
10/6/2022 c15 skylorbaker14
I’m going to wait tell there’s more chapters to read on! I’ve been loving this fanfiction and I binged all the hobbit today! It’s been amazing and I hope there will be more one day, hopefully soon
I’m going to wait tell there’s more chapters to read on! I’ve been loving this fanfiction and I binged all the hobbit today! It’s been amazing and I hope there will be more one day, hopefully soon
9/3/2019 c1 Guest
Use commas and other punctuation.
Check your spelling.
Proof-read your fiction. Properly paragraph dialogue.
What the fuck is this Japanese "Ja Nae [sic]" shit you got here?
Use commas and other punctuation.
Check your spelling.
Proof-read your fiction. Properly paragraph dialogue.
What the fuck is this Japanese "Ja Nae [sic]" shit you got here?
8/31/2019 c15
6Searece
This is so gooood! I hope it's continued someday. Also, seeing their reactions to her Thu'um would be awesome. XD

This is so gooood! I hope it's continued someday. Also, seeing their reactions to her Thu'um would be awesome. XD
8/31/2019 c12 Searece
Ah, wrong guess. Well, I can fantasize, can't I? I enjoyed this chapter a lot! Also Bilbo. Gotta love Bilbo.
Ah, wrong guess. Well, I can fantasize, can't I? I enjoyed this chapter a lot! Also Bilbo. Gotta love Bilbo.
8/31/2019 c11 Searece
I would love a translation as to the Dovahzul in the chapter! And EEEEE she absorbed Smaug's soul. XD I wasn't sure that would happen. And I bet Legolas totally saved her. Gonna go to the next chapter and find out!
I would love a translation as to the Dovahzul in the chapter! And EEEEE she absorbed Smaug's soul. XD I wasn't sure that would happen. And I bet Legolas totally saved her. Gonna go to the next chapter and find out!
12/31/2018 c1 Guest
there is somethings I want to point out, small mistakes but irritating to read.. like defiantly, it should be Definitely, there and their, hoard and horde.. etc.. becareful, you don't want to embarrass yourself as an author..
there is somethings I want to point out, small mistakes but irritating to read.. like defiantly, it should be Definitely, there and their, hoard and horde.. etc.. becareful, you don't want to embarrass yourself as an author..