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11Chaos Blitz
Well... It looks like I found my newest story to follow. You know it's going to be good when the prologue could stand alone as a stellar story in it's own right.
Not to mention it's my favourite pairing of life.
Keep up the good work friend :]
11Chaos BlitzWell... It looks like I found my newest story to follow. You know it's going to be good when the prologue could stand alone as a stellar story in it's own right.
Not to mention it's my favourite pairing of life.
Keep up the good work friend :]
5/31/2014 c1 1Rojaru
I will start off by saying that this was just so goddamn cute. Especially with Gohan's unfamiliarity with the city and how it works. I thoroughly enjoyed Gohan and Erasa's moments the most in this chapter, even Videl, who wasn't on alot, was enjoyable, with her reaction to Erasa having wandered off with a boy.
Not much else to say though, but I believe there'd be more to it when the chapters go on. So, I'll be lookin' forward!
1RojaruI will start off by saying that this was just so goddamn cute. Especially with Gohan's unfamiliarity with the city and how it works. I thoroughly enjoyed Gohan and Erasa's moments the most in this chapter, even Videl, who wasn't on alot, was enjoyable, with her reaction to Erasa having wandered off with a boy.
Not much else to say though, but I believe there'd be more to it when the chapters go on. So, I'll be lookin' forward!
5/31/2014 c1 6BeneathThisMask
Sweet story, Aha!
Really love how you keep the characters true to their personalities (the bit with Goku mocking Chi-Chi was perfect). Look forward to reading more
6BeneathThisMaskSweet story, Aha!
Really love how you keep the characters true to their personalities (the bit with Goku mocking Chi-Chi was perfect). Look forward to reading more