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12/12/2021 c11 MojoBlack
Ahhh man the hype. The hype. The hype...Videl is persistent. Too persistent to a fault lol
Im actually rooting for Gohan and Goten to reach their absolute potential!
12/12/2021 c8 MojoBlack
Great training chapter! You made it incredibly realistic with Erasa failing despite her best efforts.
Lastly Gohan admiting that he's more like Piccolo as far as training methods was awesome! *Insert Piccolo is his real dad Joke*
12/12/2021 c7 MojoBlack
Im happy that Erasa finally learned how to fly, and that her and Gohan finally kissed!
It wasn't unexpected but it was definitely welcome!
Now it's onward to the training of Budokai. Im curious to how Erasa will do.
12/12/2021 c6 MojoBlack
You made Chi Chi likeable in this chapter for sure! Plus Gohan getting the spotlight in a story is always good!
12/12/2021 c4 MojoBlack
This outing was adorable and I actually can't wait for Gohan to teach Erasa how to fly. I doubt she'll be able to fight but I'm sure eventually her learning will serve a purpose
12/12/2021 c2 MojoBlack
Man this chapter brought back memories!
I remember being a kid and watching Gohan jump that high up and the baseball hitting the hat off his head.
Man the memories. You had me dying laughing.
Im glad Erasa is smart and straight to the point! In the real world just about everyone would figure out his identity lol.
12/8/2021 c9 2hadago77
Love it so far. Just discovered this pairing, and you have a multi-year fic unabandoned. You are awesome
11/15/2021 c101 Mugetsu700
Great story, I love this version of Gohan, this is the Gohan that many of us wanted to see after the cell, but it never came, you make a dream for many people.
Cell and Gohan's fight with God Ki is amazing, I can't wait to see how the story progresses.
11/5/2021 c1 MojoBlack
Not too familiar with the Cell Sage but holy crap this was a hell of a first chapter. I know this will be just as good as heart of adventure.
11/3/2021 c101 The Rocha
Seems like Cell screwed up. So much for the perfect being, more like "needs a few adjustments" being.

Is Cell form a mix of Super Saiyan God with the Golden Freeza form?

Is that Bulma using Android tech to make herself young and immortal? Seems more like a bio-tech thing, Piccolo seems to imply its like Cell. How young she is, now? Seems she went back to her teens.

Looks like Cell is going to try his old "Blow everybody" trick again.
11/2/2021 c101 X3runner
I was half expecting rose since his first hit of godly energy came from the Kai’s
11/2/2021 c101 10Power of Magic
That was a good chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one (which I'm hoping that you update as soon as you can). HA! Looks like Gohan is more powerful than Cell's benefactor was expecting, which is bad news for them when they meet Gohan
11/2/2021 c99 Jack87900216
Just so we're clear if you block me it proves the pint I made to be true
11/2/2021 c100 Jack87900216
I find it hilarious that you kept killing and vegeta dead even tho that's against their characters completely and they would choose to come back you are the worst type of db fan in the fact that you hate happy endings that toriyama came up with which therfore makes you a piece of shit
11/2/2021 c1 Jack87900216
Next time I won't be so nice in my review
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