for An Unexpected Voice4/24/2016 c10 Arianna Le Fay
great chapter i love your story but have you decided who tersha will end up with? please say thorin and will you follow the cannon ending ?
great chapter i love your story but have you decided who tersha will end up with? please say thorin and will you follow the cannon ending ?
4/24/2016 c11 Mf0012
It really isn't a bad story, but your attention to detail is off at some parts. It was really evident when you had your OC fire the black arrow - the size of a sword - from her bow. I mean c'mon, this isn't Dark Souls lol. Secondly, aren't her normal arrows made of ebony? If that's the case, then ebony isn't steel. Its volcanic glass.
It really isn't a bad story, but your attention to detail is off at some parts. It was really evident when you had your OC fire the black arrow - the size of a sword - from her bow. I mean c'mon, this isn't Dark Souls lol. Secondly, aren't her normal arrows made of ebony? If that's the case, then ebony isn't steel. Its volcanic glass.
31/25/2016 c10 12345678910
Love it so much
Love it so much
1/11/2016 c9 Chris the Metis
Better late than ever but good. It will be awhile until they start had feelings
Better late than ever but good. It will be awhile until they start had feelings
1/11/2016 c9 Dalonige Noquisi
I loved the chapter. Slow burn works for me just fine, but do you plan to do LOTR stories too? I hope so.
I loved the chapter. Slow burn works for me just fine, but do you plan to do LOTR stories too? I hope so.
1/11/2016 c9 TorchmanX
Ive seen all this in the movie and don't need to read it. Best of luck but ill stop reading here.
Ive seen all this in the movie and don't need to read it. Best of luck but ill stop reading here.