for The Fateful Day6/25/2015 c1 Mai
I love it please write the next chapter.
I love it please write the next chapter.
9/28/2014 c1 ruevedette
so sweet please more chapter i really like the plot hehehe thanks
so sweet please more chapter i really like the plot hehehe thanks
8/13/2014 c1 00110022
Needs better formatting and editing, but the plot seems strong enough and you seem to have a good grasp of how your characters interact.
Please use proper grammar and punctuation, it'll make your work much more easy to read and your plot will flow better.
Looking forward to the next installment once these things are fixed ;) good job and good luck.
Needs better formatting and editing, but the plot seems strong enough and you seem to have a good grasp of how your characters interact.
Please use proper grammar and punctuation, it'll make your work much more easy to read and your plot will flow better.
Looking forward to the next installment once these things are fixed ;) good job and good luck.
37/8/2014 c1 VHOPEYAOI
I want the next one now... hhuhuhuhu...
It's really heart-pounding and maybe head-pounding..hahhahaha
Keep it up!
I want the next one now... hhuhuhuhu...
It's really heart-pounding and maybe head-pounding..hahhahaha
Keep it up!
6/10/2014 c1 Guest
please continue this is good I just hope whatever it is that's going on with Akihito he doesn't dies from it
please continue this is good I just hope whatever it is that's going on with Akihito he doesn't dies from it
6/10/2014 c1 Vykki Q
More please
More please
6/10/2014 c1 Lily
It seems good so far. I hope you'll continue writing.
Will he have a fatal disease ? I hope no ( or at least I would like a curable one) . I cried so much reading A secret to my grave by creamymint, I don't want to cry again
It seems good so far. I hope you'll continue writing.
Will he have a fatal disease ? I hope no ( or at least I would like a curable one) . I cried so much reading A secret to my grave by creamymint, I don't want to cry again
6/11/2014 c1 Ijustdon'tcare132
A disease that can't be cured please! I know I might be a kill joy here, but.
A disease that can't be cured please! I know I might be a kill joy here, but.