for Ex to See7/18/2015 c1 
8Marius blowthebarricade
Soooooo...I was looking through your stories, and I thought this one looked very interesting, so I decided to read it. I am very glad I did, and I highly enjoyed it!
At the top of this story you commented that Enjolras and Eponine were OOC, but I really did like the way you portrayed them although it is not the typical portrayal. It was different and I liked that.
To be perfectly honest, I do not think Eponine was out of character at all. To be, she seemed perfectly in character if you are going to go by Hugo's book. Like you said yourself, she was raised by con-artists and horrible parents, became a thief, lives on the streets, steels and fights for her life, has probably never stepped a foot in church in her entire life, was probably not even taught the difference between right and wrong, she probably DOES NOT have the best morals, if any at all, at least until she meets Marius. That being said, I do not hate her at all. I thought she was quite in character-sneaky, cunning, dishonest-and we all love our thieved Eponine. ;)
Although "Cannon Enjolras" probably would not play along with her game (but let's be honest, cannon Enjolras detests everything that does not have to do with the word "revolution"), I liked Enjolras in this story a lot too. There is nothing wrong with changing up a character to fit a story, in my opinion. I think it is good to take original characters and make them "your own" whilst not changing who they actually are, which you have done. And Enjolras actually does have feelings for Eponine, so his "playing along" was not just because he "wanted her" but also because cares about her. I am sure he was angry at Montparnasse too when she told him how he cheated and broke her heart. Even in the brick, I think Enjolras has, although a very cold one, a good heart. I liked him and Eponine both in this story.
I think was a very good story, great idea, very creative, very entertaining. I love the play on words as well: "You just want your ex to see" "I just want you ecstasy." I would love to see this turned into a multi-chapter fic. I think it has a lot of potential, as Enjolras and Eponine's "fake relationship could develop and become real, and Montparnasse could become jealous and hungry for revenge. I would love it read it! If not, however, it was a great one-shot and I'm so glad a read it! Another fantastic story by a fantastic writer!
8Marius blowthebarricadeSoooooo...I was looking through your stories, and I thought this one looked very interesting, so I decided to read it. I am very glad I did, and I highly enjoyed it!
At the top of this story you commented that Enjolras and Eponine were OOC, but I really did like the way you portrayed them although it is not the typical portrayal. It was different and I liked that.
To be perfectly honest, I do not think Eponine was out of character at all. To be, she seemed perfectly in character if you are going to go by Hugo's book. Like you said yourself, she was raised by con-artists and horrible parents, became a thief, lives on the streets, steels and fights for her life, has probably never stepped a foot in church in her entire life, was probably not even taught the difference between right and wrong, she probably DOES NOT have the best morals, if any at all, at least until she meets Marius. That being said, I do not hate her at all. I thought she was quite in character-sneaky, cunning, dishonest-and we all love our thieved Eponine. ;)
Although "Cannon Enjolras" probably would not play along with her game (but let's be honest, cannon Enjolras detests everything that does not have to do with the word "revolution"), I liked Enjolras in this story a lot too. There is nothing wrong with changing up a character to fit a story, in my opinion. I think it is good to take original characters and make them "your own" whilst not changing who they actually are, which you have done. And Enjolras actually does have feelings for Eponine, so his "playing along" was not just because he "wanted her" but also because cares about her. I am sure he was angry at Montparnasse too when she told him how he cheated and broke her heart. Even in the brick, I think Enjolras has, although a very cold one, a good heart. I liked him and Eponine both in this story.
I think was a very good story, great idea, very creative, very entertaining. I love the play on words as well: "You just want your ex to see" "I just want you ecstasy." I would love to see this turned into a multi-chapter fic. I think it has a lot of potential, as Enjolras and Eponine's "fake relationship could develop and become real, and Montparnasse could become jealous and hungry for revenge. I would love it read it! If not, however, it was a great one-shot and I'm so glad a read it! Another fantastic story by a fantastic writer!
12/27/2014 c1 2MerelyAPuppet
Ahem...in a restaurant? Well now Ponine, think it's time to find a room for both of you! (Either that or the customers could leave the restaurant so the two could have some privacy.)
2MerelyAPuppetAhem...in a restaurant? Well now Ponine, think it's time to find a room for both of you! (Either that or the customers could leave the restaurant so the two could have some privacy.)
11/20/2014 c1 Smithy
Would it, Dirty Harry? {I actually saw one of those 'Dirty Harry' movies, and it gave San Francisco a bad rap. Thank God for 'Streets of San Francisco', and 'Full House'} Anyway, in the immortal words of Sophia Petrillo, "SERVES HIM RIGHT!" He, like some guy on the 'Golden Girls', lied to her.
Would it, Dirty Harry? {I actually saw one of those 'Dirty Harry' movies, and it gave San Francisco a bad rap. Thank God for 'Streets of San Francisco', and 'Full House'} Anyway, in the immortal words of Sophia Petrillo, "SERVES HIM RIGHT!" He, like some guy on the 'Golden Girls', lied to her.
6/9/2014 c1 13Break This Spell626
Oh this is awesome and so different from Worlds Away. I listened to the song as I read the fic and it fits perfectly! And at the end, I don't know if it was intentional, though it seems to good not to be, but I love the play on words with ex to see and ecstasy.
13Break This Spell626Oh this is awesome and so different from Worlds Away. I listened to the song as I read the fic and it fits perfectly! And at the end, I don't know if it was intentional, though it seems to good not to be, but I love the play on words with ex to see and ecstasy.
6/2/2014 c1 Guest
That was really good! Like seriously!
I loved this so much!
That was really good! Like seriously!
I loved this so much!
5/29/2014 c1 Alex-samsprout
Why was Montparnasse pissed? He cheated on her, not the other way around lol Guys are just bleh
You are a genius, great job
Why was Montparnasse pissed? He cheated on her, not the other way around lol Guys are just bleh
You are a genius, great job
5/28/2014 c1 xbeautifulqueenx
Poor Enjolras! But I love how he helps her although she's just using him. This is a nice story and I don't mind if it turns out to be multi chaptered :D
And now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to listen to the song.
Poor Enjolras! But I love how he helps her although she's just using him. This is a nice story and I don't mind if it turns out to be multi chaptered :D
And now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to listen to the song.