for She8/19/2014 c78 
1Daisy12214
Noooo it can't be the end cant you like idk tell how they get old and the kids get older or something.
1Daisy12214Noooo it can't be the end cant you like idk tell how they get old and the kids get older or something.
8/19/2014 c78 1morena.davidson.3
I love stories that show people can really change. I love stories of 2nd chances and forgiveness. I love stories with children in them. I love stories that have twists I can't predict. This story was wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing. xo
1morena.davidson.3I love stories that show people can really change. I love stories of 2nd chances and forgiveness. I love stories with children in them. I love stories that have twists I can't predict. This story was wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing. xo
8/19/2014 c78 1jansails
This actually reads more realistic that a lot of other stories.
Mainly, because EB decided to take it slow, talk things out, be like a new couple beginning to date instead of having an ugly at times history.
They each wised up, matured, forgave, accepted, & trusted.
Good job!
jansails/jan2
1jansailsThis actually reads more realistic that a lot of other stories.
Mainly, because EB decided to take it slow, talk things out, be like a new couple beginning to date instead of having an ugly at times history.
They each wised up, matured, forgave, accepted, & trusted.
Good job!
jansails/jan2
8/18/2014 c78 2Sunflower Fran
Have to admit, I didn't like it when I started it, but boy oh boy, these two grew up so well, didn't they? I love them now and the little bubble they're in with Sasha and Jimmy.
Adorable, loved it.
2Sunflower FranHave to admit, I didn't like it when I started it, but boy oh boy, these two grew up so well, didn't they? I love them now and the little bubble they're in with Sasha and Jimmy.
Adorable, loved it.
8/18/2014 c78 2Capricorn75
I'm really sad to see this end. It was tough going for a while there, and at various times I wanted to smack some sense into both of them, and then at other points give them hugs. I love a good flawed, realistic character! I hope this jump-starts your writing again, and that I see you again soon in my inbox :-)
2Capricorn75I'm really sad to see this end. It was tough going for a while there, and at various times I wanted to smack some sense into both of them, and then at other points give them hugs. I love a good flawed, realistic character! I hope this jump-starts your writing again, and that I see you again soon in my inbox :-)
8/18/2014 c78 bakergirl24
Good evening Gemmah, I hope all is well with you tonight. I see this is marked complete and no, I did not read the rest. From the reviews below Mamato's I can pretty much figure out how you ended it...So for the last time mentally..."Gag me with a spoon" Wahahahaha. Sorry. Like I said before, I love your work but this one had me crying for completely other reasons. It was from banging my head on my desk.
Mamato, I'm speechless and flattered. Thank you so much. I've always been one to just put it out there and tell it like it is. I love the fact that you do too. Please, please don't ever change that. I think we are a dying breed and I would like to hope most writers out there respect the feedback as long as it's done respectfully.
I hope both of you ladies have a fabulous evening or day, if it's just starting. Gemmah, hope to see more of your writing soon. Take care and peace. T
Good evening Gemmah, I hope all is well with you tonight. I see this is marked complete and no, I did not read the rest. From the reviews below Mamato's I can pretty much figure out how you ended it...So for the last time mentally..."Gag me with a spoon" Wahahahaha. Sorry. Like I said before, I love your work but this one had me crying for completely other reasons. It was from banging my head on my desk.
Mamato, I'm speechless and flattered. Thank you so much. I've always been one to just put it out there and tell it like it is. I love the fact that you do too. Please, please don't ever change that. I think we are a dying breed and I would like to hope most writers out there respect the feedback as long as it's done respectfully.
I hope both of you ladies have a fabulous evening or day, if it's just starting. Gemmah, hope to see more of your writing soon. Take care and peace. T
8/18/2014 c78 mamato
Can I just say I LOVE bakergirl24's reviews? Is she the only one of a handful of readers who really gets it? I bailed a while ago too, but just read her reviews...LOVED THEM! I love it when a reader can see through all the BS and still see the reality, or at least the fallacy's of the characters. To the end...this I/E pairing would just never work. Neither are likeable...and ultimately I just didn't care what happened to them, which is why I bailed. But, I just had to comment that I love that there are readers out there that still speak their mind and are still faithful to what a true B/E pairing SHOULD be, and this wasn't it. It's so refreshing to know it's not just me that sees when a story is not a true E/B ending. Nothing about these characters were true, and bakergirl24, you are my girl!
GemmaH - No offense, but not all stories are for everyone, and this isn't a flame. You keep workin' it, as there is something out there for everyone. This just wasn't my 'cup of tea'.
Can I just say I LOVE bakergirl24's reviews? Is she the only one of a handful of readers who really gets it? I bailed a while ago too, but just read her reviews...LOVED THEM! I love it when a reader can see through all the BS and still see the reality, or at least the fallacy's of the characters. To the end...this I/E pairing would just never work. Neither are likeable...and ultimately I just didn't care what happened to them, which is why I bailed. But, I just had to comment that I love that there are readers out there that still speak their mind and are still faithful to what a true B/E pairing SHOULD be, and this wasn't it. It's so refreshing to know it's not just me that sees when a story is not a true E/B ending. Nothing about these characters were true, and bakergirl24, you are my girl!
GemmaH - No offense, but not all stories are for everyone, and this isn't a flame. You keep workin' it, as there is something out there for everyone. This just wasn't my 'cup of tea'.