
12/29/2014 c15 Guest
Awesome story! Waiting for the sequel! Update
Awesome story! Waiting for the sequel! Update
7/1/2014 c13
52Firediva0
This was so good! I am so happy they are finally together and I look forward to the epilouge and continuation of this! It truly is amazing!

This was so good! I am so happy they are finally together and I look forward to the epilouge and continuation of this! It truly is amazing!
6/29/2014 c11
8Akkira Nala
Wow, I love Wisely at this point :3
Hahahahaha what will happen now, with Wisely, Tyki and Kanda working together? :3
Update soon :333
Love the chapter!

Wow, I love Wisely at this point :3
Hahahahaha what will happen now, with Wisely, Tyki and Kanda working together? :3
Update soon :333
Love the chapter!
6/29/2014 c10
52Firediva0
This is good! I like it! Though about ending the story I can't imagine it being done so soon. Like what happens after their found? Who winds up getting Allen? Do they go on the run for the rest of their lives?Their never eventually catched by the order or Earl? When will the order find out Allen didn't kill Link? What will the order do one they have Allen?What lengths would the earl go through in order to get Allen? Just what happened to Road?Why didn't the others try to find Allen? What was the purpose of doing something to Road and so are a lot of plot holes that still need to be cleaned up. It's okay if you end it. It's just I wanted to bring this to your attention. Also I feel like things are a tad rushed but other then that its still good.

This is good! I like it! Though about ending the story I can't imagine it being done so soon. Like what happens after their found? Who winds up getting Allen? Do they go on the run for the rest of their lives?Their never eventually catched by the order or Earl? When will the order find out Allen didn't kill Link? What will the order do one they have Allen?What lengths would the earl go through in order to get Allen? Just what happened to Road?Why didn't the others try to find Allen? What was the purpose of doing something to Road and so are a lot of plot holes that still need to be cleaned up. It's okay if you end it. It's just I wanted to bring this to your attention. Also I feel like things are a tad rushed but other then that its still good.
6/22/2014 c7
1taliatheotaku
I really like it so far! This follows the storyline of the manga really well, and the inner thoughts are really cute *u*) Awww Kanda doesn't know Allen liiiiikes him yet
XD

I really like it so far! This follows the storyline of the manga really well, and the inner thoughts are really cute *u*) Awww Kanda doesn't know Allen liiiiikes him yet
XD