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6/5/2014 c1 xxThatShyTomboyXx
It might be easier to read if you added more spaces between paragraphs or just more paragraphs. All I could see were four big chunks of words . I don't mean to be mean and I don't want to offend you, but it I'll also make it more appealing to read.

It looks like a good story, I would like to read more. Keep up the good work

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