for Unconventional Intervention6/7/2015 c1 
33Cengiz
hahaha, that was hilarious. Go Abby, you rock!
I'm curious at where this will end up with Becker, Jess and Vincent. Oh and how Becker is doing his undercover mission as a nerd.
:D
33Cengizhahaha, that was hilarious. Go Abby, you rock!
I'm curious at where this will end up with Becker, Jess and Vincent. Oh and how Becker is doing his undercover mission as a nerd.
:D
1/11/2015 c16 5Prawn Crackers
Awww thank you for the lively thank you *hugs*
This was a brilliant finale!
Connor must be a a big fan of Rise to give Abby the Bad Wolf shirt!
And that poor Fitzsimmons soldier...I'm sure hectried his best! ;-)
And I think nerdy Becker with his glasses is really cute! :-D
Love the laser tag game. Nobody outshoots Becker! LOL!
And special thanks for the happy, happy ending with THAT kiss! YAY!
Tempus fugit! LOL! Poor Matt! But then, he had it coming...*grins cheekily*
5Prawn CrackersAwww thank you for the lively thank you *hugs*
This was a brilliant finale!
Connor must be a a big fan of Rise to give Abby the Bad Wolf shirt!
And that poor Fitzsimmons soldier...I'm sure hectried his best! ;-)
And I think nerdy Becker with his glasses is really cute! :-D
Love the laser tag game. Nobody outshoots Becker! LOL!
And special thanks for the happy, happy ending with THAT kiss! YAY!
Tempus fugit! LOL! Poor Matt! But then, he had it coming...*grins cheekily*
1/9/2015 c16 72DrawnToDarkness
I'm sad that this is the end of the story - and our last glimpse of Geeky!Becker - but so very many things about it made me smile!
The references... FitzSimmons (*grin*), Bad Wolf (love Doctor Who!) and Shiny! (Oh, Firefly, come back...) Perfect, every one of them.
And Jess and Becker... *does a happy dance and squee* I love, love, love it! Logan is brilliant and I love the whole laser quest idea - that was genius, the thought of Becker and Jim taking down the rich guys was fantastic.
And I love that Becker's such an attentive boyfriend and is putting the others to shame... Perfect!
I've loved every part of this story so thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us! If you feel you want to write another, you know you'll always have an avid reader in me! xx
72DrawnToDarknessI'm sad that this is the end of the story - and our last glimpse of Geeky!Becker - but so very many things about it made me smile!
The references... FitzSimmons (*grin*), Bad Wolf (love Doctor Who!) and Shiny! (Oh, Firefly, come back...) Perfect, every one of them.
And Jess and Becker... *does a happy dance and squee* I love, love, love it! Logan is brilliant and I love the whole laser quest idea - that was genius, the thought of Becker and Jim taking down the rich guys was fantastic.
And I love that Becker's such an attentive boyfriend and is putting the others to shame... Perfect!
I've loved every part of this story so thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us! If you feel you want to write another, you know you'll always have an avid reader in me! xx
12/20/2014 c15 5Prawn Crackers
Awww poor Becker!I hope he gets his chance to talk to Jess soon! And poor Jess! Being sick in front of Becker and the team must feel totally embarrassing! It's obviously not her fault, but still...
Emily rocks! :-)
5Prawn CrackersAwww poor Becker!I hope he gets his chance to talk to Jess soon! And poor Jess! Being sick in front of Becker and the team must feel totally embarrassing! It's obviously not her fault, but still...
Emily rocks! :-)
12/20/2014 c15 72DrawnToDarkness
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
And also... CONNOR!
They were having a moment - and so close to potentially having another moment! GAH!
Loved this. I loved Becker's reaction to finding Jess on the floor - and the rest of the team's response to his reaction. Hee. What can I say, I'm a Jecker shipper through and through and this made me completely squee! Love it!
72DrawnToDarknessSqueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
And also... CONNOR!
They were having a moment - and so close to potentially having another moment! GAH!
Loved this. I loved Becker's reaction to finding Jess on the floor - and the rest of the team's response to his reaction. Hee. What can I say, I'm a Jecker shipper through and through and this made me completely squee! Love it!
12/9/2014 c14 5Prawn Crackers
Aww don't apologise! Unlike me, you are updating regularly!
This is such a wonderful story!
I love how the ladies have everything under control! Jess keeping her cool and Emily's grand entry!
Poor Becker is so worried! Hopefully this will propulse him out of the slow lane and trigger some move...
I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! :-)
5Prawn CrackersAww don't apologise! Unlike me, you are updating regularly!
This is such a wonderful story!
I love how the ladies have everything under control! Jess keeping her cool and Emily's grand entry!
Poor Becker is so worried! Hopefully this will propulse him out of the slow lane and trigger some move...
I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! :-)
12/6/2014 c14 Guest
Love this story, having read all fourteen chapters together. Sad to think it might be coming to a close.
Love this story, having read all fourteen chapters together. Sad to think it might be coming to a close.
12/5/2014 c14 72DrawnToDarkness
Eeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Yay for Emily! I love that she was there and stayed in character so she could help save Jess - but poor Jess being hit with the EMD fire!
Cannot wait for more of this story, particularly our lovely Captain's reaction to Jess's fate..!
Love this, and am very excited to read more next week!
72DrawnToDarknessEeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Yay for Emily! I love that she was there and stayed in character so she could help save Jess - but poor Jess being hit with the EMD fire!
Cannot wait for more of this story, particularly our lovely Captain's reaction to Jess's fate..!
Love this, and am very excited to read more next week!
11/16/2014 c13 5Prawn Crackers
Gaaaahhh nooooo! Jess!
Loved the closet scene and comment! LOL
I do wonder, are the Pyroraptors good at arson?
James Lester and his ties! They are kinda the equivakent to weapons. So adjusting his tie must feel like loading his weapon... ;-)
5Prawn CrackersGaaaahhh nooooo! Jess!
Loved the closet scene and comment! LOL
I do wonder, are the Pyroraptors good at arson?
James Lester and his ties! They are kinda the equivakent to weapons. So adjusting his tie must feel like loading his weapon... ;-)
11/12/2014 c13 72DrawnToDarkness
Yay! And also ooooooh!
Firstly, love the way you write action and described the chaos after the anomaly opened - felt like I was watching it happen rather than reading it.
Secondly, oh how I laughed at Abby's "out of the closet" comment to Matt & Becker. Still smiling about it now.
Thirdly - eeeeep! Jess! Go, Becker! I'm on the edge of my seat and biting my fingernails!
Can't wait for more but will be patient as I know it'll be worth it! :)
72DrawnToDarknessYay! And also ooooooh!
Firstly, love the way you write action and described the chaos after the anomaly opened - felt like I was watching it happen rather than reading it.
Secondly, oh how I laughed at Abby's "out of the closet" comment to Matt & Becker. Still smiling about it now.
Thirdly - eeeeep! Jess! Go, Becker! I'm on the edge of my seat and biting my fingernails!
Can't wait for more but will be patient as I know it'll be worth it! :)
11/12/2014 c13 7liliana.esperanza
Glad you found inspiration, so happy that you're continuing with it!
7liliana.esperanzaGlad you found inspiration, so happy that you're continuing with it!
10/14/2014 c12 72DrawnToDarkness
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
Lester! Connor! April's sister! An open anomaly! This certainly doesn't bode well - I agree with our fearful leader!
Love this story so very, very much and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part!
72DrawnToDarknessEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
Lester! Connor! April's sister! An open anomaly! This certainly doesn't bode well - I agree with our fearful leader!
Love this story so very, very much and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part!
10/11/2014 c12 5Prawn Crackers
While, diamonds might be a girl's best friend, for James Lester it's ties! ;-) A sloppy Windsor knot will no doubt cause him a great deal of pain!
Love how Jess can always get away with teasing Lester! :-)
Connor in a suit! That! That image makes me speechless!
This chapter is full of beautiful details and full of Lester's adorable snarkiness! And I can't wait to read the next chapter. I have a nasty feeling that all temporal hell will break lose, may that be prehistoric or future...
5Prawn CrackersWhile, diamonds might be a girl's best friend, for James Lester it's ties! ;-) A sloppy Windsor knot will no doubt cause him a great deal of pain!
Love how Jess can always get away with teasing Lester! :-)
Connor in a suit! That! That image makes me speechless!
This chapter is full of beautiful details and full of Lester's adorable snarkiness! And I can't wait to read the next chapter. I have a nasty feeling that all temporal hell will break lose, may that be prehistoric or future...
9/22/2014 c11 Prawn Crackers
Ohhhh another lovely Leonhard girl! And if we can go by her charming sister April, Cassy sure will be such a sweetheart! ;-)
I'm really looking forward to this private demonstration. How about stylish Helen riding on the back of a hungry, hungry carnivore coming through the "demomaly"? But I'm sure you have something more cunning in store for us!
Love the Becker-Jess scene! Speechless, overprotective Becker is very endearing and revealing much more than he realises...
So looking forward to the next chapter!
Ohhhh another lovely Leonhard girl! And if we can go by her charming sister April, Cassy sure will be such a sweetheart! ;-)
I'm really looking forward to this private demonstration. How about stylish Helen riding on the back of a hungry, hungry carnivore coming through the "demomaly"? But I'm sure you have something more cunning in store for us!
Love the Becker-Jess scene! Speechless, overprotective Becker is very endearing and revealing much more than he realises...
So looking forward to the next chapter!
9/20/2014 c11 72DrawnToDarkness
Yay! I'm glad Jess is okay - and darn it, Matt, couldn't you have let them have their moment?!
Hope Lester's going to be okay - meep!
72DrawnToDarknessYay! I'm glad Jess is okay - and darn it, Matt, couldn't you have let them have their moment?!
Hope Lester's going to be okay - meep!