
10/7/2014 c1 Guest
it's complicate read when there aren't paragraphs, but you are a excellent writer
it's complicate read when there aren't paragraphs, but you are a excellent writer
9/30/2014 c1 BbyRae
"His hands flailed stupidly at his sides..." Best quote ever, haha! The mental image was just the best and I ended up sketching a picture of that particular scene for the hell of it xD
Aside from that, fantastic story. It was a great read, thanks for that! :'D
"His hands flailed stupidly at his sides..." Best quote ever, haha! The mental image was just the best and I ended up sketching a picture of that particular scene for the hell of it xD
Aside from that, fantastic story. It was a great read, thanks for that! :'D
6/6/2014 c1 minnothebunny
Unbelievable. If I could favorite this 20 times I would. The whole story is well written and the action incredibly hot. So hot.
Unbelievable. If I could favorite this 20 times I would. The whole story is well written and the action incredibly hot. So hot.
6/5/2014 c1
4apenforaprincess
Great writing! Very captivating!... You capture the essence of their characters wonderfully!... I think needs to definitely be some more woodsy mountain play!

Great writing! Very captivating!... You capture the essence of their characters wonderfully!... I think needs to definitely be some more woodsy mountain play!