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6/9/2014 c1 8IsaBean
Love this! Plz continue!
6/7/2014 c5 2Imperial Briton
your doing well, keep your confidence.
I knew that Dick had an uncle called Richard [he's named after him] perhaps, Dick could have the Magyar [Hungarian] version of his name, Rickard; whilst Richard is the Romanian.

I'm fine with the spelling mistakes and punctuation [not all of us are OCD, or Sherlock Holmes] and in time things will become more fluent for you.

I speak from experience. though I still have to come up with plots that last longer than short stories [or one chapter pages].

Your Anglicised Prussian Reviewer

Kunneg_Andris
5/31/2014 c2 22Chalant Lover
Wait I don't understand this chapter? Who's talking and who's asking the questions?
5/31/2014 c2 21PrettyKitty Luvs U
Ooooooh... DUDE! The suspense is seriously killing me! I hope Rob's gonna be okay! Hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry up and UPDAAAAATE!
5/30/2014 c1 22Chalant Lover
I like it so far! As long as you keep progressing with grammer and spelling then you're good :) I always like proof reading it before posting :) And why don't you like long reviews? They're my specialty LOL
5/30/2014 c1 21PrettyKitty Luvs U
I really liked it! It's a good start. I hope Robs okay cause this is the day his parents died...

Anywho, *coughs* I likes *coughs* :)
5/29/2014 c1 HEXGIRL33349-ABANDONEDACCOUNT
I like the story plot.
Update soon. Just tighten up your spelling and it will perfect.
5/29/2014 c1 8Samlu707
ooh I like! Please] update I want to know what the prank is!
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