for War changes nothing, War changes everything8/21/2016 c7 Guest
Anorexia is not a purging disorder. Anorexia often comes with bullimia, which is when people purge. Anorexia is just starving yourself. I've had both, so I know.
Anorexia is not a purging disorder. Anorexia often comes with bullimia, which is when people purge. Anorexia is just starving yourself. I've had both, so I know.
8/23/2014 c11 
3Lacila
Im interested in when Ed gets to hear of the war. I bet he'll be sent a letter and the words "You're going to die anyways, might as well get you to do something useful before you do."
3LacilaIm interested in when Ed gets to hear of the war. I bet he'll be sent a letter and the words "You're going to die anyways, might as well get you to do something useful before you do."
7/21/2014 c1 sillyedward
GOOD CHRIST I LOVE IT
GOOD CHRIST I LOVE IT
7/12/2014 c1 allisonwonderland1496
Niiiice:) Poor Ed. And yay for Colonel Bastard on catching him! *secretly wishes it were me he was catching...* ah! it's probably from all those times he picks up his lady friends . Oh Mustang... (marry me) *cough*
Niiiice:) Poor Ed. And yay for Colonel Bastard on catching him! *secretly wishes it were me he was catching...* ah! it's probably from all those times he picks up his lady friends . Oh Mustang... (marry me) *cough*
6/30/2014 c4 Guest
Great story! Love the parental relationship between ed and Roy x
Great story! Love the parental relationship between ed and Roy x
6/6/2014 c4 Guest
You mean we can see the results when it's closed, not the poll itself. If what you wrote was the case, then no one would be able to vote because we couldn't see the poll.
You mean we can see the results when it's closed, not the poll itself. If what you wrote was the case, then no one would be able to vote because we couldn't see the poll.
6/3/2014 c1 Edo
More fluff. OOCness.
More fluff. OOCness.
6/3/2014 c2 thief.apprentice
Okay, the plot seems really interesting, and the only things I think you should work on is your grammar and the pace of the story. It all happened really fast, but you could have spread it out a little more. Now, the grammar wasn't too bad, but I would remember that if you have a new person saying a piece of dialogue, it's a whole new paragraph. Just a little tidbit.
Okay, the plot seems really interesting, and the only things I think you should work on is your grammar and the pace of the story. It all happened really fast, but you could have spread it out a little more. Now, the grammar wasn't too bad, but I would remember that if you have a new person saying a piece of dialogue, it's a whole new paragraph. Just a little tidbit.