for Bedtime Stories
26/15/2014 c1 guest
Could you do another chapter please
Could you do another chapter please
6/5/2014 c1 Trapid
I wanna know about Jack punching Hans too! Hahaha! This is totes adorbs! Write more. So cute! :)
I wanna know about Jack punching Hans too! Hahaha! This is totes adorbs! Write more. So cute! :)
6/5/2014 c1 Guest
That was really good!
That was really good!
6/5/2014 c1 Shimmer Shine
He he he! I love it! Please write more!
He he he! I love it! Please write more!
6/5/2014 c1 OptimisticLady
This was super cute the second time around okay? Also you just need a paragraph break between "...finally talk to the strange man." "That's when you..."
Other than that, asdfghjkl. I like cute things that are short. It makes it short and sweet and doesn't overdo it. Jack is cute and Jessica is even cuter. The comment about Hans at the end made me laugh as well :3
This was super cute the second time around okay? Also you just need a paragraph break between "...finally talk to the strange man." "That's when you..."
Other than that, asdfghjkl. I like cute things that are short. It makes it short and sweet and doesn't overdo it. Jack is cute and Jessica is even cuter. The comment about Hans at the end made me laugh as well :3