim of it being a stagnant age is completely makebelief and madeup afterwards.
Mostly by a poet who was so frickin selfabsorbed that he proclaimed that obviously, any time before his illustrious works existed were clearly the dark ages.
Nowadays, almost noone remembers his name beyond scholars, because he wasn't even a good poet.
No, the "stasis" came during the renaissance. Medieval times invented and implemented, or at least started to implement, all the things that led up to modern times, interrupted by the severely backwards and regressive renaissance. Don't believe me? Try looking up why it's called "renaissance". It came from the belief in "ancient knowledge" which thanks to a lot of recovered old writings came back to life, but it also caused a religious resurgence which brought with it a horrible view on "science". During the renaissance, it was truly considered the height of science to ask a question like "how many angels can dance on the pin of a needle". While the church's primary business was persecution and prejudice. And witchhunts started.
While during medieval times, science, ACTUAL science, was greatly advanced and while the religious factions, the MANY MANY religious factions, bickered worse than old married couples, they bickered relatively peacefully.
During the high medieval times, more land in Europe was used for farming than ever since. Which is why the population also peaked so high then that it took several hundred years after the plague to reach the same levels again.
2/10/2022 c14 Spica75
Nothing wrong with "fix-it" fics, as long as it is well done.
And this is well done.
Same as with overpowered protagonists, if it's a good story, who cares if the main character is overpowered to a ridiculous level?
One-punch man is a good example of it, he's so laughably absurdly overpowered that by conventional wisdom it should make the series terrible, but instead it's funny.
Nothing wrong with "fix-it" fics, as long as it is well done.
And this is well done.
Same as with overpowered protagonists, if it's a good story, who cares if the main character is overpowered to a ridiculous level?
One-punch man is a good example of it, he's so laughably absurdly overpowered that by conventional wisdom it should make the series terrible, but instead it's funny.