for Future to Behold6/23/2014 c4 
27AdamIsmiddle9
Well this is getting a bit boring now. Hopefully the next chapter will be a bit more interesting.
27AdamIsmiddle9Well this is getting a bit boring now. Hopefully the next chapter will be a bit more interesting.
6/23/2014 c3 AdamIsmiddle9
Well I wasn't expecting this at all. I have to admit you surprised me quite a bit here by having them go to a different place in time.
Well I wasn't expecting this at all. I have to admit you surprised me quite a bit here by having them go to a different place in time.
6/22/2014 c2 AdamIsmiddle9
I enjoyed the chapter. I won't lie, your fic is pretty cheap, but I do like it so please come back and write again if not for yourself then for me, your current commenter.
I enjoyed the chapter. I won't lie, your fic is pretty cheap, but I do like it so please come back and write again if not for yourself then for me, your current commenter.
6/8/2014 c1 farha123
This is good please continue and maybe try to add some more of links feeling and thoughts same with malon
This is good please continue and maybe try to add some more of links feeling and thoughts same with malon