for New Dawn7/23/2014 c4 batla
like the story so far but just want to let you know that this chapter is a repeat of the first chapter
like the story so far but just want to let you know that this chapter is a repeat of the first chapter
7/22/2014 c4 djsmith10186
Okay so far it's good but you just repeated the first chapter. Just thought I'd let you know. Keep up the good work.
Okay so far it's good but you just repeated the first chapter. Just thought I'd let you know. Keep up the good work.
7/22/2014 c4 Guest
Repeated chapter?
Repeated chapter?
7/22/2014 c4 
4fluffypercussionist
I don't mean to be rude or anything, but you reposted chapter 1 as chapter 4
4fluffypercussionistI don't mean to be rude or anything, but you reposted chapter 1 as chapter 4
6/9/2014 c3 Guest
This is quite interesting, I liked it! Please update soon. This story is really entertaining.
This is quite interesting, I liked it! Please update soon. This story is really entertaining.