for An Unexpected Voice12/31/2018 c1 Guest
there is somethings I want to point out, small mistakes but irritating to read.. like defiantly, it should be Definitely, there and their, hoard and horde.. etc.. becareful, you don't want to embarrass yourself as an author..
there is somethings I want to point out, small mistakes but irritating to read.. like defiantly, it should be Definitely, there and their, hoard and horde.. etc.. becareful, you don't want to embarrass yourself as an author..
4/3/2018 c15 DarkChampion
What was up with making her a blushing tween in the end?
It wasn't a bad read, just felt more like an OC instead of the Dragonborn. I get the not wanting to make them OP, but at no moment did she feel like anything other than a welp who had lidya carry her through the fight.
What was up with making her a blushing tween in the end?
It wasn't a bad read, just felt more like an OC instead of the Dragonborn. I get the not wanting to make them OP, but at no moment did she feel like anything other than a welp who had lidya carry her through the fight.
2/19/2018 c15 
3Mumia0813
awe! i cant wait to read more. i can see the begining romance between Tersha and Legolas lol i think Thanril knows about it as well as she does keep asking after him. now Elrond knows too...i belive Elrond see's Tersha as another daughter/pupil. Scheming fathers abound.
3Mumia0813awe! i cant wait to read more. i can see the begining romance between Tersha and Legolas lol i think Thanril knows about it as well as she does keep asking after him. now Elrond knows too...i belive Elrond see's Tersha as another daughter/pupil. Scheming fathers abound.
1/15/2018 c2 pinkdoughtnuts
I'm sorry but I have to stop reading from here. I just don't see the point of her. Reading this whole chapter, she makes no contribution, i could just read my copy of the hobbit.
It's a good idea, but I just can't invest my time into this because I'm just skimming it now.
I'm sorry but I have to stop reading from here. I just don't see the point of her. Reading this whole chapter, she makes no contribution, i could just read my copy of the hobbit.
It's a good idea, but I just can't invest my time into this because I'm just skimming it now.
12/14/2017 c1 Ardahel
Wait did her hair color change? it red here but previously it said it was pitch black
Wait did her hair color change? it red here but previously it said it was pitch black
11/9/2017 c15 guest
love it,great story so far...update soon ! :) :)
love it,great story so far...update soon ! :) :)
10/19/2017 c15 1BloodyAngelForever
This is so amazing! I love the concept of the dovahkin in the Tolkein's universe. :D
1BloodyAngelForeverThis is so amazing! I love the concept of the dovahkin in the Tolkein's universe. :D
10/12/2017 c15 Guest
Love this story, in the English language the only correct plural of dwarf is dwarfs and the adjective is dwarfish. However in the hobbit book Tolkien states for his purposes they will be spelled dwarves and dwarvish. Love story and waiting for updates
Love this story, in the English language the only correct plural of dwarf is dwarfs and the adjective is dwarfish. However in the hobbit book Tolkien states for his purposes they will be spelled dwarves and dwarvish. Love story and waiting for updates
1/10/2017 c6 3SmaugvsDragonBorn
Did you mean to spell 'Dwarfish'? Please dont change it i find it hilarious! In fact that is my new spelling of Dwarvish. because I read it like Dwar-Fish
3SmaugvsDragonBornDid you mean to spell 'Dwarfish'? Please dont change it i find it hilarious! In fact that is my new spelling of Dwarvish. because I read it like Dwar-Fish
8/18/2016 c15 ConanAuriel
as far as i can tell you know what your doing...love this story, keep up the good work! _
as far as i can tell you know what your doing...love this story, keep up the good work! _