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10/18/2018 c6 9onyxdepthsandcrimsonstains
As I was beginning to read this story, I remembered when we went out to this restaurant, with the birch trees inside, and what a lovely evening it was and now I just read the authors note to this chapter and laughed out loud xD
Denna is as always, spot on. "I didn't need to know that." lmao - I love her (and Cara). Their interactions are just precious. The leathers, for roleplay, were a very nice touch. BUT DENNA IS HURTING. (How dare you..) xxx m_d
10/18/2018 c3 onyxdepthsandcrimsonstains
Okay... so I'm re-reading this, bc thank the heavens for my very forgetful mind, it's like a completely new story haha.. (My unhealthy Denna attachment, as I had to realize-is still a full-blown obsession). I'm grinning like a fool since chapter one and I wanted to read this in its entirety before I leave a comment, but then you put DENNA IN A SUIT and now I'm hyperventilating. (OH MY GOD JUST IMAGINE THE HOTNESS). I still love this to pieces and it makes my heart throb a little faster, I'm already feeling a little too warm and I have way too many feelings involving a certain blonde... ;) I know, I probably said this, when I read this the first time, but thank you so much!
xxx m_d
8/3/2015 c8 7Till the fat lady sings
Hey there,

I finally got around to reading this, as per your recommendation on LiveJournal and man, I absolutely loved it!

Was great to see Denna like this - because there is a vulnerability to the character that I think is not exploited often enough. And Cara and Kahlan coddling her? That definitely made my day.

Not gonna lie, I half expected this to end with a big, happy living/relationship arrangement between all 3 and while I don't normally think such arrangements can work (for long), I totally think it would have in your story. They were just this great together, all three of them.

Loved it, loved it, loved it! Thank you for writing and sharing.

PS: Is the Lewis in Denna Lewis a nod to Lauren Lewis? Because I'd like to think it is, but that may be just my Lost Girl fangirlish obsession talking.
2/20/2015 c8 tailog
That was a great ending, I really like your fanfics, I'm hoping you will keep doing Cara and Kahlan's stories, they're always fun and amazing.
Keep doing great job and stay awesome!
Btw, are you going to continue The life of Cara? Just out of curiosity, I laughed a lot with it.
2/16/2015 c8 9onyxdepthsandcrimsonstains
"Oh god Denna, yes..." I lost my shit right there ;) also, the Leathers were a nice touch. Thank you for taking us on that great journey dear one. It's quite different from what I expected, not in a bad way of course. It was nice to see the growing friendship between Cara, Kahlan and Denna and how it helped her through this rather dark and difficult time. Thanks a lot for sharing and finally finishing it! XD although now my one thing is gone which I could still look forward too, the one story that was still out there, keeping them alive. But maybe I can bribe you to write more at some point ;) (I'll be sure to try:p)
2/10/2015 c8 katvrah
LOL that was really funny , Kahlan hearing her sister getting it on ! Thank you for writing this epiloge . I am definitely looking forward to another story from you .
1/15/2015 c7 Guest
hey, nooooo the end nooooooo. Keep doing stories
happy 2015
1/14/2015 c7 6chickinwhite
Aww, that was agood read! Though I wish you would continue with it, I understand that you feel like leaving it here... (Though, I wouldnt mind an epilogue, of course *nods sternly* - perhaps one for every month later? *grins*)
I loved this little journey. You have quite a voice for emotions, for th epain and th efears, for all the psychological parts here. It sounded true, and was very well written!
Thanks for sharing!
Stay awesome! :)
*winks*
1/12/2015 c7 katvrah
Hey there whats up ? Is this story seriously over ? It seems like you skiped like 30 chapters or smt ! I mean Denna is fine now and that was the main concern but still I cant help but think that you hurried to end it . Anyway of course I would like an epiloge and another story from you . Take care .
1/12/2015 c7 21averyschaefer
Woah, I'm surprised. The way that it was going I thought that Denna, Cara and Kahlan was going to have a poly relationship. It might not have been the most realistic, but both Kahlan and Cara actions sometimes hinted that they were attracted to Denna. But I'm glad Denna is well on her way to a healthy recovery and Denee is there to help her mature romantically into a healthy, happy individual capable of giving and receiving love.

I vote for epilogue also. I mean, you just gotta! It'll be mean not to lol
1/12/2015 c7 GISA103
Wow this chapter was very good please more...
1/3/2015 c6 AlsethGosia
OMG noooo, please update soon
12/15/2014 c6 To lazy to login
Omg, whats he doing there. No! Get him out, hes destroying all the progress. I hope by some miracle someone finds him and kicks his ass. I had the terrible idea that he might be her new neighbor. What horrible karma is needed for this to happen :(. Poor Denna.

About my username, I think its FFaddict? I cant believe I dont remember that, anyway I' ve reviewd before and follow this fic with much enthusiasm. Thank you!
12/14/2014 c6 GISA103
What! Poor Denna I want that Cara go back there and kick his ass and save the day:) and please more of this wonderful tale.
12/13/2014 c6 tailog
By the gods this is so great, aesome hook btw, can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work and stay awesome!
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