for Hold onto that hand9/1/2014 c3 The First Star
I don't think I understood the meaning of the ending?
I don't think I understood the meaning of the ending?
8/18/2014 c3 
1prime12
of course this is great and i only noticed one plot twist was amazing and the end of the chapter...hana creeped me out...good morning kiri-chan...*licks lips with a creepy stare*...l...o...l...
1prime12of course this is great and i only noticed one plot twist was amazing and the end of the chapter...hana creeped me out...good morning kiri-chan...*licks lips with a creepy stare*...l...o...l...
8/17/2014 c3 AvidReaderCoffeeDrinker
Awe! That was sweet of him :) . I'm so happy that you're continuing to update! It's a nice story to read and your story ideas are so creative! I think if you got someone to edit a bit for you, the quality will improve- sometimes getting someone to read it out loud helps too. Not that I'm a great writer- I'm still learning and I haven't posted anything on this site. But my sister is, and that's what she tells me when she reads my stuff/papers :) . Anywho, loved the update, and looking forward to more!
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PS: Your very welcome for the reviews! I'll definitely keep them coming for you :)
Awe! That was sweet of him :) . I'm so happy that you're continuing to update! It's a nice story to read and your story ideas are so creative! I think if you got someone to edit a bit for you, the quality will improve- sometimes getting someone to read it out loud helps too. Not that I'm a great writer- I'm still learning and I haven't posted anything on this site. But my sister is, and that's what she tells me when she reads my stuff/papers :) . Anywho, loved the update, and looking forward to more!
I'm cheering for you! -
PS: Your very welcome for the reviews! I'll definitely keep them coming for you :)
7/18/2014 c2 Guest
Please please please update
Please please please update
7/10/2014 c2 AvidReaderCoffeeDrinker
Yay! Thanks for the update :) I think the writing has a better flow in this chapter- nicely done. And I'm so curious as to what will happen next- each moment brings more questions and Kiri is so mysterious! Looking forward to more :)
Yay! Thanks for the update :) I think the writing has a better flow in this chapter- nicely done. And I'm so curious as to what will happen next- each moment brings more questions and Kiri is so mysterious! Looking forward to more :)
6/9/2014 c1 AvidReaderCoffeeDrinker
It's an intriguing idea- will you continue it? :) Interesting way of writing a story- a little scattered, but my imagination has fun filling in the gaps. The movie was great, so I'm happy that someone wrote something for it.
It's an intriguing idea- will you continue it? :) Interesting way of writing a story- a little scattered, but my imagination has fun filling in the gaps. The movie was great, so I'm happy that someone wrote something for it.