for The Vanquisher2/16/2020 c1 
12The Ghostly Minion
It would be a fine start to a story, but is lacking as a one shot. It is essentially one scene that leave us having a huge number of questions for which we have no answers.
TGN
12The Ghostly MinionIt would be a fine start to a story, but is lacking as a one shot. It is essentially one scene that leave us having a huge number of questions for which we have no answers.
TGN
1/21/2017 c1 Guest
I would argue that the Dark Load of the prophecy is Dumbledore.
Voldemort only wanted a quick death for Harry, and he was always honest about it.
Dumbledore made sure that Harry had a life so bad he would be willing to die, while pretending to care for Harry.
I would argue that the Dark Load of the prophecy is Dumbledore.
Voldemort only wanted a quick death for Harry, and he was always honest about it.
Dumbledore made sure that Harry had a life so bad he would be willing to die, while pretending to care for Harry.
7/8/2014 c1 sanbeegoldiewhitey
I agree with your Harry. Canon Harry did not kill Dolohov in that London restaurant and Dumbles did not kill the same Dolohov in the battle at the DOM. Later on at the Battle of Hogwarts, Dolohov killed Remus Lupin. Canon Harry was an idiot. And Dumbledore, more so.
I agree with your Harry. Canon Harry did not kill Dolohov in that London restaurant and Dumbles did not kill the same Dolohov in the battle at the DOM. Later on at the Battle of Hogwarts, Dolohov killed Remus Lupin. Canon Harry was an idiot. And Dumbledore, more so.
6/7/2014 c1 Harry1675
It's okay but in the beginning, for future reference, remember to put spacing between your periods and commas
It's okay but in the beginning, for future reference, remember to put spacing between your periods and commas
6/7/2014 c1 1Sparkypotter101
This... was a mess. No grammar, missing words, no plot (although the idea is kinda interesting, I guess)... It isn't written well at all. I'm not trying to be mean, but this looks like it was written by a ten year old then rammed backwords through a word processor. Please, go learn how to type and write a half-decent story before you write another story 'just like that'.
1Sparkypotter101This... was a mess. No grammar, missing words, no plot (although the idea is kinda interesting, I guess)... It isn't written well at all. I'm not trying to be mean, but this looks like it was written by a ten year old then rammed backwords through a word processor. Please, go learn how to type and write a half-decent story before you write another story 'just like that'.