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8/18/2019 c1 Spacesaver123
O mah lwad
7/25/2018 c1 1TerraKnight123
oops, my last review broke because I added one new line
7/25/2018 c1 TerraKnight123
objects blee e
5/28/2017 c1 Lily
Object shows need more love. I always love a good object show fanfic. I'm writing one called Challenge Chaos.
10/25/2014 c1 makenzy
i feel marshmallow,whenever i see my reflection in the bathroom,i once saw me pinning randy to the floor,tears pouring out from his eyes.i sliced his eyes out of his body,
10/18/2014 c1 ghostvelvet
God... dang. o_o
6/6/2014 c1 3Yakura-chan
I have to say, you did a good job. The only thing that I had a problem with was the dialogue. Most Creepypastas won't have a dialogue because this is suppose to happen in the past. Most creepypasta stories would like to be realistic and write in past tense, like a rough image of what had happened. I don't want to get critical due to the fact this is your creepypasta and your first one as well, but you did do an amazing job with this. :3 *Thumbs Up*

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