
3/26/2016 c5 KasaiViperPit
:D It's so good so far!
Oh gosh Sora and Natsu would be adorable 3 you should totally update!
but it's okay if you're too busy '
:D It's so good so far!
Oh gosh Sora and Natsu would be adorable 3 you should totally update!
but it's okay if you're too busy '
10/8/2014 c5 Rajo
Great seeing this story through natsu's pov about his own life. We can see what he felt and thought in those moments. :)
Great seeing this story through natsu's pov about his own life. We can see what he felt and thought in those moments. :)
10/8/2014 c5 empty to be deleted
Oh god...I'm fairly certain Sora's gonna die, and I'm gonna be really sad when/if that happens
Oh god...I'm fairly certain Sora's gonna die, and I'm gonna be really sad when/if that happens
10/8/2014 c5
28Luciel-San
I really like this series Never though Sora was gay, and I like that, because many people make fun of them and here you show how they can still have friends and live a normal live! I hope you update soon!

I really like this series Never though Sora was gay, and I like that, because many people make fun of them and here you show how they can still have friends and live a normal live! I hope you update soon!
8/20/2014 c3 Riz is awesome
Hey i actually like this even though its a bit sad and bloody but i still am interested so please keep on updating.
Hey i actually like this even though its a bit sad and bloody but i still am interested so please keep on updating.
8/5/2014 c3 disgurlruvs
H-How! How is it that this is a tragedy and angst genre yet you throw in this one humorous sentence and it can beat a whole story with a genre of humor?! What is you secret?!
But i like how this is connected to the main story sporting a lot of potential. Maybe this story will become even more in the future?
H-How! How is it that this is a tragedy and angst genre yet you throw in this one humorous sentence and it can beat a whole story with a genre of humor?! What is you secret?!
But i like how this is connected to the main story sporting a lot of potential. Maybe this story will become even more in the future?
6/24/2014 c2 Hikari Sanju
Sorry about that, I didn't exactly mean to hurt your feelings. I meant for that to be a joke. Your side-story is coming along pretty well too, though it could use just a little bit more detail and maybe less entries if you're too lazy to write that much. Update soon, and try to leave the reviewing to us readers :-).
Sorry about that, I didn't exactly mean to hurt your feelings. I meant for that to be a joke. Your side-story is coming along pretty well too, though it could use just a little bit more detail and maybe less entries if you're too lazy to write that much. Update soon, and try to leave the reviewing to us readers :-).
6/21/2014 c1 Guest
I like the story so far please continue
I like the story so far please continue
6/23/2014 c1 Hikari Sanju
What kind of person reviews their own story? T_T. Although, I do agree with you, this story is OK, pretty dark, but ok.
What kind of person reviews their own story? T_T. Although, I do agree with you, this story is OK, pretty dark, but ok.