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for strong is a hidden broken heart

4/19/2020 c1 A
I really like it! For a sequel? Yes, definitely! But only if you want. Thank you for your story!
10/24/2014 c1 4songofhopeandhonor
don't mind me, just slowly working my way through your fics )

so where can i start? like your sakuhina/team 7 piece, this was evocative and sad and poetic. you did a great job of getting into sasucake's angsty little head, you made him very vulnerable and human. which he is, of course, but a lot of people seem to miss that. his reflections on sakura and the others were absolutely heartbreaking ("friend, she deserves that much"), and his acknowledging that her emotions are her strength - always happy to see attention paid to that aspect of sakura's character.

sasuke trying and failing to write an apology, then expressing himself with pictures instead - loved that transition. and that little bit about him being jealous of sai, again, loved it.

lovely job!
8/13/2014 c1 Redbird688
Ooh nice story! Nice descriptive writing ;) please do continue!
6/12/2014 c1 7PetalMedic
I love it so far. You should really do a sequel. Maybe focusing on Sakura? I don't know, but whatever you decide, I'm sure it'll be awesome!
6/11/2014 c1 Violet91
This is really good. I'd love a sequel!

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