for When Barricades Arise1/17/2015 c8 IQ4730
Perfection. The portrayal of Javert was amazing. He really does feel remorse about this whole riot. Great job!
Perfection. The portrayal of Javert was amazing. He really does feel remorse about this whole riot. Great job!
1/17/2015 c7 IQ4730
Nice twist in the story. Real bullets just make everything a wee more interesting. It'a great. I can't eait to read more!
Nice twist in the story. Real bullets just make everything a wee more interesting. It'a great. I can't eait to read more!
1/17/2015 c4 IQ4730
Ah, the tension is high. I really like the tension between Grantaire and Enjolras. I can't wait to see how this will turn out.
Ah, the tension is high. I really like the tension between Grantaire and Enjolras. I can't wait to see how this will turn out.
1/17/2015 c3 IQ4730
Wow, the President is certainly...audacious with his opinions. He is clearly not afraid to voice what he thinks. Anyway, you did a great job with this chapter. Keep up the good work, yes?
Wow, the President is certainly...audacious with his opinions. He is clearly not afraid to voice what he thinks. Anyway, you did a great job with this chapter. Keep up the good work, yes?
1/17/2015 c2 IQ4730
The emotions are written beautifully. The depth in which the emotions are explained are amazing. Enjolras is a wee intimdating when he fires up in passion. I love the way you displayed him. I can actually feel the unity of the students.
The emotions are written beautifully. The depth in which the emotions are explained are amazing. Enjolras is a wee intimdating when he fires up in passion. I love the way you displayed him. I can actually feel the unity of the students.
1/17/2015 c1 IQ4730
"We're going to build a barricade."
This is as worthy as a thesis in an analytical. That was a terrible simile. I meant to say that this one sentence brought the entire chapter together. I also cannot fathom Éponine's rage or Feuilly's. Great job!
"We're going to build a barricade."
This is as worthy as a thesis in an analytical. That was a terrible simile. I meant to say that this one sentence brought the entire chapter together. I also cannot fathom Éponine's rage or Feuilly's. Great job!
12/4/2014 c2 Ghost
Gavroche is supposed to be around 10-12, not 5 :)
Gavroche is supposed to be around 10-12, not 5 :)
7/6/2014 c3 
5CelestialFlower
Yay thank-you for updating! The president is such a jerk, but really well characterised and Javert is so interesting in this. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
5CelestialFlowerYay thank-you for updating! The president is such a jerk, but really well characterised and Javert is so interesting in this. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
7/6/2014 c2 CelestialFlower
This is so good! (like let's-start-a-revolution-right-now level amazing). Please keep going, I really want to read more of this :)
This is so good! (like let's-start-a-revolution-right-now level amazing). Please keep going, I really want to read more of this :)