for Unconventional Intervention7/12/2014 c4 FLUFF-N-UTTER-1
Enjoyed the back story of Jess at uni, nice to see a glimpse of life before ARC. Especially liked Logan's unusual first name and Becker drawing a blank on the LOTR reference. :)
Enjoyed the back story of Jess at uni, nice to see a glimpse of life before ARC. Especially liked Logan's unusual first name and Becker drawing a blank on the LOTR reference. :)
6/27/2014 c4 notloggedin
Hey. Love your story so far! Hopee you update real soon! (My penname's Lyronhalliwell9) as soon as i can be bothered to log in, ill fav/follow this story.
Love it and update soon.
Hey. Love your story so far! Hopee you update real soon! (My penname's Lyronhalliwell9) as soon as i can be bothered to log in, ill fav/follow this story.
Love it and update soon.
6/21/2014 c1 Guest
If someone is generating anomalies then soon they'll get dinosaurs running the streets, civilians fleeing in terror, mass damage , overturned vehicles, smashed buildings and so many innocents will be slaughtered.
Its possible this individual is trying to gather a collection of creatures, just like Leek did in his underground bunker. Hopefully this time no one has to dir to stop this maniac. I never really liked Stephen Hart but his
But wait, if they're all undercover then who'll handle anomaly alerts and incursions? The Special Forces aren't qualified to lock anomalies or stun and contain the animals.
Plus someone needs to run the Anomaly Detection Device besides Jess and they need a temporary replacement for Abby to care for the menagerie.
If someone is generating anomalies then soon they'll get dinosaurs running the streets, civilians fleeing in terror, mass damage , overturned vehicles, smashed buildings and so many innocents will be slaughtered.
Its possible this individual is trying to gather a collection of creatures, just like Leek did in his underground bunker. Hopefully this time no one has to dir to stop this maniac. I never really liked Stephen Hart but his
But wait, if they're all undercover then who'll handle anomaly alerts and incursions? The Special Forces aren't qualified to lock anomalies or stun and contain the animals.
Plus someone needs to run the Anomaly Detection Device besides Jess and they need a temporary replacement for Abby to care for the menagerie.
6/19/2014 c3 
72DrawnToDarkness
Hee! Love the descriptions of Abby & Emily's make overs - and Connor and Matt's reactions to them!
Excited that this is going to be a longish story and really looking forward to see how it progresses!
PS. Your Lester is fantastic as always. Sounded completely like him!
72DrawnToDarknessHee! Love the descriptions of Abby & Emily's make overs - and Connor and Matt's reactions to them!
Excited that this is going to be a longish story and really looking forward to see how it progresses!
PS. Your Lester is fantastic as always. Sounded completely like him!
6/14/2014 c2 DrawnToDarkness
Wait... How did I miss there was a second part posted?! Apologies for that!
But boy oh boy... Jess isn't the only one feeling a little warm ;) From the description, Becker pulls off adorkable (and that's in the dictionary now!) very well and I find myself wishing, not for the first time, that your stories could be made into episodes so I could see it myself.
Loving this so far and can't wait to read more!
Wait... How did I miss there was a second part posted?! Apologies for that!
But boy oh boy... Jess isn't the only one feeling a little warm ;) From the description, Becker pulls off adorkable (and that's in the dictionary now!) very well and I find myself wishing, not for the first time, that your stories could be made into episodes so I could see it myself.
Loving this so far and can't wait to read more!
6/14/2014 c2 58FLUFF-N-UTTER-1
Glad to see an update. Looking forward to more of this little covert operation. :)
58FLUFF-N-UTTER-1Glad to see an update. Looking forward to more of this little covert operation. :)
6/8/2014 c2 5Prawn Crackers
Ohhhhhhh yes!
Nerdy Becker! Ripping his shirt off displaying a super hero B for Super Becker! And his lkvely long lashed hazel eyes! Man the man has the most gorgeous eyes! Ever!
I thoroughly enjoyed the nerd test about episode seven! And how smugly they failed!
I give Mrs Lester more credit than to phone a divorce lawyer... she is probably out-sarcasming him right away.
(I hope to see more nerdy, approachable Becker in the next chapter...after all, he's getting private lessons! :-))
Yay!
5Prawn CrackersOhhhhhhh yes!
Nerdy Becker! Ripping his shirt off displaying a super hero B for Super Becker! And his lkvely long lashed hazel eyes! Man the man has the most gorgeous eyes! Ever!
I thoroughly enjoyed the nerd test about episode seven! And how smugly they failed!
I give Mrs Lester more credit than to phone a divorce lawyer... she is probably out-sarcasming him right away.
(I hope to see more nerdy, approachable Becker in the next chapter...after all, he's getting private lessons! :-))
Yay!
6/4/2014 c1 Prawn Crackers
Firstly, YAY! I'm happy to see you back writing!
I love this plot! I want to see the geeking up of Becker! Who is ever so cute when he's jealous! Loved how Abby and Matt gang up to tease him! And yay for Becker teasing Matt!
I can just see Becker wearing those geek glasses, looking loke Clark Kent. And I just realised that Connor won't have to do anything other than completely being himself...
Your Lester is fabulous!
Firstly, YAY! I'm happy to see you back writing!
I love this plot! I want to see the geeking up of Becker! Who is ever so cute when he's jealous! Loved how Abby and Matt gang up to tease him! And yay for Becker teasing Matt!
I can just see Becker wearing those geek glasses, looking loke Clark Kent. And I just realised that Connor won't have to do anything other than completely being himself...
Your Lester is fabulous!
6/3/2014 c1 58FLUFF-N-UTTER-1
lol... love the image of Becker going undercover as a nerdy science type with taped glasses, a pocket protector and a Big Bang Theory t-shirt. :)
58FLUFF-N-UTTER-1lol... love the image of Becker going undercover as a nerdy science type with taped glasses, a pocket protector and a Big Bang Theory t-shirt. :)
6/2/2014 c1 Aeryn Levia
Interesting. I'm always a fan of Team members bring put in 'fish-out-of-water' situations! More?
Interesting. I'm always a fan of Team members bring put in 'fish-out-of-water' situations! More?
6/1/2014 c1 72DrawnToDarkness
Yay! Another new story from you! And it's off to such an intriguing start!
Can't wait to see the team - especially Jess & Becker - undercover!
72DrawnToDarknessYay! Another new story from you! And it's off to such an intriguing start!
Can't wait to see the team - especially Jess & Becker - undercover!