for Two Tortured Souls5/14/2015 c17 LifeIsAGreatAdventure
Great ending line! I would change "not affordable" to "expendible". Beyond this nice job. Thanks for your hard work on this. Looking forward to the next installment of this and your H/F story.
Great ending line! I would change "not affordable" to "expendible". Beyond this nice job. Thanks for your hard work on this. Looking forward to the next installment of this and your H/F story.
2/17/2015 c7 harryxbella
Dear god after that "love takes only a moment" part I fucking lost it and burst into tears. Thanks a lot charles
Dear god after that "love takes only a moment" part I fucking lost it and burst into tears. Thanks a lot charles
2/17/2015 c16 
3Acolyte of the Blood Moon
I loved it. Very tense chapter, but you dissolved it in the end. Thanks, I hate cliffhangers.
3Acolyte of the Blood MoonI loved it. Very tense chapter, but you dissolved it in the end. Thanks, I hate cliffhangers.
2/17/2015 c16 3ncpfan
Good chapter. The only complaint I have is that the last portion where Bella AK'ed him and then kissed him after he came back felt a little rushed. There could have been more expression of Bella's relief that he was still alive, I thought. Anywho, still having fun with this story, and looking forward to the next chapter.
3ncpfanGood chapter. The only complaint I have is that the last portion where Bella AK'ed him and then kissed him after he came back felt a little rushed. There could have been more expression of Bella's relief that he was still alive, I thought. Anywho, still having fun with this story, and looking forward to the next chapter.
2/17/2015 c3 ThunderClaw03
What about Harry and Bella and maybe Hermione if they can get her away from some people, train to become animagus update soon
What about Harry and Bella and maybe Hermione if they can get her away from some people, train to become animagus update soon