for A New Start RE-WRITTEN as ASSOC7/30/2022 c11 Guest
see ya Sunstreaker see ya Sideswipe.
see ya Sunstreaker see ya Sideswipe.
7/30/2022 c9 Guest
oooh... fiddilsticks end you so did not just call Sunstreaker sunny he hates that nick name almost as much as he does sunflower.
oooh... fiddilsticks end you so did not just call Sunstreaker sunny he hates that nick name almost as much as he does sunflower.
7/30/2022 c8 Guest
Hoh boy... uh I for one don't think that's a very good idea the twins are hyper enough as it is with or without energon treats. and it may or may not make Jazz go into a cybertronian sized huge sugar rush too like as in all three of them though that is. and if that said thing does ever happen good luck trying to catch them all when their like this.
Hoh boy... uh I for one don't think that's a very good idea the twins are hyper enough as it is with or without energon treats. and it may or may not make Jazz go into a cybertronian sized huge sugar rush too like as in all three of them though that is. and if that said thing does ever happen good luck trying to catch them all when their like this.
7/30/2022 c4 Guest
whoa! where'd she ever learn on how to use a freaking literal spoon as a wrench!? either she had learned this kind of skill on her own or she had been hanging around the doc bot too much.
whoa! where'd she ever learn on how to use a freaking literal spoon as a wrench!? either she had learned this kind of skill on her own or she had been hanging around the doc bot too much.
7/30/2022 c3 Guest
nothing looked misspelled to me on the pages that I just had recently read. unless you count for my own spelling errors though. {:( I practically sometimes spell things like as if I am still two years old for crying out loud. sure, I can write good but... my words don't exactly stay on the line of the page for like when I write it.
nothing looked misspelled to me on the pages that I just had recently read. unless you count for my own spelling errors though. {:( I practically sometimes spell things like as if I am still two years old for crying out loud. sure, I can write good but... my words don't exactly stay on the line of the page for like when I write it.
7/30/2022 c2 Guest
run jazz run! lol xd.
run jazz run! lol xd.
1/9/2018 c13 Guest
Hope you'll be able to continue!
Hope you'll be able to continue!
11/25/2017 c10 LoveAngel5952
Pleases update this story soon and I hope your did enjoy your thanksgiving and black Friday shopping
Pleases update this story soon and I hope your did enjoy your thanksgiving and black Friday shopping
5/16/2017 c1 
20Aeonmaster Aeroza
Well, it's good the way it is. Just fix the errors and stuff and continue it the way it currently is. It's at least if I can rate it: 4/5 stars.
20Aeonmaster AerozaWell, it's good the way it is. Just fix the errors and stuff and continue it the way it currently is. It's at least if I can rate it: 4/5 stars.
12/26/2016 c2 LoveAngel5952
Please come back to us we miss you so much it been like a year when you were gone, show us a sign that you're alive and haven't giving up on your story's Please I know deep down your want to continued your story and don't ever give up on yourself and your story's, So Please come back to us and wish you and your family a happy holidays and happy the day after Christmas.
Please come back to us we miss you so much it been like a year when you were gone, show us a sign that you're alive and haven't giving up on your story's Please I know deep down your want to continued your story and don't ever give up on yourself and your story's, So Please come back to us and wish you and your family a happy holidays and happy the day after Christmas.
10/29/2016 c9 Guest
I know that's Silas. Are you telling me he's... Man, I can't even finish the sentence.
I know that's Silas. Are you telling me he's... Man, I can't even finish the sentence.
8/20/2016 c9 Guest
Don't tell me! Is Silas Emz's...
Don't tell me! Is Silas Emz's...
12/25/2015 c15 LoveAngel5952
Hope you update this soon and Wish you a merry Christmas to you and to your family hope you enjoy the holidays
Hope you update this soon and Wish you a merry Christmas to you and to your family hope you enjoy the holidays