for Truth Behind the Words4/9/2016 c1 Guest
He, I liked that story. It was good enough to make me ignore the lemony-part, which is always a great sign! So, yea, nicely done mate. Characterisation and dialogue was pretty well written and the flashbacks were an interesting and enjoyable idea. I hope you write more like that for these characters! :D
Ps: I think (?) you meant to write Bruder and not Brüder. Brüder is plural, but from what I understand he only adresses Ludwig, which means you should be using the singular, which is Bruder. Also, it should be capitalized, because in German, all nouns are. For some reason. It's not really important but I thought I'd mention it. :b
He, I liked that story. It was good enough to make me ignore the lemony-part, which is always a great sign! So, yea, nicely done mate. Characterisation and dialogue was pretty well written and the flashbacks were an interesting and enjoyable idea. I hope you write more like that for these characters! :D
Ps: I think (?) you meant to write Bruder and not Brüder. Brüder is plural, but from what I understand he only adresses Ludwig, which means you should be using the singular, which is Bruder. Also, it should be capitalized, because in German, all nouns are. For some reason. It's not really important but I thought I'd mention it. :b
3/20/2016 c1 
10windalchemist001
This was such a good story I was able to ingore the notp in the backound, which is very hard to do but this story really pulled at the heart strings
10windalchemist001This was such a good story I was able to ingore the notp in the backound, which is very hard to do but this story really pulled at the heart strings
2/12/2016 c1 6Narutodays
That was an absolutely brilliant story! You should definitely be really proud of this :) emotional and gripping plot- please keep writing!
6NarutodaysThat was an absolutely brilliant story! You should definitely be really proud of this :) emotional and gripping plot- please keep writing!
6/7/2015 c1 Andy
I am now EXTREMELY addicted to jealous! Gilbert. Oh dear.
I am now EXTREMELY addicted to jealous! Gilbert. Oh dear.
4/13/2015 c1 Guest
Thank you for writing this, I loved reading this so much.
Thank you for writing this, I loved reading this so much.
2/24/2015 c1 Guest
omg I felt that Oww. I cried so cute. I love this story.
omg I felt that Oww. I cried so cute. I love this story.
12/2/2014 c1 186AlistaireInWonderland
You did such a fantastic job on this! I couldn't keep my eyes off of it! :)
186AlistaireInWonderlandYou did such a fantastic job on this! I couldn't keep my eyes off of it! :)
11/11/2014 c1 Riilustra -Your Sweetest SIN
Wow four months..! I love it! I honestly do, most stories I read, I would get bored of them because I knew what was going to happen and why, at first I thought that your story was going to be like that but I was wrong. You kept me reading and I enjoy that :D
Hopefully you write more of these two (I love these two characters), I really enjoyed the story and plot you planned out during the four month period :D
Thank You. (Sorry the review isn't longer, I'm just tired at the moment and probably cause I'm cold right now).
030
Wow four months..! I love it! I honestly do, most stories I read, I would get bored of them because I knew what was going to happen and why, at first I thought that your story was going to be like that but I was wrong. You kept me reading and I enjoy that :D
Hopefully you write more of these two (I love these two characters), I really enjoyed the story and plot you planned out during the four month period :D
Thank You. (Sorry the review isn't longer, I'm just tired at the moment and probably cause I'm cold right now).
030
10/13/2014 c1 8adoropomodoro
Gaah, I love it. It's perfect in so many ways, you've done a great job with it.
8adoropomodoroGaah, I love it. It's perfect in so many ways, you've done a great job with it.
9/16/2014 c1 Lily smith
Omg please don't let this stay a one shot make more chapters please
Omg please don't let this stay a one shot make more chapters please
7/20/2014 c1 14Nihonko
your fanfic wasnt long. Was HUGE! Sometimes i didn't get it. But i liked the sex part (i think Roddy wouln't said all the things that he said though) and the end *.* the were all lovey-dovey.
14Nihonkoyour fanfic wasnt long. Was HUGE! Sometimes i didn't get it. But i liked the sex part (i think Roddy wouln't said all the things that he said though) and the end *.* the were all lovey-dovey.
6/27/2014 c1 Zipit-Cinderella
Wow, this one strikes you right in the heart! Amazing how you worked all the little peices together - and I think it's a great way with the jumping between past and present; things make a little more sense as one reads along.
A simply wonderful story, down to the blush and awkwardness!
Zipit
Wow, this one strikes you right in the heart! Amazing how you worked all the little peices together - and I think it's a great way with the jumping between past and present; things make a little more sense as one reads along.
A simply wonderful story, down to the blush and awkwardness!
Zipit
6/18/2014 c1 3violonforte
I agree! The HUGE Misunderstanding! And, hmm... I think it was Gilbert who was more oblivious than Roderich in the end. It's funny how practically nobody listens to Roddy, but everyone's putting words that aren't even true into his mouth! Haha. Poor kid.
Anyway, great story! I love all the humor involved and just the feeling of ARGH, GIL, WHAT ARE YOU DOING JUST ARGHHH I CAN'T EVEN WHYYYYY? To be honest, I thought that the drunk driver at the beginning of your story was Gilbert, though. It's great that it wasn't. Heehee.
3violonforteI agree! The HUGE Misunderstanding! And, hmm... I think it was Gilbert who was more oblivious than Roderich in the end. It's funny how practically nobody listens to Roddy, but everyone's putting words that aren't even true into his mouth! Haha. Poor kid.
Anyway, great story! I love all the humor involved and just the feeling of ARGH, GIL, WHAT ARE YOU DOING JUST ARGHHH I CAN'T EVEN WHYYYYY? To be honest, I thought that the drunk driver at the beginning of your story was Gilbert, though. It's great that it wasn't. Heehee.