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11/4/2020 c5 Valkyrie3420
Haha this is going better and better.
5/25/2020 c5 NikosJohnny
Why don't you have ash date both of them Serena and leaf
2/15/2019 c4 1Skarloeyisyoung
Name : Cameron Owens
Age : 13
Appearance : Pale Skin, Shortish Black Hair, Red Eyes, Yellow Headphones, Bright Green T-Shirt, Dark Green Shorts and Bright Purple Sandals
Personality : A Kind and Helpful yet Quick-to-Anger Battler who can scare people off with his Animalistic Battle Stance and Styple
Pokemon : Shiny Lucario (Male)
2/5/2018 c1 Random guy
Update please
6/1/2017 c5 DRAGONWORKS
I REALLY can't wait for another chapter!
5/16/2017 c5 Dhar arpan
My review i love this fanfic very much i request you that next chapter will be very interesting
10/16/2016 c5 Azuray
Hey I just read the reviews,but can you do Calem x Leaf

That would be really awesome and unique
9/28/2016 c5 13PerParallel
Heheh... So Ash really wasn't dense. And you're right. There aren't many stories that don't involve betrayal where Ash reveals his undenseness. I'm pretty sure that spelled wrong, but all well. This is good so far.
9/25/2016 c5 3Lady of the Sky
Player 4 enters the ring.
9/25/2016 c4 Lady of the Sky
Korrina's boyfriend is hilarious. I like that Gary recognizes he wasn't a great friend to Ash early on, because as time has gone on, he's more willing to recognize his mistakes.
9/25/2016 c3 Lady of the Sky
Abruptly moving in childhood is the worst.
9/25/2016 c2 Lady of the Sky
*more fun than needless drama. Now to find out why Ash is putting up this illusion.
(sorry for the early send, phone slipped)
9/25/2016 c2 Lady of the Sky
No Iris, no problem, honestly. This fic is off to a good start, and I like that everybody's being friendly with each other. That's always morw
7/26/2016 c5 Guest
let us call Calem x Leaf
Adoreshipping for obvious reasons
adore sounds like amour ash based of red and leaf is based of her game version same goes for serena and calem
6/28/2016 c5 Pokemon fan
Please update this story this fanfic was getting more interesting I hope u hadn't forgotten about this fanfic we need more chapters for this story ash and leaf in my opinion make a better couple
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