for Little boy and bouilabaisse girl6/11/2014 c1 
1Sparkypotter101
Very good for a second one-shot, hopefully we can see something more complex soon so we get more creativity. But overall, good :)
1Sparkypotter101Very good for a second one-shot, hopefully we can see something more complex soon so we get more creativity. But overall, good :)
6/11/2014 c1 Slytherin66
This was good I like Harry/Fleur I think they make a good couple.
Harry was wise to consider Moody the one who entered him into the Tournament as each year the DADA teacher is a danger to Harry.
Dumbledore does not like his students being manhandled yet he was very rough with Harry.
I don't think Hermione would resent Fleur so I can't see them getting on but without the influence of the Weasley's maybe Hermione would be less nasty.
A good point about the Horcrux Riddle took a big risk using them and he did die once.
Thanks for giving us an ending beyond Hogwart's.
This was good I like Harry/Fleur I think they make a good couple.
Harry was wise to consider Moody the one who entered him into the Tournament as each year the DADA teacher is a danger to Harry.
Dumbledore does not like his students being manhandled yet he was very rough with Harry.
I don't think Hermione would resent Fleur so I can't see them getting on but without the influence of the Weasley's maybe Hermione would be less nasty.
A good point about the Horcrux Riddle took a big risk using them and he did die once.
Thanks for giving us an ending beyond Hogwart's.
6/10/2014 c1 witchofdathomir
not bad for your second one shot. Quite cheesy, but at least you tried. Hope to see more fics from you soon. Hopefully timetravel Harry/Fleur/Bella xD
not bad for your second one shot. Quite cheesy, but at least you tried. Hope to see more fics from you soon. Hopefully timetravel Harry/Fleur/Bella xD