for Always with u6/30/2014 c3 Aishwarya R
Wow!What a story! Though it is fiction,it seems real…! Well done! Nice Story with Happy Ending… :)
Wow!What a story! Though it is fiction,it seems real…! Well done! Nice Story with Happy Ending… :)
6/14/2014 c1 Aishwarya R
Hi…Super-duper story! Good going…
But,if u don't mind I want to suggest u 1 thing…If u'll use nouns incase of pronouns wherever necessary,then it'll be better…Because,it's little confusing (especially last passages of 2nd part);as there r 2male&2female characters in d story right now
Plz,take it as a suggesion…& Don't be angry…
I am waiting for next eagerly…! :-)
Hi…Super-duper story! Good going…
But,if u don't mind I want to suggest u 1 thing…If u'll use nouns incase of pronouns wherever necessary,then it'll be better…Because,it's little confusing (especially last passages of 2nd part);as there r 2male&2female characters in d story right now
Plz,take it as a suggesion…& Don't be angry…
I am waiting for next eagerly…! :-)
6/13/2014 c2 reader
Hey…Really nice! Waiting for the next…
:)
Hey…Really nice! Waiting for the next…
:)
6/10/2014 c1 KS fan
Very nice…! Good beginning…!
Plz post d next…
Hurry up!
:)
Very nice…! Good beginning…!
Plz post d next…
Hurry up!
:)
6/9/2014 c1 reader
Nice one…!
But,post d next as soos as possible…
Nice one…!
But,post d next as soos as possible…
6/9/2014 c1 Aishwarya R
Hi…This is really great start…! I Iove Kapil-Sumona together…Plz continue! I'm waitng for next…
Hi…This is really great start…! I Iove Kapil-Sumona together…Plz continue! I'm waitng for next…
6/9/2014 c1 
60girl.with.passion
Oh woow! New Kapil/Sumona fic! :D That's great. Please continue soon hun. :)
60girl.with.passionOh woow! New Kapil/Sumona fic! :D That's great. Please continue soon hun. :)