for She7/25/2015 c78 lmc123
Don't usually like really short chapters but it worked for this, the pacing, and the telling of the story while always moving forward was well done, liked your writing style and the story, glad it all came to a good place
Don't usually like really short chapters but it worked for this, the pacing, and the telling of the story while always moving forward was well done, liked your writing style and the story, glad it all came to a good place
7/10/2015 c78 Xxdazzled by twilightxX
It's been a while since a fic has made me go through an emotional rollercoaster the way well-written stories are meant to. Loved reading this, thanks for sharing. x
It's been a while since a fic has made me go through an emotional rollercoaster the way well-written stories are meant to. Loved reading this, thanks for sharing. x
12/13/2014 c67 jk
After what he did with Marie...he can go fuck himself. He gives'iz all this shit for what she did as a kid she can't spend her life saying sorry...their grown now and she invites him to eat and all he can do is check out her cousin, and he thinks she's better looking! Well just go fuck Marie and Bella can find a real man! One without a kid and a bitchy sometimes whore named kate
After what he did with Marie...he can go fuck himself. He gives'iz all this shit for what she did as a kid she can't spend her life saying sorry...their grown now and she invites him to eat and all he can do is check out her cousin, and he thinks she's better looking! Well just go fuck Marie and Bella can find a real man! One without a kid and a bitchy sometimes whore named kate
12/13/2014 c53 jk
KAtes a bitch
KAtes a bitch
310/14/2014 c65 Borntocontest
ummm... did Charlie really buy this shit? what happened to his cop's instinct?
ummm... did Charlie really buy this shit? what happened to his cop's instinct?
10/14/2014 c63 Borntocontest
poor Izzy? well, there are two words I never thought I'd hear Rose says :)
poor Izzy? well, there are two words I never thought I'd hear Rose says :)
10/14/2014 c62 Borntocontest
eh, what did she expect? of course it always comes to this. And she did much worse things to him... but he was honest with her, right? that counts for something...
eh, what did she expect? of course it always comes to this. And she did much worse things to him... but he was honest with her, right? that counts for something...