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5/31/2014 c1 11Chaos Blitz
Well... It looks like I found my newest story to follow. You know it's going to be good when the prologue could stand alone as a stellar story in it's own right.
Not to mention it's my favourite pairing of life.

Keep up the good work friend :]
5/31/2014 c1 1Rojaru
I will start off by saying that this was just so goddamn cute. Especially with Gohan's unfamiliarity with the city and how it works. I thoroughly enjoyed Gohan and Erasa's moments the most in this chapter, even Videl, who wasn't on alot, was enjoyable, with her reaction to Erasa having wandered off with a boy.

Not much else to say though, but I believe there'd be more to it when the chapters go on. So, I'll be lookin' forward!
5/31/2014 c1 6BeneathThisMask
Sweet story, Aha!

Really love how you keep the characters true to their personalities (the bit with Goku mocking Chi-Chi was perfect). Look forward to reading more
5/31/2014 c1 1Egohan
liked the first chapter waiting for more
5/31/2014 c1 1Tomaka167
Well I was just doing my daily browse and found this. I quite like the idea of an Erasa/Gohan story as long as it's done correctly. Well written and well laid out so far. I will be following this with interest :)

Tomaka167
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